I loved this story, though it could have been longer. But in a way, I can kind of understand why it wasn't. It would have been easy to just keep the story going and going, but it had to end somewhere. I guess it possibly had the potential to become tedious had it continued too far.

I like the format, with both characters getting a chapter in turn.
It was interesting to have two protagonists giving their separate narration on the story. It was actually quite funny, because, as happens in life, one person sees a situation one way, and the other person sees it completely differently.

I know I want to say more about this story....but for now, I don't know what that is, so I will just leave it here.