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His Mysterious Lady by Janelle Daniels
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Dec 10, 11

bookshelves: historical, romance
Read on August 01, 2011

It has an appealing cover and it sounds good in the summary. But it ends there. I rolled my eyes so many times, I actually hurt them. No joke. My right eye aches from all the rolling around.

The idea is good, but it's badly executed. First of all, given the type of plot, this should have been much longer, giving the time to build up the plot and delve deeper into the characters.

Given the rushed feel of this book, there were major gaps in the plot, and no way were the characters believable. Nor did I connect to the characters. They were too bony, and desperately need some meat to them.

A good idea, but badly executed. Should be taken down and heavily rewritten.
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