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Busted by Zachary O'Toole
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May 19, 2011

really liked it
bookshelves: contemporary, law-enforcement-pi, m-m, men-with-kids, action-mystery-suspense, fantasy-paranormals
Read in May, 2011

I absolutely loved this story! It was edge-of-your-seat suspenseful, and this was even with me knowing about Chris/Alex since I had already read some GR reviews. This could have easily been a five star read, but the author failed to tie up some major loose ends.

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I also want to mention the editing errors in this one. I normally don't mention grammatical/editing errors because most m/m books have them, but the cut-off sentences really bothered me. Unlike a lot of books, it wasn't just a missing word or two - almost entire sentences would be left off. This didn't happen a lot, but it was enough for it to bug me and to affect the story.

Despite the issues I had with the story, I still really liked this one and would recommend it to others. I really enjoyed the first 3/4 of this story; it just fell apart in places at the end when it came to explanations and loose threads.
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