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The Stone Key (The Obernewtyn Chronicles, #5)
by Isobelle Carmody (Goodreads Author)
by Isobelle Carmody (Goodreads Author)
It is a huge relief to be done with this thing. What a waste of time. I no longer have any desire to finish this series. I'm going to keep the first three that I love, consider them ideally suited to being incomplete, and forget about the rest. This one was bloated with the author's boredom and it couldn't have been clearer that she just wanted to get through the story. Difficulties were solved in the most expedient way every time, full of deus ex machinas and inconsistent mind-power solutions; the main character has become a self-important little twat; the romantic tension was a mutant of its former compelling self; there were more irrelevant side characters with ridiculous names than grains of rice in the canister in my cupboard; and the writing was just plain bad, especially the dialogue. If anyone needs an example of why "telling" is bad storytelling, look no further. Entire plotlines were summarized by convenient character speeches: "This is what happened." There was exactly one paragraph that momentarily reminded me of the old style, but it was fleeting and not even important - just a random description of some landscape. The death of a friend was glossed over and sapped of all poignancy. In 1000 pages, there wasn't a single sentence or image I would take out of it with me. It saddens me to once again be confronted with the soured fruits of an author I used to love.
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Reading Progress
| 10/13/2008 | page 97 |
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9.7% | |
| 10/18/2008 | page 290 |
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29.0% | "Disappointing. It's so sad when you harbour such love and hope for an unfinished series, then 10 years later get a plodding rambling mess." |
| 10/20/2008 | page 345 |
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34.5% | "Picking up a little, plotwise, but still nothing to write home about." |
| 10/25/2008 | page 456 |
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45.6% | "Almost 500 pages of exposition is not cool." |
| 11/16/2008 | page 509 |
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50.9% | "Good grief this is bad. Dear protagonist: You can't just COERCE everyone all the time to solve all your problems. Dear author: Dolphinback?!" |
| 12/01/2008 | page 683 |
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68.3% | "Dear author: if you change a side character's name mid draft, do yourself a favour and do it consistently." |
