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Eternal Captive by Laura Wright
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Feb 26, 2012

really liked it
Read in February, 2012

Mark of Vampire is good series, the overall story gets better with each book, which is why it’s a 4 star rating for me. With that said, I did have issues with the content of the story. I felt there was an overuse of the words from the glossary, particularly the words veana and paven. It became a bit distracting, taking away from the story. I’m also not a fan of the C word, but I knew going into this it would be used, I just didn’t expect it to be used so much :P. It is a good story, those were my issues, overall I think PNR fans will enjoy it.
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message 1: by A (new) - rated it 3 stars

A I agree with the over-use of words. But, I also think she over-used 'cunt', 'pussy', etc. He's blunt, I get it but good grief..find some other descriptive words. Maybe if she kept his language the same but used other terms that weren't his dialogue?!?! I dunno..kinda buggin' me..

Lizzielvr Oh, I know… I found myself “wincing” during the sex scenes, a little over the top on it…

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