Caroline's single-mindedness made the development of an all-consuming love story pretty unbelievable. I saw Zachary's character progression a lot more clearly. Indeed, the whole book was about how Zachary developed into a responsible adult, whereas Caro's big transformative "hey, maybe painting isn't the end-all" moment happened offscreen in one of those "some time later" bits. Also, the Big Moment when she decided to sleep with him instead of argue with him also zoomed past me. It might have been there, but it was tiny.

All that said, Ms Enoch has a way with banter. I enjoyed the book, especially the secondary characters Anne and Edmund. In fact, I wouldn't mind seeing more Witfelds pop up in later novels, if Ms Enoch is so inclined. Mostly I glazed over during the cattle breeding discussion, so I don't have much to say about historical accuracy or believability where that's concerned. I find it difficult to believe that Lawrence would take a female apprentice, nevermind who spoke on her behalf. But whatever; it makes the story move.

In all, a pleasant enough romance. It entertained.