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Touch the Dark (Cassandra Palmer, #1)
by Karen Chance (Goodreads Author)
by Karen Chance (Goodreads Author)
Quinn's review
bookshelves: urban-fantasy, library-book
Dec 30, 11
bookshelves: urban-fantasy, library-book
Read from December 23 to 27, 2011
2.5 stars
Sometimes when you're chatting away on GR or lurking on someone's feed, you see character pairings mentioned all over the place. You know what I mean - Cat and Bones, Kate and Curran, Eve and Roarke etc. etc. In fact, that's what got me started on the Kate Daniels series, and that worked out really well for me. Cassie and Pritkin? Not so much.
Touch the Dark is one big info-dump with a plot on the side. It was drowning in narrative with precious little dialogue to break things up. Every time I turned the page and saw wall to wall block typing I would groan, knowing there was more endless info-dumps to come before the story would progress an inch. What little dialogue there was was constantly interrupted for more info-dumping.
This was a real slog to read. It would normally take me around two days to read a book of this size - this one took me five (and while not working to-boot), and I really had to push and force myself to keep reading.
The shame of it is, I think there was potential here. I actually didn't mind the story, and might even have enjoyed it were it written in a different way. Some of the characters were also quite intriguing - sadly, Pritkin was not one of them. Clearly he must show some massive improvement as the series progresses, because there was nothing appealing about him here. I'd probably be more happy at this stage to know that this was the last we see of him.
I'm aware that some readers compare this series to the Anita Blake series. For what it's worth, I haven't read that series so my opinion was in no way influenced by that. I've also heard that the series does improve, so I'll give it one more shot. But if the next book makes me feel like I'm reading underwater, that'll be it.
Sometimes when you're chatting away on GR or lurking on someone's feed, you see character pairings mentioned all over the place. You know what I mean - Cat and Bones, Kate and Curran, Eve and Roarke etc. etc. In fact, that's what got me started on the Kate Daniels series, and that worked out really well for me. Cassie and Pritkin? Not so much.
Touch the Dark is one big info-dump with a plot on the side. It was drowning in narrative with precious little dialogue to break things up. Every time I turned the page and saw wall to wall block typing I would groan, knowing there was more endless info-dumps to come before the story would progress an inch. What little dialogue there was was constantly interrupted for more info-dumping.
This was a real slog to read. It would normally take me around two days to read a book of this size - this one took me five (and while not working to-boot), and I really had to push and force myself to keep reading.
The shame of it is, I think there was potential here. I actually didn't mind the story, and might even have enjoyed it were it written in a different way. Some of the characters were also quite intriguing - sadly, Pritkin was not one of them. Clearly he must show some massive improvement as the series progresses, because there was nothing appealing about him here. I'd probably be more happy at this stage to know that this was the last we see of him.
I'm aware that some readers compare this series to the Anita Blake series. For what it's worth, I haven't read that series so my opinion was in no way influenced by that. I've also heard that the series does improve, so I'll give it one more shot. But if the next book makes me feel like I'm reading underwater, that'll be it.
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Dec 23, 2011 08:16pm
Brace yourself for the infodumps, LOL.
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You're not kidding, NU! This book is one big info-dump. Like wading through molasses at the moment. Do they get better?
Oh. Bummer. I'm still slogging through this one waiting for Pritkin to transform into someone worthy of attention. Doesn't look like happening any time soon. :(
Oh no, he's just an a-hole who doesn't show her any kindness. After the third book and he still didn't soften up, I figured I didn't care to see his redemption.
I thought the fourth book in this series was a huge improvement over the first three which, frankly, felt like Anita Blake ripoffs (and who wants to be known for THAT?!) But who wants to wade through three books before it gets good?
new_user wrote: "Oh no, he's just an a-hole who doesn't show her any kindness. After the third book and he still didn't soften up, I figured I didn't care to see his redemption."Seriously? Ugh. I liked the vamps more than Pritkin. I'd rather read their characters than his at this point.
Kat wrote: "I thought the fourth book in this series was a huge improvement over the first three which, frankly, felt like Anita Blake ripoffs (and who wants to be known for THAT?!) But who wants to wade thr..."
I haven't read the Anita Blake books - and I have no plans to. I wonder if that will make it easier to wade through the next couple of books?
Quinn wrote: "new_user wrote: "Oh no, he's just an a-hole who doesn't show her any kindness. After the third book and he still didn't soften up, I figured I didn't care to see his redemption."Seriously? Ugh. I..."
Well, I think Mircea has a big role in this series. And the French vampire has his own series, sort of. I hate how she bastardizes history, among other things. Also, that the main character is just a lackey and a worshipful one at that. Oh, they tortured somebody. That's okay. He deserved it, I'm sure. And the lame plot premises. And the awful self-interrupting, meandering inner dialogue that ruins any kind of momentum. So, vampires. Reminds me of Cheerios. Let me tell you about my Cheerios this morning. LOL. And the lack of character development for plot! And the infodumps! Because the exposition/inner dialogue is sheer misery, these books are only digestible (like rock) if you read quickly or skim. One of those things, okay, but all of them at once? Hate it.
