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Unexpected Comfort by Kelly Ferjutz
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Mar 11, 2011

did not like it
bookshelves: kindle, 11-03-march
Read on March 06, 2011

This short story may well have been called 'Uncomfortable expectation', given the very choppily written sexploitations of a newly widowed woman. The start of the story, instead of dropping us in the middle of the action, is confusing and unwieldy - the description is all over the place and the reader cannot understand the set-up before we are quickly thrown into close proximity to the sweaty dirty male lead. There's no explanation for why these two supposed enemies thrust themselves into a lustful relationship minutes after the good husband is murdered nor why they fall into bed with a warm body on the doorstep. The ending, as well, is awkward and clipped.
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