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White fire by Fern Michaels

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I refuse to torture myself with this book any longer! The writing is atrocious!It's so carelessly written! This must have been FM's first book. This is my first book by her but she absolutely must write better by now!Right..? Right..? At first I couldn't turn away from the OTT stuff, but the writing was so dumb that I felt stupid just reading the thing- so I gave up half way through. Also, the heroine acted too masculine for my taste, she kind of emasculated the hero after a while.

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Reading Progress

05/23/2011 page 18
5.0% "OMG! Such a brutal rape from the hero! How in the world is he gonna redeem himself?? I can't see her forgiving him after what he did to her." 7 comments

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