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Romiette and Julio by Sharon M. Draper

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Apr 27, 10

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Ok so I'm going to start my reaction to Sharon Draper's Romiette and Julio by looking closely at an excerpt that I really enjoyed. I thought it was a powerful moment and wanted to share it with the Goodreads world.

On the fourth page of the book, Romiette, the narrator, writes:

"I hate picky people, watermelon, and chocolate. I hate gangs, violence and movies with too much sex and cussing. There are gangs in our school now, and it's a little scary because they want to control with threats and punches the actions and thinkings of kids and i can't be bothered with that, so they don't like me much" (Romiette and Julio p. 4).

First of all, I love when authors introduce characters in their stories by listing a number of traits that define them. This is a cool way to let your readers know exactly what your character is like, and to show a little bit about what they might become. At the start of Romiette and Julio, Romiette writes this passage into her journal. She reveals a lot about who she is and what she wants in life. I felt that this was a great way to open the book.

Romiette's fear about gang violence reminds me of students I've taught in my career, who have so much to say about the way kids treat each other in and out of school. I feel terrible for children who are bullied or mistreated by others, while being totally innocent themselves. When I see this type of behavior as a teacher, I wish I could solve all of my students' problems. But I can't.

I predict that this novel will deal with the issue of violence between opposing groups of kids. This is an important social issue for writers to discuss because violence really exists. Kids are faced with it everyday.

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message 1: by Cole (new)

Cole IT WAS SUUPPPERRRR LONG


message 2: by Cindy (new)

Cindy I noticed that you had a prediction at the end.


message 3: by Li (new)

Li mr. gelinas this is really long and u did a good retell


message 4: by Estevan (new)

Estevan good way of predicting on the novel i will do that to maybe


message 5: by Darryl (new)

Darryl really nice review i agree with you in some stuff like gangs and sex and stuff


message 6: by Helen (new)

Helen Nice review! It was long but interesting.


message 7: by Shakira (new)

Shakira really good review showed lots of details ... and LONG (but good)


message 8: by Jewel (new) - added it

Jewel Basco you used an quote from the text


message 9: by Jeremiah (new)

Jeremiah you gave you personal opinion and you quote the book and tell what page it came from


message 10: by Ladyriah (new)

Ladyriah Bell i feel like you made a really good point but you wrote a dang story next time you should shorten it but other then that you have a good review


message 11: by Melissa (new)

Melissa i think that you need more detail, and u need to tell us what did u learn from the storyyy but the review wass good


message 12: by Ms. Jessie (new)

Ms. Jessie I noticed that he used a quote from the novel.


message 13: by Jonathan (new)

Jonathan Stotter You wrote what you liked about the book.


message 14: by Samantha (new)

Samantha its was very interesting and very intense but it was very long.


message 15: by Melissa (new)

Melissa ooooo mmmmm ggg diz is tooo longgg buttt i think that u need more detail, and u should tell us what did u learn from the storyyy... but the review wass really good


message 16: by Darryl (new)

Darryl can i write my on review now we wasting timee


message 17: by Darryl (new)

Darryl OH MY GOSH


message 18: by Ms. Jessie (new)

Ms. Jessie When you're writing review, you guys can include passages from the books that you are reading. When you include a quotation from what you read, write what you are thinking about that particular passage.

"....." (Book Name, Page Number)

This shows...

This passage makes me think...

This passage reminds me of...

I like how the author...


message 19: by Giovanni (new)

Giovanni castellanos i noticed that you include alot of text from the passage and added a prediction at the end.


message 20: by Alexis (new)

Alexis Oh yeah i do agree i think he really put alot of though in his review a liked how he took a part From the story and then after he rewrote it he wrote on what the though about that part


message 21: by Zachary (new)

Zachary Marianetti Ms. Candlin wrote: "THI$ $HIT WA$ $O AMAZING.... :)"

I concur.


message 22: by Robby (new)

Robby In this review, you referenced the story, and gave your opinion based on the content of the passage you showed, reviewing a part of the story specifically.


message 23: by Santiago (new)

