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Brisingr (The Inheritance Cycle, #3)
by Christopher Paolini
by Christopher Paolini
Lauren's review
Sep 24, 08
Recommended for:
fantasy lovers, Star Wars fans, Lord of the Rings fans, Tamora Pierce fans
Read in September, 2008, read count: 1
So, I was a little disappointed with this third installment of Paolini's Inheritance "Cycle" now - since he changed the game and made this a 4 book series instead of 3, as it was originally intended.
The story was good and what I have come to expect from this series. But honestly, it did not have to be 748 pages long. I understand the author's desire to flesh out his characters, but the way that he kept going back and forth between the different characters I found annoying. The descriptions of the fights did not have to be as gory or detailed as he made them, nor as long as he made them. I had several guesses going throughout the book about how the plot would unfold and I ended up getting it right - though the character I thought was being set up to die did not. There are also points of the book where I can clearly see familiar plot points that I have seen in other books or series, like Star Wars or LOTR.
I also found Paolini's waxing on religion and philosophy through his main character annoying - it's as if he is trying to make this series more poignant than it is should be - because after all, it is just a good fantasy tale at its core and I feel like he should just stick to those roots.
I will be interested to see how Paolini wraps this complex story up. He has woven a lot of moving parts together and they are all pretty complex and I wonder how the climatic battle between good and evil will finally play out. I just hope I won't have to wade through another 800 some pages to get to the end.
The story was good and what I have come to expect from this series. But honestly, it did not have to be 748 pages long. I understand the author's desire to flesh out his characters, but the way that he kept going back and forth between the different characters I found annoying. The descriptions of the fights did not have to be as gory or detailed as he made them, nor as long as he made them. I had several guesses going throughout the book about how the plot would unfold and I ended up getting it right - though the character I thought was being set up to die did not. There are also points of the book where I can clearly see familiar plot points that I have seen in other books or series, like Star Wars or LOTR.
I also found Paolini's waxing on religion and philosophy through his main character annoying - it's as if he is trying to make this series more poignant than it is should be - because after all, it is just a good fantasy tale at its core and I feel like he should just stick to those roots.
I will be interested to see how Paolini wraps this complex story up. He has woven a lot of moving parts together and they are all pretty complex and I wonder how the climatic battle between good and evil will finally play out. I just hope I won't have to wade through another 800 some pages to get to the end.
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You have a very level-headed review, and I applaud you for that. I had to wade through the hundreds of mindless, "this is the greatest book ever!!11!1!" word spasms before I found yours. I have a bit of a thorn in my side with regards these books, to the point where I just find the whole thing rather humorous (and a bit of a joke, to be honest), but I do appreciate reading intelligent reviews and discussing books like these with others. :) When and if I ever get around to finishing Eldest first, and have the horrible notion to continue on, I'll hit you up for a debate!
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Thanks for the nice note - they are good books, just not as great as they could be, and that becomes especially annoying when the said book is 748 pages long.
i concur as well, i didn't realize when i started reading it that it would be so long i just wanted some resolution from Eldest (and i was unawares that there would be yet another book after this one). I'm on page 469 now and i'm tired of it. ((SPOILER WARNING!!)):There is no need for me to sit through a description of dwarf politics in Tronjheim for d*mn near 10 pages. and that's not including the beor mountains 5 page argument. Really? is it neccessary? i could have lived happily without it.
Sorry for the tangent.
