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His Perfect Submissive by Alyssa Aaron
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May 20, 2011

it was ok
Read in May, 2011

I really wanted to like this book, and it had a few moments where I was cheering for the characters, but the truth is, the story is just too drawn out and too repetitive. The author did a nice job of establishing a story line and some likeable characters, but the editing leaves something to be desired. If the book was half as long, it could have still accomplished the same purpose, and would have been a much better read. I would have appreciated a more varied vocabulary too. I was getting really tired of the words "bottom" and "cajoled." All in all it was okay for a mild D/s relationship, but I wouldn't really recommend it.
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