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This Unhappy Planet by Marc Horne
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Feb 13, 11

Read from January 26 to February 13, 2011

I'm glad to have finally finished this book. It's OK. It's really not all that much different from Toyoko Zero. Both want to change the world. Both have odd characters that do not have cohesive thoughts. The same goes for the story. In one paragraph the main plot is going along, in the next a thought that makes no sense whatsoever. If the tangent thoughts weren't there, the story would be much better. Also, spelling and punctuation are important. There's only a few spots; negligible. Honestly, for an indie book, it's good and much better than what I could do. But to compare to the pro's, well, it needs more polishing. I think the author is getting there.
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