George is an interesting, fast paced short, I thought, divided into two parts. The first part is a non consensu...more***SELECT AUDIENCE*** for non-consent.
George is an interesting, fast paced short, I thought, divided into two parts. The first part is a non consensual initiation of a virgin girl. Our heroine, is observing and actively participating in the initiation of another because all girls who are bought by the pleasure house get initiated at arrival. I am a fan of non-consentual stories exploring frightened virgins and their forceful deflowering. Also, there was a hint of a medical kink, some body modification with a very hot Japanese Master which just added to my sadistic reading pleasures. If all forced Erotica featured barely legal virgins, I would not oppose, since it makes it that much more horrible.
I like to be made uncomfortable in dark reads. The second story, went where I did not want it go and I was made uncomfortable. Yey! I can not share without spoiling, though I have already sheared enough, but to say I was touched, sad and will likely not forget the second part of the story.
Overall, George is a well written novelette, with a thorough, straight to the point world building and an excellent introduction to this new to me Author. I would read more from this Author whenever sales hit and I can buy the shorts for a reasonable amount of money. I recommend George for a fast non con to wet the tastes and panties of deviant minds. If you are a beginner dark reader and want to try MF non con this would do the trick.
Owning Her Innocence is a story of an 18 year Haley who was raised by a single parent (father) and has just graduated from a Catholic school. She is c...moreOwning Her Innocence is a story of an 18 year Haley who was raised by a single parent (father) and has just graduated from a Catholic school. She is crushing on William, her father’s friend, whom she has called Daddy William from infancy. I have no issues with that; I think that’s hot.
This book took me on a ride and engaged my emos. 2-3 stars and I round up.
My emos for the first 55%:
Haley as Haley and not baby girl Haley, comes of as a woman who has come into age physically but not mentally. Her mentality is that of a 12 year old child and while I understand her naiveté towards sex, justifying her immaturity with the background given did not work for me since her best friend is boy crazy. I would presume her and her BFF would have discussed sex, thus making Haley less ignorant. There is also “an American living in the 21 century deal”. When I think of Nora of the fabulous Tiffany Reiz’s The Saint, Haley is what Nora might have been at 7 years of age. For example: Haley feels the bulge of his c**k poking her, so she is all coy about it. I thought she was age playing but no, she seriously had no idea that the thing poking her was his erection. THAT is ridiculous. The anatomy of men and their responses to sexual stimulation are simply impossible to ignore for an eighteen year old American girl living in this day and age.
”Years. I have tried for years to stop these feelings,…”
William comes of to me as a creep and a predator who claims to have wanted Haley for “years”. How many years is that? Couple or even 3 years I can handle (this puts her at 15-16), and although there is a part where he states it stared at her Sweet Sixteen Bday party, I was not buying his story. I got the impression he wanted her for longer than that and I was made very uncomfortable. Chatting pedos in an Age play book rattles my cage. I am not collared and leashed, so beware of the rabid lg. =D
What he did with her after a traumatic Bday party made him a creep. Spoiler includes the event at about 30%: (view spoiler)[Haley gets drugged, her limbs are weak and she can not move. There is an attempt to rape her but William comes in and saves the day. He then, with her father’s permission, takes her to his house to care for her. Why is her father not caring for her in their home is explained later but at this point it was beyond me. William takes drugged and mentally young Haley to his house where he strips her naked, binds her to his bed and jerks of on her tits. He also blindfolds her. He then leaves her bound and blindfolded, so if she were to vomit or foam at the mouth from the drug induced sleep no one would be the wiser. Daddy William says he bound her to the bed because she was fighting. How was she fighting if she could not lift her limbs before? Did the drug wear off and if so, why is she fighting the man she wants? (hide spoiler)]THIS is nonsense.
William’s POV is that of a 18 year old boyman. When he came in his pants I was stunned. His age was never revealed but for saying he was older, so maybe mid-late 30s.
Daddy William is a predator. He repeatedly says he wants her forever, he does not accept no, he would bar the windows if she wanted to leave…you think its figurative speech? check out Daddy William:
“I’m glad to hear you say you want this, because I wasn’t planning on letting you go. Your agreement will make things a lot easier.”
“Make her need only me.”
”Even though I told her that I would let her leave tomorrow, if she chooses to, I know I won’t let her. I would do anything and everything to try to get her to stay of her own free will. But if push comes to shove, I had no problem tying her ass to my bed and making sure she craves what only I could give her.”
