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Master of Darkness (Primes, #4)
by Susan Sizemore (Goodreads Author)
by Susan Sizemore (Goodreads Author)
This was my first book by Susan Sizemore, might be my last. Not sure yet.
This book had a very good premise, a brilliant setup, and an intriguing plot, yet it didn't deliver.
I felt the story was all over the place, without a proper focus on the blooming romance between Laurent and Eden. They just met, and then Bam! they are lovers. I couldn't detect that special bonding between them, the connection that could make a vampire hunter change her life for a vampire or why a vampire, as confused as he was, would abandon his old ways.
Add to the mix words like, tribe, clan, family, Prime. I had no clue what each meant and didn't mean. I kept mixing up clans with tribes, not sure which was good and which was bad and why.
Laurent's description of Eden didn't make her attractive, at least to me. His attitude, offhanded and too cool at times, was irritating.
Even after finishing the book, I'm not clear why these two got together.
The book had too many strong characters for its own good, some introduced after a long focus on Laurent and Eden.
I went into this book hoping for more than what I received. Perhaps the fault is with me, I expected a lot!
This book had a very good premise, a brilliant setup, and an intriguing plot, yet it didn't deliver.
I felt the story was all over the place, without a proper focus on the blooming romance between Laurent and Eden. They just met, and then Bam! they are lovers. I couldn't detect that special bonding between them, the connection that could make a vampire hunter change her life for a vampire or why a vampire, as confused as he was, would abandon his old ways.
Add to the mix words like, tribe, clan, family, Prime. I had no clue what each meant and didn't mean. I kept mixing up clans with tribes, not sure which was good and which was bad and why.
Laurent's description of Eden didn't make her attractive, at least to me. His attitude, offhanded and too cool at times, was irritating.
Even after finishing the book, I'm not clear why these two got together.
The book had too many strong characters for its own good, some introduced after a long focus on Laurent and Eden.
I went into this book hoping for more than what I received. Perhaps the fault is with me, I expected a lot!
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