It was a good story. I really enjoyed reading it in the beginning because the banter between Daniel (Danni) and Kevin was just so hilarious. Luaghed for about 5 straight minutes after reading "I eat parabolas and shit obtuse angles". Makes me smile even now.
However, the story could have used a beta reader as the scenes leapt from one thing to another without any notice. And I understood the need to include other people's thoughts to better portray Danni and Kevin but it seemed out of place, when the story mainly focused on them.
While the issue of Danni's preference ofbeing either a girl or a boy was interesting and exceptionally displayed it was never answered. Perhaps that was the idea, but I would personally have liked a more concluside ending. And maybe an ending with less typical HEA of Kevin and Danni happily on their way to Governor's office.
But overall, I give this a 3.5 star rating. Good humored and very interesting story.