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How to Write a Sentence by Stanley Fish

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Jan 27, 11

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Read from January 26 to 27, 2011

If it weren't for goodreads, I could imagine that no one else on earth would find the near fetish-like pleasure I found in this tiny little book. I cherished this thing like a teenage boy oggles over a centerfold, privately, under the covers, with a yellow glow from my bedside lamp, deconstructing sentences like porn deconstructs a woman's body. Fish (oh, I wish that were not your name) illustrates the finite forms of the limitless conveyor of all meaning -- the sentence, in a way that makes all great writing fresh and newly amazing. I have an urge to read the first sentence of every novel I own, a novel in itself, just to pick apart the form each author used to slice that first piece of cake. Of course Fish covers some old favorites, some Dickens, some Austen, but he also includes some amazing analysis of Martin Luther King Jr., Joseph Conrad, and Ford Maddox Ford. He even goes hip and takes a sentence from Tana French! I'm still not convinced that Gertrude Stein ever succeeded in her goal of keeping language ever in the present, each word with equal weight, but maybe that's because I don't believe that each word IS equal. I might even try a few of Fish's suggested exercises -- well, I did try in my head, but there is yet no evidence. I want to experiment on my son with one particular exercise: Write out Lewis Carroll's 'Twas Brillig, and ask him to replace the nonsense words with real ones. Will he be familiar enough with the work each word performs to know what kind of word fits where? That's part of what makes the poem so brilliant -- it uses language form to convey meaning, without loading the words themselves with any meaning at all. (Also, slithey toves are awesome.)
This is required reading for every writer and every reader reading above the Grisham/Picoult threshold. I withhold one star 'cuz he started getting preachy and exalted at the end, too worked up, perhaps, in his "last sentence" chapter to make a calm landing on his own last sentence. But I forgive him. All the sentences in the middle were just great.

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Reading Progress

01/27/2011 page 75
47.0% ""I love the great outdoors. I can smoke there." I made that up. If I analyze it in the style of Fish it would suck all the fun from the context, but the pure genius of my phrasing skill, the intricacies of implied meanings and aphoristic expectations might blind you."

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message 1: by Melissa (new)

Melissa I assume you want to experiment on E's brain, not C's :P


Kathrina You know, I may try it on both.Too often I underestimate C's ability to find an unexpected solution..


message 3: by Melissa (new)

Melissa Sweet. I think he'd like it, too.


Kathrina OK well, C had no comment, but E flew with it. He wrote both a word-replacement for 'Twas Brillig and his own nonsense poem. He'll post that tomorrow (it is so past his bedtime), but here is his word replacement:

'Twas ten, and the fat slobs
Did dance and scream in the night;
All people were the best,
And the fire never fell.

I always thought gyre should mean dance, too. But I also think mimsy is an adjective, though I'll concede it works as a noun.
'Course now he says I have to write one...


message 5: by Melissa (new)

Melissa That was great! Can't wait to see his nonsense poem :)


message 6: by Carol (new)

Carol Saw this on your currently reading and then on a blog this am...have put it our next order for our library.

Great review as always!


Paul Great stuff - there should be a forum somewhere on Goodreads where we could all dump our favourite sentences.


message 8: by Ian (new) - added it

Ian Graye I agree with Paul.
If someone else wants to start one, I would like to participate.
I have already put some fave sentences on my Writing page, but it would be great to set up something that attracts a more diverse input.
I found that I started to get thematic and one-dimensional in my approach to sentences, whereas the whole point is to appreciate (and glorify) someone else's sentence.


message 9: by Connie (new)

Connie I too was thinking, who do I know who would relish this book as I have? Someone on Goodreads! And I agree that he lost me in the final rounds, but I forgive him because of all the pleasure that went before.


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