Well, apparently there is some chunk of this book missing in both Kindle and paper versions. It happens towards the end at what is supposed to be the big climatic scene with the big villain. I spent a couple minutes clicking back and forth on my Kindle trying to figure out how when we went from a hallway down in the basement fully clothed to a bedroom naked in the space of a sentence and then piecing together what must have happened in the missing section (well the fact they were naked in bed gave me a clue, LOL). This is the second book of LL's that has fallen to pieces during the pivotal scene at the end. And yet I keep buying her books. Go figure.

Anyway, until that point, I was thinking the book was looking pretty good editing wise, compared to the many disasters she's turned out over the past couple of years. The story itself was just OK. Navarro's refusal to let himself love Mica got on my nerves after a while and the story was way, way in the characters' heads with the suspense aspect of the plot barely being addressed. So Navarro's Promise is typical LL angst but without as much action.