I'll be honest - I don't ask for much from the Torchwood books. A plot that can at least stick together while I'm reading and recognizable characters. Snark is good, funny one-liners are great, ribald comments from Jack a must.

But seriously. It is not a good thing to have your reader wondering through 3/4 of the book if the author was working from an old script where there was an extra team member. This book definitely needed a prologue. And some editing. Ugh.

I only marked two pages as having good lines/characteristics/things, as opposed to the others, with dozens.