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Romiette and Julio
by Sharon M. Draper (Goodreads Author)
by Sharon M. Draper (Goodreads Author)
Ok so I'm going to start my reaction to Sharon Draper's Romiette and Julio by looking closely at an excerpt that I really enjoyed. I thought it was a powerful moment and wanted to share it with the Goodreads world.
On the fourth page of the book, Romiette, the narrator, writes:
"I hate picky people, watermelon, and chocolate. I hate gangs, violence and movies with too much sex and cussing. There are gangs in our school now, and it's a little scary because they want to control with threats and punches the actions and thinkings of kids and i can't be bothered with that, so they don't like me much" (Romiette and Julio p. 4).
First of all, I love when authors introduce characters in their stories by listing a number of traits that define them. This is a cool way to let your readers know exactly what your character is like, and to show a little bit about what they might become. At the start of Romiette and Julio, Romiette writes this passage into her journal. She reveals a lot about who she is and what she wants in life. I felt that this was a great way to open the book.
Romiette's fear about gang violence reminds me of students I've taught in my career, who have so much to say about the way kids treat each other in and out of school. I feel terrible for children who are bullied or mistreated by others, while being totally innocent themselves. When I see this type of behavior as a teacher, I wish I could solve all of my students' problems. But I can't.
I predict that this novel will deal with the issue of violence between opposing groups of kids. This is an important social issue for writers to discuss because violence really exists. Kids are faced with it everyday.
On the fourth page of the book, Romiette, the narrator, writes:
"I hate picky people, watermelon, and chocolate. I hate gangs, violence and movies with too much sex and cussing. There are gangs in our school now, and it's a little scary because they want to control with threats and punches the actions and thinkings of kids and i can't be bothered with that, so they don't like me much" (Romiette and Julio p. 4).
First of all, I love when authors introduce characters in their stories by listing a number of traits that define them. This is a cool way to let your readers know exactly what your character is like, and to show a little bit about what they might become. At the start of Romiette and Julio, Romiette writes this passage into her journal. She reveals a lot about who she is and what she wants in life. I felt that this was a great way to open the book.
Romiette's fear about gang violence reminds me of students I've taught in my career, who have so much to say about the way kids treat each other in and out of school. I feel terrible for children who are bullied or mistreated by others, while being totally innocent themselves. When I see this type of behavior as a teacher, I wish I could solve all of my students' problems. But I can't.
I predict that this novel will deal with the issue of violence between opposing groups of kids. This is an important social issue for writers to discuss because violence really exists. Kids are faced with it everyday.
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Apr 28, 2010 08:52am
IT WAS SUUPPPERRRR LONG
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i feel like you made a really good point but you wrote a dang story next time you should shorten it but other then that you have a good review
i think that you need more detail, and u need to tell us what did u learn from the storyyy but the review wass good
ooooo mmmmm ggg diz is tooo longgg buttt i think that u need more detail, and u should tell us what did u learn from the storyyy... but the review wass really good
When you're writing review, you guys can include passages from the books that you are reading. When you include a quotation from what you read, write what you are thinking about that particular passage. "....." (Book Name, Page Number)
This shows...
This passage makes me think...
This passage reminds me of...
I like how the author...
Oh yeah i do agree i think he really put alot of though in his review a liked how he took a part From the story and then after he rewrote it he wrote on what the though about that part
In this review, you referenced the story, and gave your opinion based on the content of the passage you showed, reviewing a part of the story specifically.
I like the way you predicted what would happen in the end of the review and not at the beginning. I think it's a good way to end your review.
I noticed that he put a lot of effort into this and it does give me a feel for how the book is written and what the PoV is throughout the novel. I think that his review on it was good but the elaboration as to who the character we're following is and why she is significant a little less descriptive. Very nice review!
i noticed you quoted part from the story and built off that so there wasnt much retell and you basically set your point o_o
he tells what was in the book and what he likes about what the author does. he also compared something from the book to yourself
I noticed that this review is very long... I liked how he made a prediction at the end. I also liked that he included a short paragraph from the story. To make, this better, I think he should include who he would recommend this book to.
Epic review, and not the fail kind. You explored numerous themes in the book, and didn't just alliterate or a tit erate, whatever it is. You gave your opinion and I thought it very in dept.
Gee Mr. Gelinas.... Even though your review is very long, it explains a lot of the story from just one page that you've read. This is an excellent review and example that can be shown to the class! =D
I noticed that in your review, you put a passage from your book and then as you spoke about why you picked that passage, you connected it to your life.
I really liked how you linked an obvious problem in the book to something in your daily life. It makes the book seem more realistic and relateable.
I noticed that you gave your thoughts and opinions about the book and at the end you gave a prediction of what you think will happen next.
I noticed you quoted part from the story and built off that so there wasn't much retell and you basically set your point. (revised) o_o
Nice review! Even though it was pretty long I think it was good. I like how you included things that the book reminded you of.
He tells what was in the book and what he likes about what the author does. He also compared something from the book to yourself. >.>
I noticed that you included your own thoughts and compared them with the book and the outside world.
I noticed that he put in a quote and he explained why he put the quote into his review. He also put what he thought about because of the quote.
I feel like this is stupid. Ms. Candlin Is making us kinda say this is good. WHAT IF WE THINK ITS NOT??!?!?!













