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Ponies
by Kij Johnson
by Kij Johnson
The story is available here. Go read, I'll wait -- it'll take you less than four minutes.
Yeah, I need someone to explain to me what's so brilliant about this. Because it's being talked about like it's this amazing, groundbreaking thing, and I'm reading a controlled and perfectly constructed but ultimately shallow parable about dreams and fitting in.
I mean, it's very well done, obviously -- the archetypal TopGirl and everyoneLikesHerGirl, the cartoonishly nauseating violence. That moment where the incarnation of Barbara's dreams has more defiance than Barbara does. The way this is not just a story about conforming yourself but conforming your -- actually, you know, you could say it's also about conforming your sensawunda.
But at the end, I'm just going so? And? Yes? This is news? My girlfriend suggests, after throwing herself on the sword and reading some of the comments at Tor.com, that most people who are blown away by the story are people who haven't ever spent time thinking about these things. I find this deeply depressing. That women could have lived through these rituals -- because most of us did, in one form or another -- and never know it, even years later.
But, sincerely. Am I missing something here? Is there something else going on with this story?
Yeah, I need someone to explain to me what's so brilliant about this. Because it's being talked about like it's this amazing, groundbreaking thing, and I'm reading a controlled and perfectly constructed but ultimately shallow parable about dreams and fitting in.
I mean, it's very well done, obviously -- the archetypal TopGirl and everyoneLikesHerGirl, the cartoonishly nauseating violence. That moment where the incarnation of Barbara's dreams has more defiance than Barbara does. The way this is not just a story about conforming yourself but conforming your -- actually, you know, you could say it's also about conforming your sensawunda.
But at the end, I'm just going so? And? Yes? This is news? My girlfriend suggests, after throwing herself on the sword and reading some of the comments at Tor.com, that most people who are blown away by the story are people who haven't ever spent time thinking about these things. I find this deeply depressing. That women could have lived through these rituals -- because most of us did, in one form or another -- and never know it, even years later.
But, sincerely. Am I missing something here? Is there something else going on with this story?
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Jul 31, 2011 09:14am
Huh, this is the first I've heard of the story. It is well done for the reasons you mention, but I got to the end and had the same reaction you did. "So? Obviously that's how it ends."
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It was up for the Nebula and Hugo, and suddenly everyone was all quavery-voiced about it. I was feeling kind of left out. But somewhat validated now in that response.
The comments at Tor are kind of adorable, everyone trying to explain what it means. I want to pat them all on the head: "Yes, it's a metaphor for childhood! And parenthood! And female genital mutilation!"Because it is all that -- welcome to fiction! -- but I don't need a metaphor to explain those things to me. And I guess that's why I am just okay with this story rather than amazed by it.
I don't think this story's enthusiasts are describing it as groundbreaking or revolutionary. The opposite. She takes a worn-out theme and rewrites it in an unusual way. Both the brevity and the childlike creepiness of it is skilful. That makes it entirely worth the nominations.

