Lady Jayne *~*The Beach Bandida*~*'s Reviews > Forgive My Fins
Forgive My Fins (Fins, #1)
by Tera Lynn Childs (Goodreads Author)
by Tera Lynn Childs (Goodreads Author)
Lady Jayne *~*The Beach Bandida*~*'s review
bookshelves: prospect-library, young-adult, paranormal, fantasy, reviewed
Oct 07, 10
bookshelves: prospect-library, young-adult, paranormal, fantasy, reviewed
Recommended for:
Tweens and anyone in the mood for a light and sweet mermaid love tale
Read from September 01 to 04, 2010
3.5 - 4 Stars - Also reviewed at: Lady Jayne's Reading Den
(Plot points mentioned deal with aspects contained in the book blurb)
Is it just guppy love or a love as deep as the ocean?
Yes, I have been indoctrinated from all the puns in this book. ^_^ The sea puns and mermaid fish slang were a little jarring, at first, but son of swordfish (as Lily would say), once I got into the flow, I was all bubbly smiley reading them and at times even chuckling. Though I can see how the steady stream of puns could be annoyingly corny and induce seasickness if one wasn’t partial to them.
Forgive My Fins is a cute, fun, quick and easy read. This is the first book I’ve read by Tera Lynn Childs. It was also my first mermaid story, other than The Little Mermaid. So, I can’t compare it to any other YA mermaid books out there, but I did like the different twist from the Little Mermaid.
Almost 18-year old Lily Sanderson, half-mermaid, half-human, has been secretly in love with Brody Bennett, swim champion, for 3 years. Quince Fletcher, on the other hand, has been nothing but an obnoxious, annoying blowfish of a biker-boy neighbour and definitely NOT Lily’s idea of a dream mermate.
When a case of mistaken ‘kisstaken’ identity at the Spring Fling ends up accidentally magically “bonding” Lily to Quince, Lily must reveal her secret to him and take him to her ocean home to meet Daddy dearest in the underwater kingdom of Thalassinia, to reverse this mistake of tsunami proportions. Brody is the one that Lily wants to spend happily-ever-after under the sea with! *cue Under the Sea music*
I really liked Quince, from the beginning, and his behaviour towards Lily reminded me of little boys who pull the girl they like’s pigtails to get their attention. Quince’s teasing manner, Lily’s fiery reactions to him, and him calling Lily “princess”, also reminded me of the sparks between Han Solo and Princess Leia, which I love.
One of the issues I had though, were the number of times Lily kept referring to “the bond”. I understood it was to show Lily being in denial about any attraction she was developing towards Quince, the bane of her existence, and blaming it on the effects of “the bond”, but after a while it just felt like Ms Childs was hitting the reader over the head with a baby whale with it. Ironically, the other issue I had was in relation to what I felt was a bit of a plot hole regarding mermaid bonding.
Despite those issues, however, I found myself smiling a lot reading this book, got a few yummy shivers, and definitely had a big smile on my face when I reached the end. If you are looking for a deep read then swim away from this one, but if you’re looking for something buoyant then dip your toes into this sweet and innocent tail…Oops! I mean “tale”. ^_^
(If the puns in this review annoyed you, then you should probably steer clear of Forgive My Fins!)
A few of my fave quotes:
‘"I don't believe it,” Quince says with absolute certainty. “I don't believe anything magical can make someone more in love.”
He looks me right in the eye as he says, “Love is already the strongest magic in the world."’
‘"Oh, Lily," He says shaking his head. "I know about love. About wanting and dreaming and wishing with every part of your soul. I know enough to recognize the parts that are real and the parts that are only in my fantasy." He turns his head slightly to face me, and I find myself saying, "L-like what?"
"Like when she cries and my heart tears into little shreds, and all I can think of is making her forget the source of her sadness." His face is blank, emotionless. His words - and the underlying emotion bombarding me through the bond - more than make up for it. "That's real."
My voice is barely a whisper when I ask, "And fantasy?"
"Believing she'll ever feel the same way."
"When he pulls back, his eyes glow with the love I know is shining inside. I’m sure my eyes are glowing just as bright, because I can feel the tears of joy sliding down my cheeks.
For several long minutes, we just smile at each other. I’m sure we look like stupidly in love teenagers – to Aunt Rachel and whoever else happens to be watching – but we know the truth. There’s nothing stupid about it."
"Lord love a lobster, he has a beautiful chest."
(Just had to toss that one in there! And it’s relevant to my visualisations below) LOL
My Lily (Taylor Swift):


My Quince (Cam Gigandet):


