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The Mists of Avalon by Marion Zimmer Bradley

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Read in January, 2008

The Arthur myth from the point of view of Morgaine le Fay, pagan priestess. Supposedly a feminist take on the old legends. There is one main problem with this approach: let's face it, women's lives in the dark ages were pretty boring. And rather than break out of this mold with strong female characters, Bradley talks a lot about spinning, weaving, and having babies. The female characters are either contemptible or irritating, or both. The male characters are cardboard--Arthur is as heroic as a limp dishrag, Merlin just an old man sitting in his rocking chair. The pagan-Christian thing is overwrought and shrill, devolving mostly into interminable theological debates between characters that cover the same ground over and over and over again.

A lot of things irritated me about this book, but nothing more than the simple lack of a compelling narrative construction. Nothing happens. There is dialogue, which mostly rehashes things that were already talked about. And then there is monologue, in which the weak and mostly contemptible characters thrash around in their heads so much that it would make Dostoyevsky cringe. It makes me angry that you could even try to tell the Arthurian legend--even from a feminine point of view--without looking at the epic clashes between the knights of the round table and their enemies.

Horrendously disappointing. For a fantasy novel, George R.R. Martin's A Game of Thrones does everything that this book tries to do, and does it ten times better. For more of a historical view, Bernard Cornwell's The Last Kingdom is a much more fun and interesting look at the clash of Christian and pagan civilizations, and even has characters that you don't hate.

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message 1: by Sian (new)

Sian "as heroic as a limp dishrag" - thank you, what a wonderful simile.


message 2: by Tahyun (new)

Tahyun Thank you. That was exactly what I needed to know. :)


Laurel If you like GRRM's work, you must hate the female empowering tone of MoA, after all, he does everything in his power to drill it into your head that women are worthless, pathetic creatures only worth beatings, rapes, and death. At least MoA tries to point out the difference between pre- and post-Christian feminine roles as whether they have a choice in their own lives.


Hpboy13 THANK YOU!!! These are my feelings exactly... the reason this book felt so long to me is that nothing ever happened in it. You are spot-on about all of it, especially the characters... when asked who my favorite character was, I really had to stop and try to think of one I even remotely liked. I settled on Morgause, because at least she wasn't irritating.


Sirius Scientist Exactly! Had to put this book on hold for a bit and am just now getting back to finally finishing for all the reasons you listed!


Johanna I thought it was just me! I'm having a terrible time getting into this book for all the reasons you listed. I want to make it through it but it's taking me forever because the drabness of the story just doesn't hold my attention. I was hoping it'd get better but maybe it doesn't.


Ctank228 Wow it's staggering that you would think the miracle of childbirth, the magic of the mists and the manipulation of lives and families good against evil gets reduced to "boring". George r.r martins books are segregated, disjointed and not a pleasant read like this series. The organization of zimmermans works are so much more easy to follow and to conjure images in your mind.


Kama Wait, nothing happens in this book? Brother & sister are separated, later conceive a child, are torn apart by religious differences (amongst others), a king rises, and falls, son turns against father (and mother), paganism recedes, and nothing happens?


Kama wife has affair with husband's best friend, Merlin betrays his pagan roots and revenge is visited upon him,


Kelly Marion Zimmer Bradley actually did quite a bit of research before writing her own interpretation of the Arthurian Legend in an attempt to provide a more accurate and realistic retelling that could potentially be true based on the evidence she uncovered. The fact that this story is categorized as fantasy is because it is still, essentially, a myth. It was not MZB's intention to make up radically wild characters and portray them in any other way then what could have actually happened in real life during that time period. Hence the dry lives, guess what? Women's lives were very similar to how she portrayed them during the middle ages, which should have hopefully evoked empathy rather than pity. This was definitely not the right book for you since you were wanting more of an unrealistic soap opera, but for those who are reading your review: MZB made an attempt to portray women as something other than a witch, a bitch, or a harlot... And it's a pretty powerful read.


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