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First Son by Brian  Jackson
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Aug 14, 2010

really liked it
Read from August 13 to 14, 2010 , read count: 1

A commendable first effort in the realm of male-male romance, with its high points being the simple but entertaining storyline, and the basic likability of the two main characters. What this book really, really needs is a thorough editorial cleanup for spelling, grammar and syntax. The gaffes in the writing are prominent enough and occur frequently enough to be distracting. Please submit this book for editing by a professional editor whose technical skills, taste and good judgement can be trusted. Cleaning up this book will surely, only add to what is already a pretty enjoyable read.
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