Jun 24, 11
Read from June 20 to 24, 2011
The book has an original concept, and the author makes an effort to explore what it would be like to live in that world. Unfortunately, it's a completely stupid concept, and the author makes no effort to explain why people would go along with it: it just makes everyone's lives more difficult, with no benefits in return. Also, he hasn't really thought through all the implications of his idea, and he's inconsistent in his portrayal of the Breach. I've read worse stories, but this made me angry.