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Doo-Lang Love by Chad Sosna
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Feb 11, 08

bookshelves: finished-2008
Read in January, 2008

This book was readable, but it was also very "surfacey." By that I mean that, outside of any dialog, the story was written almost entirely in exposition (lots of "telling," almost no "showing"). Because of this, I wasn't immersed in the story world. This is an iUniverse book, and I think that if this book had found its way to an actual editor instead of a POD publisher, it would have gotten fleshed out and ended up a good book instead of just an okay one.

The characters are likable, the main character's conflict does drive the story, and it's a quick little read. It just doesn't reach its full potential.
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