The statements above remove consent. His intent to force himself if necessary is clear. I really wished the Author did not make him into this creepy predator Daddy.
My emos after 55%:
Obviously, at this point someone needs to come clean to her father. This is the part where both William and Haley show maturity. They stand together and say that their relationship is one of two consenting adults. Oh thank you! I needed that show of character for Haley since I needed her to be just Haley and not baby girl Haley. I needed to know she understands her position in this relationship and although she is naive and young and I do not believe her status will improve her development, I can without judgment, accept her decision.
Overall, I am compelled to say this: DaddyDoms are not creeps and pedophiles. They are men who enjoy their adult partners. Haley is an immature woman and William is a man. What I am uneasy about: I think if Haley wished to leave him, he would harm her. I gave this book 3 stars because, if I separate myself from the whole “creepy and willing to force it William”, I liked the DD/lg parts and I really enjoyed as much as I could and during the sex scenes tried to keep away from the negative thoughts I have over his intentions. I really wish William was not made into a predator and I wish Haley was written as a more mature character for I dearly love Age play. For real. I would read more from this Author.
Finally, I have some reader advice if the Author is reading here: the flipping between past and present tense needs to be addressed in the future works. More kinky play also =D Little girls should be spanked often. ;P
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Adult Paranormal Romance with BDSM (Domestic Discipline really)
I didn't know there was a story before this novella. Someone should fix the reading ord...moreAdult Paranormal Romance with BDSM (Domestic Discipline really)
I didn't know there was a story before this novella. Someone should fix the reading order of this book here on Goodreads. The couple was so well fleshed out in this short I was feeling I was missing something the whole time. ANNNNND yes they have their own story.
Nevertheless, this was my first read by Ms. Rose and I read another of her shorts right after it! Then, I went into searching for The Bossman since I was sure I won a copy sometime in the past. Maybe not, but will then just buy it.
In this short, Rose writes delicious domestic discipline in a loving marriage with a baby, a nursing mom and hot Vamp husband. I can somewhat relate and so I'll have to leave it at that. The only thing I can complain about here is: Where is the DaddyDom? =D but hey that would then go straight to my kinks and I'd not tell you about my reading experience here in public.
If you have not read Rose before and you enjoy DD stories, READ this SHORT NOW!
Abigail is being screened by the Governor to see if she has been marked which is how they determine if she is a witch or n...more Historical Erotica with BDSM
Abigail is being screened by the Governor to see if she has been marked which is how they determine if she is a witch or not. She must feel and respond to sensual and sexual stimulation to prove her innocence. I ask myself: Why oh why, was I not a virginal girl in that place?
The Mark reads like a single long BDSM scene starting with public humiliation, then moving onto the private chambers where we get D/s, BD and SM including knifes and so there is some edge to this read I thought was pretty hot.
It was a little bit of a bore to read a lengthy scene with little dialogue for me. Its not like I think they should chat it up while she is bent over and being tested, but I would have enjoyed a break to introduce the characters and the world. I think, if I had to do it over again, I would read it in two sittings.
Overall, it was a hot novella and I would read more from this new to me Author.
WOW! What an amazing world and even better world building delivery by this new to me Author! Demons provide protection for Arc...more Adult Paranormal Romance
WOW! What an amazing world and even better world building delivery by this new to me Author! Demons provide protection for Archangels who are ruthlessly hunted by humans. Angels are brutally murdered for their wings just so rich fkers, such as our heroine's Mommy and Daddy, can display their collection of wings to other rich fkers and make all the rich fkers happy. This has been going on to the point where Angels are nearly EXTINCT!
Do you feel me? I am outraged and loving the dark World here.
Our heroine comes to the compound, where Demons and Archangels live, demanding they release her idiot sister (who is running around with poachers=those who kill Angels) because she thinks Demons have her and are going to harm her for her family's sins. I don't blame them, since well, those same people, her Mommy and Daddy, have also killed BABY ANGELS.
But no, Demons do not have her sister, in fact, Demons go out of their way to help her and her sister. Archangel saves her life in the meantime too, he walks and flies her around, shows her good times and they are falling for each other. The problem is, she is her father's daughter and her daddy would love nothing more than to add our hero to his collection.
