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The Eternal Ones (Eternal Ones, #1)
by Kirsten Miller (Goodreads Author)
by Kirsten Miller (Goodreads Author)
Pricky's review
bookshelves: i-give-up, could-ve-been-but-wasn-t, dazed-and-confused, mystery, reincarnation, read-in-2012, reviewed, romance, unfinished, ya, 3rd-person, not-gonna-happen
Apr 03, 12
bookshelves: i-give-up, could-ve-been-but-wasn-t, dazed-and-confused, mystery, reincarnation, read-in-2012, reviewed, romance, unfinished, ya, 3rd-person, not-gonna-happen
I had been waiting for over a year for our library to order this book so it was with much anticipation to finally be able to delve into this mystery.
Which lasted about 61 pages. I. just. can't. go. on....
First off, I'm not a big fan of the 3rd person POV--especially with YA; and unless the author is a very talented writer, the 3rd person perspective ends up making it sound like a narration from a screenplay.
Miller is case-in-point. There were about 5 pages covering 2 short chapters where there was nothing but a long description and retelling of Haven Moore's life. (I almost forgot I was reading a novel; it sounded so much like an bibliography.) What happened to the "Show, not Tell"?
Some of the scenes were pieced together so jaggedly that I was left confused. There's a scene in the past followed by another scene in the past but linked by the word "Now" which makes me think of the present. (e.g., p.24) I was also puzzled by which time period this story takes place in. For a story that supposedly takes place in the "present day," I felt very backwards; the insistence that Haven's visions are due to demon possession seemed very forced and ridiculous; mind you, I've never been to the "bible belt" states, but the way the townspeople acted seemed unrealistic.
None of the characters seem interesting enough to me. The "soul mate" theme is a little tiresome. The gay best friend, the domineering grandma matriarch, and the hot love interest are too cliche. I'm also puzzled by Haven's mother who initially acts subservient and yet a few pages later suddenly stands up to grandma and then persuades Haven to pursue the truth.
I can't say much about the rest of the plot nor Haven's future love interest. It's a VERY thick story and if it was shorter, and if I didn't already have a stack of "To-Reads" I might, just might have forced myself to finish.
Which lasted about 61 pages. I. just. can't. go. on....
First off, I'm not a big fan of the 3rd person POV--especially with YA; and unless the author is a very talented writer, the 3rd person perspective ends up making it sound like a narration from a screenplay.
Miller is case-in-point. There were about 5 pages covering 2 short chapters where there was nothing but a long description and retelling of Haven Moore's life. (I almost forgot I was reading a novel; it sounded so much like an bibliography.) What happened to the "Show, not Tell"?
Some of the scenes were pieced together so jaggedly that I was left confused. There's a scene in the past followed by another scene in the past but linked by the word "Now" which makes me think of the present. (e.g., p.24) I was also puzzled by which time period this story takes place in. For a story that supposedly takes place in the "present day," I felt very backwards; the insistence that Haven's visions are due to demon possession seemed very forced and ridiculous; mind you, I've never been to the "bible belt" states, but the way the townspeople acted seemed unrealistic.
None of the characters seem interesting enough to me. The "soul mate" theme is a little tiresome. The gay best friend, the domineering grandma matriarch, and the hot love interest are too cliche. I'm also puzzled by Haven's mother who initially acts subservient and yet a few pages later suddenly stands up to grandma and then persuades Haven to pursue the truth.
I can't say much about the rest of the plot nor Haven's future love interest. It's a VERY thick story and if it was shorter, and if I didn't already have a stack of "To-Reads" I might, just might have forced myself to finish.
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Mar 13, 2012 04:27pm
You seriously need to start blogging, young lady.
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Michelle wrote: "You seriously need to start blogging, young lady."LOL! I'm one step closer though! I FINALLY have a blog name...only took me TWO years to come up with a name that I decided after 2 minutes of staring at the blogger screen. (It's "booksfordessert!") HAHAHAHA. Can you tell I love food?! Now I just have to configure it and make it look "pretty."
Pricky wrote: "Michelle wrote: "You seriously need to start blogging, young lady."LOL! I'm one step closer though! I FINALLY have a blog name...only took me TWO years to come up with a name that I decided after..."
YAY!!!!! The peasants rejoice. ;) Looking forward to reading your reviews in blog format!
