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The Lark and the Wren by Mercedes Lackey
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Aug 05, 2011

it was ok
bookshelves: fantasy-sf, read-in-2011, read-since-august-2006
Read from August 02 to 05, 2011

Lackey utterly ignores the old advice to show, not tell. The book suffers for it.

And the pacing in this thing is an utter mess. The plot meanders and stumbles and wheezes along and is just weirdly disjointed.

There are germs of something better here, but this is like a rough draft that hasn't been pared and fleshed out and thoroughly edited.
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