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The Unsuspecting Mage by Brian S. Pratt

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Oct 18, 10

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Read from October 11 to 17, 2010

** spoiler alert ** This story had potential to be good, but the protagonist, James, was super annoying and I found him to be so irritating that after a while I did not want him to succeed. Miko was by far a better character. Also, the dialogue when James was in present time, before being transported to the magical land, was to contrived, to forced. He did not speak like a teenager; no contractions, always proper grammar. I am not sure if I will continue with this series as it took forever for me to finish this book and I am not invested in the characters. My favorite part of this book was that it was free for my nook.

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