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Breaking Dawn by Stephenie Meyer
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Dec 09, 2010

liked it
bookshelves: fantasy, romance, young-adult

MAY CONTAIN SPOILERSThis installment of the Twilight Saga was very annoying to me. The way she presented the story through Bella's and Jacob's eyes did not work. Why have a section where Jacob tells the story when the previous three novels are narrated by Bella. Also Jacob's voice is inconsistent. Sometimes he narrates as Jacob but other times it seems like Bella is narrating. I had to remind myself that I was reading Jacob's words not hers.Meyer also takes forever building up to the conflict. She spends 300 pages building and building and the conflict lasts for 30 pages if that. The ending is also too happy (SPOILER) the Volturi should have lost their power or something. The book just worked out too perfectly in the end. I guess that's what you get with a book that's marketed to tweens.The story was good it just could have been better.

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