COPYRIGHT DISCLAIMER: I do not hold the copyright to any of the images used in this review. They are posted to add visuals to the review and for fun. If any of these images are yours and you would like me to remove them, please let me know, and I will do so as soon as possible. If I can identify the copyright, I will do so.
(Plot points mentioned deal with aspects contained in the book blurb)
Is it just guppy love or a love as deep as the ocean?
Yes, I have been indoctrinated from all the puns in this book. ^_^ The sea puns and mermaid fish slang were a little jarring, at first, but son of swordfish (as Lily would say), once I got into the flow, I was all bubbly smiley reading them and at times even chuckling. Though I can see how the steady stream of puns could be annoyingly corny and induce seasickness if one wasn’t partial to them.
Forgive My Fins is a cute, fun, quick and easy read. This is the first book I’ve read by Tera Lynn Childs. It was also my first mermaid story, other than The Little Mermaid. So, I can’t compare it to any other YA mermaid books out there, but I did like the different twist from the Little Mermaid.
Almost 18-year old Lily Sanderson, half-mermaid, half-human, has been secretly in love with Brody Bennett, swim champion, for 3 years. Quince Fletcher, on the other hand, has been nothing but an obnoxious, annoying blowfish of a biker-boy neighbour and definitely NOT Lily’s idea of a dream mermate.
When a case of mistaken ‘kisstaken’ identity at the Spring Fling ends up accidentally magically “bonding” Lily to Quince, Lily must reveal her secret to him and take him to her ocean home to meet Daddy dearest in the underwater kingdom of Thalassinia, to reverse this mistake of tsunami proportions. Brody is the one that Lily wants to spend happily-ever-after under the sea with! *cue Under the Sea music*
I really liked Quince, from the beginning, and his behaviour towards Lily reminded me of little boys who pull the girl they like’s pigtails to get their attention. Quince’s teasing manner, Lily’s fiery reactions to him, and him calling Lily “princess”, also reminded me of the sparks between Han Solo and Princess Leia, which I love.
One of the issues I had though, were the number of times Lily kept referring to “the bond”. I understood it was to show Lily being in denial about any attraction she was developing towards Quince, the bane of her existence, and blaming it on the effects of “the bond”, but after a while it just felt like Ms Childs was hitting the reader over the head with a baby whale with it. Ironically, the other issue I had was in relation to what I felt was a bit of a plot hole regarding mermaid bonding.
Despite those issues, however, I found myself smiling a lot reading this book, got a few yummy shivers, and definitely had a big smile on my face when I reached the end. If you are looking for a deep read then swim away from this one, but if you’re looking for something buoyant then dip your toes into this sweet and innocent tail…Oops! I mean “tale”. ^_^
(If the puns in this review annoyed you, then you should probably steer clear of Forgive My Fins!)
A few of my fave quotes:
‘"I don't believe it,” Quince says with absolute certainty. “I don't believe anything magical can make someone more in love.”
He looks me right in the eye as he says, “Love is already the strongest magic in the world."’
‘"Oh, Lily," He says shaking his head. "I know about love. About wanting and dreaming and wishing with every part of your soul. I know enough to recognize the parts that are real and the parts that are only in my fantasy." He turns his head slightly to face me, and I find myself saying, "L-like what?"
"Like when she cries and my heart tears into little shreds, and all I can think of is making her forget the source of her sadness." His face is blank, emotionless. His words - and the underlying emotion bombarding me through the bond - more than make up for it. "That's real."
My voice is barely a whisper when I ask, "And fantasy?"
"Believing she'll ever feel the same way."
"When he pulls back, his eyes glow with the love I know is shining inside. I’m sure my eyes are glowing just as bright, because I can feel the tears of joy sliding down my cheeks.
For several long minutes, we just smile at each other. I’m sure we look like stupidly in love teenagers – to Aunt Rachel and whoever else happens to be watching – but we know the truth. There’s nothing stupid about it."
"Lord love a lobster, he has a beautiful chest."
(Just had to toss that one in there! And it’s relevant to my visualisations below) LOL
My Lily (Taylor Swift):


My Quince (Cam Gigandet):

COPYRIGHT DISCLAIMER: I do not hold the copyright to any of the images used in this review. They are posted to add visuals to the review and for fun. If any of these images are yours and you would like me to remove them, please let me know, and I will do so as soon as possible. If I can identify the copyright, I will do so.
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Reading Progress
| 09/02/2010 | page 73 |
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25.0% | "Liking it so far. The mermaid fish-speak is kinda jarring and funny." 7 comments |
| 09/02/2010 | page 96 |
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33.0% | "I don't know, Lily may see Quince as an annoying blowfish or a sea slug but I like him! He's all confident and rogue-y (I know that's not a word LOL). Just reminds me of Han Solo and how he liked to tease and torment Princess Leia. ^_^" |
| 09/05/2010 | page 293 |
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100.0% | "An easy, fun and enjoyable read. I quite enjoyed this actually." |
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Thanks, Zosia and Dhestiny!
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Swimmingly good review Lady Jayne. I'm glad I dipped my toes in and floundered my way through it...Okay I'll stop now
I really liked Quince from the beginning and his behaviour towards Lily reminded me of little boys who pull the girl they like’s pigtails to get their attention. Quince’s teasing manner, Lily’s fiery reactions to him, and him calling Lily “princess”, also reminded me of the sparks between Han Solo and Princess Leia, which I love.I love romances like that! Great review, Jayne!
Kelly wrote: "Awesome review LJ my 11 year old is reading this."I just saw this post, Kelly. Thank you. I hope your 11-year old loves it. I thought it was cute, sweet and fun. ^_^
Lady Jayne *~*The Beach Bandida*~* wrote: "Kelly wrote: "Awesome review LJ my 11 year old is reading this."I just saw this post, Kelly. Thank you. I hope your 11-year old loves it. I thought it was cute, sweet and fun. ^_^"
:) She liked it but her favorite so far this year has been the Hunger Games series she is so happy they are making it into a movie.
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Niq wrote: "Enjoyed the review, particularly the puns."Thanks, Niq. Sorry for the delay in replying, I just saw your comment. It's a cute story, with puns. ^_^






