Erica (daydreamer)'s Reviews > Take Me There
Take Me There
by Susane Colasanti (Goodreads Author)
by Susane Colasanti (Goodreads Author)
Erica (daydreamer)'s review
bookshelves: realistic-fiction, i-own, 2011-reads, could-have-been-better, ya
May 21, 11
bookshelves: realistic-fiction, i-own, 2011-reads, could-have-been-better, ya
Read from May 20 to 21, 2011
I've only read Waiting For You by Susane Colasanti, besides now this one, and I fell in love with that book. It was sweet, and had such deep emotion with teenagers who were real and endearing. I was excited to read all of her other books, hoping that they would all have that same type of feeling. Sadly, Take Me There didn't possess that quality. The writing felt so off, it was overly simple and juvenile, (which honestly isn’t all bad, as I loved the juvenile voice in Waiting For You, just here, I didn’t quite like it). It had lots of run on sentences, and dialogue that went like this:
He’s like..
I’m all like..
And he’s all..
I go..
He goes..
I get that Colasanti was going for a teenager voice, and I suppose they do kind of think along the lines of that, I just didn’t care to have it overly used in a novel. There was no real plot, which I realize isn’t always the point in realistic fiction. It’s more about the emotional journey the characters go through, or just their journey of going through their life, which I love reading about. But that’s the thing, I didn’t feel any emotion reading this book, more boredom than anything (maybe some annoyance at the writing). I did like the part where Rhiannon and James are dancing to his ipod. But I just felt like the execution of the story was lacking, and it could have had more emotion.
Content: some sexual content and swearing
He’s like..
I’m all like..
And he’s all..
I go..
He goes..
I get that Colasanti was going for a teenager voice, and I suppose they do kind of think along the lines of that, I just didn’t care to have it overly used in a novel. There was no real plot, which I realize isn’t always the point in realistic fiction. It’s more about the emotional journey the characters go through, or just their journey of going through their life, which I love reading about. But that’s the thing, I didn’t feel any emotion reading this book, more boredom than anything (maybe some annoyance at the writing). I did like the part where Rhiannon and James are dancing to his ipod. But I just felt like the execution of the story was lacking, and it could have had more emotion.
Content: some sexual content and swearing
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It's okay so far. I've only read Waiting For You, and I loved it, this one isn't as great, but, we'll see.
Yes! I see we found the same little mishaps. I definitely liked When It Happens more than this one. This one felt more...meh (shrugs). Nothing special. Nice review :)
Thank you Caitlin :) I'd like to read When It Happens, but I'm not sure how much faith I have in Colasanti, seeing as I loved one of her books, and didn't really care for another.
Hah! I felt/feel the same way. I was going to read Waiting For You after, but Take Me There left me a little afraid to sit through more adolescent talk.I mean, it helps define characters in a way, but as prose? I get headaches. Lol.
I have only read Waiting For you and didn't really enjoy it, haha. it seems everyone is split on Colasanti's faves (like ppl often are with Dessen...)loved the review though :)
Thanks Nomes :) I've only read one of Dessen's books, and I didn't really care for it, but maybe there's one of her books that I may just love. But yeah, there will always be the lovers and the haters and the indifferent readers of any one book, no matter what it is; we can't all be satisfied.

So far the first has been my favorite. Interested to see what you think of this one:)