Just started this, and couldn't continue because the sentences were too short and choppy. I will have to come back to this one later.

Second attempt: writing still awkward, but once the story picked up, it wasn't so bad. Very cool concept, and brought back great memories of learning about the immune system. Cheney is a young man born on a spaceship, and when he is 17 the ship passes through some kind of radiation that transforms the ship into a living being and the human passengers into parasites. What follows is a short survival story.