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Grave Witch by Kalayna Price

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This one came highly rated by friends and after seeing it constantly mentioned I decided it must be worth a try. I can say I was completely engrossed and entertained by Alex and Falin's relationship although I am surprised he wanted to stick around. That's my positives. It really says something when the highlights of a book can be summed up in only a couple of lines.

The quirky yet distinctive opener, followed by some intriguing action (Death saved a life -why, and is that allowed?) calmed any concerns that I'd made a mistake buying this one but not long after we're stalled, left waiting for the good stuff to happen.

All I wanted to do was spend time with Death or Falin. Death more-so because I needed to understand what his attachment was to Alex and why he was so close to her when standard grave witch-reaper etiquette states the occasional "hello" when crossing paths is the most that should ever pass between them. What makes Alex so special? (view spoiler)[The kiss, I thought, was him being playful, messing with her mind so I was surprised and disappointed when he announced his love for her when she was dying. He was cool and mysterious until then. I vehemently dislike love triangles and this one wasn't even close to resolved by the end. Leaving Falin hanging in the Friend Zone after what had passed between him and Alex was also awkward. If she'd explained how she felt or he'd explained his weird fae 'I'm someone else's lover' status I wouldn't have a problem with them going their separate ways or remaining friends. (hide spoiler)]

Under normal circumstances I like magic and witches and I understand the need for world building but I was picking things out that I'd read in other places. I know it's hard to be completely original but the grave witchery itself strongly reminded me of Anita Blake's zombie raising to settle legal disputes and give closure to the families of the deceased. The race against time to investigate and avoid being arrested and branded a grey/black witch was eerily reminiscent of Rachel Morgan in the the Hollows, as well as the FIB/Inderland policing. For the most part I enjoyed both of those series but here with Alex, the witchiness was over done. The amount of detail about what was happening when she was using magic, the different planes and the consequences was all too confusing and unnecessary at times that I found myself skimming.

Alex's father mentions 'The Long Game' in regards to the fae. I'm not sure if this is part of some general mythology I'm unaware of but it features as part of a long running story arc involving the vampires in the Kitty Norville series. Talking about the fae, they were tricky bastards. Some appear to be good and others, not so nice. I liked that they weren't all tarred with the same brush.

Alex herself, I didn't find endearing. First of all, she's cursed. Everyone around her goes missing: her brother Brian, her best friend and roommate Rianna, and now people she knew from the witch community. She's also not the sharpest knife in the drawer and she's a doormat. Misunderstanding clues elongated the story. It was obvious things were going to roll back to her family after the discovery of the grey book but we had to wait for her to figure out the (view spoiler)[genetic (not generic, silly girl) (hide spoiler)] connection. The doormat thing annoyed me, it's part of the reason for her money troubles, not demanding to be paid for services rendered but she also has a problem with two tiny little letters, "no". Just say it. It's that easy. If people turn their back on you, you don't jump up to help them move up the career ladder. However, the strained relationships between Alex and her father and sister were interesting to me and I wished Price had delved further into their background and past dealings. In fact, I could probably extend that to all of the characters as they were all towards the shallow end of the spectrum as opposed to fully fleshed out individuals with histories and back-stories but I'm betting that's going to be developed in the following novels.

The dog, I'm sorry but yuck, yuck, yuck. This goes to personal taste because tiny dogs like that creep me out and it's hairless -eww, eww, eww. I wanted the thing to die.


*shudders*

One final thing about the ending, unless I'm mistaken and please let me know if I am (view spoiler)[Alex was dying not just from a stab wound but from the soul-sucking spell. Rianna healed the stab wound but not the spell. So when Alex thinks 'we won' and all is right with her world, she's still dying. That's never resolved and yet we're led to believe it has when it hasn't. ETA: The Answer (hide spoiler)]

Yeah, so basically the last third of the book with Alex and Falin was the only good experience I can take away from this book. It's something, I guess.

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Reading Progress

07/09/2011 page 29
9.0% "Did Death just save her life? Isn't that the opposite of his job description?"
07/09/2011 page 82
25.0% "Rapidly losing interest in this." 2 comments
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message 1: by Regina (new)

Regina I keep hearing I need to read this, are you reading this one anytime soon?


Amy or "Ames" Yes, it's on my read-these-next pile on my bookcase, along with Mind Games. :)


Mariya ARRGHHH! you didn't like =(


Amy or "Ames" No, I didn't. Sorry.


message 5: by Lisa Kay (last edited Jul 11, 2011 08:51pm) (new)

Lisa Kay Great review, Amy! Regarding the "view spoiler", I'm not thrilled with that theme either; thanks for the heads up. Neat bookcover though.


Amy or "Ames" Thanks, Lisa!


new_user I felt the same mostly, except I haven't read The Hollows and I didn't mind the magical descriptions. I've seen a lot worse in other witch novels going on and on about the implements. Unfortunately, it's been some time since I read this so I can't tell you about the ending, but I think that was resolved. What bothered me though was (view spoiler)[Death's confession @ the end to make a love triangle (hide spoiler)]. Can we have one guy in a UF series who doesn't come onto the heroine???


Mariya I hate love triangles. How can Alex even have a relationship with Death anyway since he is like a reaper and she is not even suppsoe to be able to see him in the first place. I love Death, but it really just wouldn't work out in my opnion. I get the love triangles in YA, but do we really need them in adult series? SOmetimes I approve of them and sometimes I don't. I guess it depends on the book series


message 9: by Amy or "Ames" (last edited Jul 13, 2011 12:19pm) (new) - rated it 2 stars

Amy or "Ames" new_user wrote: "Can we have one guy in a UF series who doesn't come onto the heroine???"

Yes, please!

Both The Hollows and this book have an agency called the FIB which polices otherworldly affairs. I don't think that's a coincidence.

The ending has been bugging me so I re-read chapters 27 and 28 -the final showdown and unless I'm going blind the (view spoiler)[soul-sucking spell (hide spoiler)] is never mentioned/cured. I'm really hoping someone can back me up on this because I find it a little strange that I'm the only that noticed. Unless I'm going crazy and missed something.

@Mariya, I hate them too. I try to avoid books with them in these days but they're cropping up more and more.


new_user I don't like love triangles because someone always loses. ;_; Re: policing otherworldly affairs, I've seen that idea around, so I don't know if it's copying so much as borrowing a good idea floating around, sort of like books about dragonriders and vampires that only eat animals, LOL.


message 11: by Regina (new)

Regina Harry Dresden! He doesn't come on to them, he is too shy.

Soul sucking? Like dementors in Harry Potter?


Amy or "Ames" It's a spell, Regina. A curse, that destroys the soul.


Seanean The soul sucking spell was caused by Coleman and Death stated that once the person who caused the spell was dead, the spell would die, too. Coleman died... spell died.


Amy or "Ames" Thanks, Seanean. I must've missed that. :)


Kelly Maybedog Hawkins Great review! You've convinced me not to read this book. The whole doormat personality just grates. Good believable relationships are important, too. Your review is solid and I trust it, even though I like all dogs, even little ones. (The dog in my profile pic was an elderly puppy mill stud dog rescue and he thought he was all that. He bullied our other, bigger dogs and would chase the Great Danes around the dog park who ran from him like elephants from mice. He was a terror. I get why you don't like them. But they make for entertaining anecdotes.)


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