I totally agree with you. I was about to post a very similar comment when I read yours. Like Chelle, I also wondered to myself, reading the thread of comments, why these people praised this book a lot when I had to really struggle to finish it.
arianna wrote: "i concur as well, i didn't realize when i started reading it that it would be so long i just wanted some resolution from Eldest (and i was unawares that there would be yet another book after this o..."No need to apologize for tangents! If Paolini can go off on them, so can you! Thanks for the comment on the review :)
Chadijah wrote: "I totally agree with you. I was about to post a very similar comment when I read yours. Like Chelle, I also wondered to myself, reading the thread of comments, why these people praised this book a ..."It was a struggle to finish, wasn't it? At some points, you're like, "cooommmeee on, let's get to the point". Thanks for the comment! :)
I agree...the story appeared fine in the beginning but dragged all the way to the end. I know the subtitle runs, "the seven promises of Eragon Shadeslayer and Saphira Bjartskular" but oaths alone can't make up such a long story!Paolini could have finished the plot here instead of pushing it into a fourth book...dissapointed. I've never taken such a long time to finish a book...the fourth had better be the one we are expecting!
I agree with you...to some extent...I think the book was a bit better than you are letting on...even though Paolini does drag it out a bit longer than he originally intended...he sticks to the original story line and holds the readers interest throughout the story...I personally am looking forward to the next book...and if he makes a fifth...I will look forward to that one also...it makes for a nice read.
Tyler wrote: "ugh. a fifth? that should not happen. it just shouldn't."if he comes out with a fifth book, i will refuse to read it, and i will also not read the 4th. Finish the damned story already. It need not be so complex.
I agree 1000% Book 3 didn't have to be so long. When he was working on his blade, I thought I would die from boredom!! My husband says that they are just streching the story because they are making so much money.
Aracelis wrote: "I agree 1000% Book 3 didn't have to be so long. When he was working on his blade, I thought I would die from boredom!! My husband says that they are just stretching the story because they are ma..."Oh, I hope your husband is wrong - I would hate for Paolini to have sold out so young! I was hoping he was turning it into 4 books because he genuinely thought that as a writer his story and characters needed the 4th book to completely finish the story - though as a reader, I feel like it could have been done in 3 :).
As far as I've read, I can honestly say that I agree with all of you. Good review, except for that I can't understand why you recommended it for "fantasy lovers, Star Wars fans, Lord of the Rings fans, Tamora Pierce fans". Actually, I can't understand why you recommended it at all ^^
Jarl wrote: "-FYI, any true LotR-fan would look at this book with utter disgust :P"I guess because there are so many familiar plot points from other fantasy/science fiction books that I have read, I recommended it for people who have read and enjoyed those genres.
You are right though - LOTR and this series can't even be compared. Tolkien's mastery of story, language, and just the English language are in a league of their own - even trying to describe LOTR, I can't find the right words to express my love for it.
Thanks for the comments!
Arya wrote: "I agree...the story appeared fine in the beginning but dragged all the way to the end. I know the subtitle runs, "the seven promises of Eragon Shadeslayer and Saphira Bjartskular" but oaths alone c..."I Totally agree with you... even though some parts drag on for way too long like the election of a new dwarf kind in Brisngr and how he describes every detail strenuously. but doing that gives great meaning to the story Writing. Literature in my opinion is the conveying of the authors thoughts.... if it takes him more words to describe what he thinks it means he is not as good an author as J. R. R. Tolkien, but that doesn't mean the books weren't good. The story rlly captivated me even though the duration of some parts were longer than they should have been
I just started the book and after reading all these comments I decided not to keep reading...especially not when I have stack of other great books to read. Thanks!
Your review made writing one of my own completely useless, I agree 100%, I would only like to add that I think if he hadn't published the book so soon, he could've matured the story into a much better book, without trying to hard, as I think he does, to make the book more deep than a fantasy book is meant to be. All in all it is a good story and he is a good enough writer, I would like to see his writings in a couple of years.
I agree with most of your review. Paolini certainly did overdo the flowery language. I do not understand what you mean by 'fantasy roots'. Lord of the rings may have been very happy and the battles may have been short and clean yet fantasy has moved on. Modern fantasy is generally filled with detailed and gory battle scenes with religion and politics playing a large part. If you are expecting another lotro- forget about it. Fantasy has moved on. I do agree the tone was too dark and sad as fantasy still tends to be light and happy (wot/riftwar saga) though there are many miserable series too (asoiaf/mst)
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