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City Under the Sand by Jeff Mariotte
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Jun 05, 11

bookshelves: fantasy, kindle
Read from May 09 to June 05, 2011

This book was entertaining, but it has some problems. There's a lot of typos and grammar issues that even a vaguely competent editor should have caught. More importantly, the pacing is very bad. The first third to half of the novel drags, and while it gets into a good rhythm after a while, it then rushes through the ending in the last 5% or so. While it wasn't horrible, it could've been better, and it could've used some more exposition about the Dark Sun setting for those not familiar with it.
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Reading Progress

05/09/2011
7.0%
05/25/2011
31.0% "It's getting kinda boring..."
05/27/2011
39.0% "I've managed to get into it a bit more. Gonna try to finish it in the next few days."
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