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Wolfsbane by Andrea Cremer
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didn't like it it was ok liked it really liked it it was amazing
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Jan 30, 11

2 of 5 stars
bookshelves: mt-bookpile-2011, old-reads
Read in January, 2011

I really liked Nightshade and had high hopes for the next book but, well... sigh. One of the problems I identified in the first book remains, that of the ending. It's not a cliff-hanger, it's more like you're being thrown off the cliff: the ending is too abrupt. The narrative thread is snipped in what feels like an arbitrary fashion.

And then there's the prose. It's lilac, not quite purple. On one randomly chosen page, we have eyes widening ... gazing as though seeing the other character for the first time... lips thinly smiling... a challenging stare... voices bubbling with outrage... and finally, eyes bulging. Every conversation, every action is overwrought - at some point, it calls attention to the writing, detracting from the plot. The action tends to lurch, with few moments for people to catch their breath or adequately plot or plan the next move. When Calla cuts her hair, it could have served as time for the girls to regroup but that respite lasts all of a few pages and then - We're Off Again!! The first book's discussion of the history and legacy of the Seekers and Guardians and so forth is gone, and it's missed.

Once more, I'm struck by the padding. This doesn't feel like a trilogy, with one more book coming to wrap up the threads (and checking the author's website I see there's one final book and then a companion novel). It feels like it should be just two books, with tighter editing and fewer guilt-bitten guts.

ARC provided by publisher.

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Brooke oh man it was no good?? I loved Nightshade too, but only for the face there was equal parts Ren scenes as there were Shay. But people are saying its mostly Shay in this one? pooooo :(


is mee... kissa haha. "being thrown off a cliff." i like.


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