Santiago Navarro I noticed that you included a quote from the book and then you included why you chose it.


message 24: by Alison (new)

Alison Lin I like the way you predicted what would happen in the end of the review and not at the beginning. I think it's a good way to end your review.


message 25: by Andyma (last edited Apr 28, 2010 11:50am) (new) - rated it 1 star

Andyma Good review totally awesome continue on your reviews.


message 26: by James (new)

James I noticed you compared something from the book to yourself.


message 27: by Zachary (new)

Zachary Marianetti I noticed that he put a lot of effort into this and it does give me a feel for how the book is written and what the PoV is throughout the novel. I think that his review on it was good but the elaboration as to who the character we're following is and why she is significant a little less descriptive. Very nice review!


message 28: by Jonathan (new)

Jonathan i noticed you quoted part from the story and built off that so there wasnt much retell and you basically set your point o_o


message 29: by Kevin (new)

Kevin Mai he tells what was in the book and what he likes about what the author does. he also compared something from the book to yourself


message 30: by Alice (last edited Apr 28, 2010 11:48am) (new)

Alice I noticed that this review is very long... I liked how he made a prediction at the end. I also liked that he included a short paragraph from the story. To make, this better, I think he should include who he would recommend this book to.


message 31: by Sebastian (new)

Sebastian Epic review, and not the fail kind. You explored numerous themes in the book, and didn't just alliterate or a tit erate, whatever it is. You gave your opinion and I thought it very in dept.


message 32: by Carl (new)

Carl Jason Gee Mr. Gelinas.... Even though your review is very long, it explains a lot of the story from just one page that you've read. This is an excellent review and example that can be shown to the class! =D


message 33: by Ms. Jessie (new)

Ms. Jessie I liked how he compared the book to the real world.


message 34: by Brenda (last edited Apr 28, 2010 11:49am) (new)

Brenda L. I noticed that in your review, you put a passage from your book and then as you spoke about why you picked that passage, you connected it to your life.


message 35: by Hannah (new)

Hannah I really liked how you linked an obvious problem in the book to something in your daily life. It makes the book seem more realistic and relateable.


message 36: by Luna (new)

Luna I noticed that you gave your thoughts and opinions about the book and at the end you gave a prediction of what you think will happen next.


message 37: by Jonathan (new)

Jonathan I noticed you quoted part from the story and built off that so there wasn't much retell and you basically set your point. (revised) o_o


message 38: by Ozge (new)

Ozge Nice review! Even though it was pretty long I think it was good. I like how you included things that the book reminded you of.


message 39: by Kevin (new)

Kevin Mai He tells what was in the book and what he likes about what the author does. He also compared something from the book to yourself. >.>


message 40: by Daisy (new)

Daisy I noticed that you included your own thoughts and compared them with the book and the outside world.


message 41: by Vicki (new)

Vicki I noticed that he put in a quote and he explained why he put the quote into his review. He also put what he thought about because of the quote.


message 42: by Jacky (new) - added it

Jacky Yu I feel like this is stupid. Ms. Candlin Is making us kinda say this is good. WHAT IF WE THINK ITS NOT??!?!?!


message 43: by Alex (new)

Alex Mattina i liked the way you described how the author did a good job of describing the characters and


message 44: by Evan (new)

Evan i like your reveiw it includeded a lot of deatail k bye


message 45: by vincent (new)

vincent Kyin i like how u said which page it was on and what the page talked about


message 46: by Jason (new)

Jason Yee Ms. Gelinas have a really good review, he adds the concept from the book and compare it to his life


message 47: by Vanessa (new)

Vanessa I think it is very smart of Mr. Gelinas to include a quote in his review and to analyze his quote.


message 48: by Indira (new)

Indira I liked how you connected the book,to the outside world and putting your own opinion in it.


message 49: by Will (new)

Will Gebbie I think You should say what you think and predict what would happen next


message 50: by Tony (last edited Apr 28, 2010 11:56am) (new)

Tony Ho It is awesome for Mr.Gelinas to put the quote in the review and make the review really really long.


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