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Airborne by Constance Sharper
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Jul 04, 2011

it was ok

** spoiler alert ** This book.
It sounds totally interesting, right?
Like a good teenage fantasy read?
NO.
i was disappointed. SO VERY DISAPPOINTED. The main character really is a likable character though, and she struggles through a great adventure. But there were toooooo many equally unlikable parts to this book. The main romance, the harpie boy, is...oddly developed...like umm...WHERE DID IT SUDDENLY COME TO BE? it just -BAM- appeared.
Also- Mr. Harpie-- he's engaged.
woops. did i let that slip?
OH WAIT. he tells you that in the beginning so it MUST not be that important... o.O WHAT? VERY IMPORTANT IF YOU HAPPEN TO BE FLIRTING WITH OUR PROTAGONIST MR. HARPIE.
and the writing....
oh dear.
i write better.
my brother writes better.
my grandmother writes better.
its called sentence fluency. diversity.
sorry but thats the ugly truth.

:p
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message 1: by Lillian (new) - added it

Lillian Hong I don't wanna come off as rude, but I'm reading your comment, and when I came across the line "i write better" I coulnd't help laughing. You need to open your eyes a little more; you had more grammar errors than a monkey smashing on the keyboard.


Caity hahaa oh wow i appreciate the comparison. If i was writing for real you'd know it first of all, and it was a review not an essay ...as in not serious. did you notice the extensive use of CAPS too?
but thanks anyway!


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