THIS book was AWESOME up until about 87% when our hero makes the dumbest decision of his LOOOOOOOOOONNGGGG life: He makes a phone call and shit just hits the fan for me. I was like: WHAT?! Are you joking? (view spoiler)[ Mind reading Angels mind fucks the heroine into telling the demons and angels where her parent's collection is and how to get in the house. They want to destroy the collection and kill her parents for revenge since because of them and the likes of them, they are nearly extinct. Heroine gets all pissed off at hero. Hero feels bad, so he calls to warn her parents they are coming. Her parents and their gruesome art display are FOR now ok. (hide spoiler)]
I rarely if ever use gifs but this guy really ticked me off and I had to stop reading or I'd throw my kindle. Granted, in the end, things go back to "sorted", however, not for me. I do not understand his decision and she tells him later to "grovel". Excuse the fk out of me but whatever for? Oh please.
HE is Too Stupid To Read About. 1 star. Although, do note I see why this book has received good ratings since the writing is excellent and the story is told well. I just really did not like what happened in the story.
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Adult Paranormal Dark Erotica ***SELECT AUDIENCE*** for non-consent
Suffer was a unique read for me since I do not remember ever reading about an Alpha...more Adult Paranormal Dark Erotica ***SELECT AUDIENCE*** for non-consent
Suffer was a unique read for me since I do not remember ever reading about an Alpha female forcing an Alpha male.
Derek is an asshole of mega proportions. He sees a girl, wants a girl, gets a girl. Its all very simple to him and he has 0 conscience and respect for other’s feelings. He is now after Sarah, a girl who does not want to date him, but Derek being Derek can not come to terms. He doesn’t understand why/how/what? would she not want him for his is the Master of the Universe. I use this term on purpose since I think there are deliberate jabs on Christian Grey character of the Shades trilogy. Derek is portrayed as Grey-like stocker type who goes after what he wants relentlessly. HOWEVER, poor Derek should be careful what he wishes for, because Sarah is different.
I found the pacing of the book fast and I was flipping through the pages wondering what will happen to this guy and what the fk is going on! The world building is the single most important part of any first book in the paranormal series, and while I do not want it dumped on me, I do need some information. What is given here briefly covered Sarah’s character, yet not even that was enough, since I still do not understand what happened. Also, what does the club have to do with the story? Is that the coven? Did I miss something? The world was not painted in a coherent manner, so the book felt more like a prequel than a first in the series.
Overall, 3-4 star read for me and I round up mainly because I really enjoyed reading about his evil deeds and then degradation and the non-consensual elements were delicious to read. I also enjoy reading about an Alpha asshole, so that is a plus too. I would read more from this new to me Author and I look forward to the second book in this series. I would recommend this Dark Erotica to readers who want to see what happens when women turn into predators and punish bad man.
”Her hands gripped the back of my head, showing me harder into her body. I sucked and swallowed, sliding my fingers deep, and then out to work her nub. Her hips moved against me. I drew breath when I could, only to be slammed back to my task once more.”
***book provided by a Friend with Author's permission
I downloaded this teaser for free and I liked it enough to buy the serial in a complete set. It was: "Oh, what will happen to this...more Adult Contemporary.
I downloaded this teaser for free and I liked it enough to buy the serial in a complete set. It was: "Oh, what will happen to this pretty woman?" and I liked it since it sounded promising. Also I enjoy Torre's writing.
Going into Killing Sarai I expected Dark Erotica or at the very least a sexy, dark Romance but it was more of a sweet...more New Adult Contemporary. dark-ish.
Going into Killing Sarai I expected Dark Erotica or at the very least a sexy, dark Romance but it was more of a sweet Romantic thriller with very little sexy. I have to be honest and say that after 20% I considered filing it as sampled and dropping the book since the 1st person present tense and a dual POV in 1st person were just not working for me. However, I continued because I thought the plot was very good. I have to mention that both POVs in 1st person were indistinguishable.
I did get an ending I wanted in this book with no HFN/HEA for the couple, so I gave it 3 stars since I really liked the direction it went in the end.
I would not read book two for I am happy the way the story ended and because the writing reads like crack, yet I do not enjoy this kind of writing, so I would not read from this Author again.
I would recommend this story to NA lovers who enjoy romantic thrillers with a bit of darkness and very little sexy times.(less)
I picked up this book on the fly because it was a fast one to read one afternoon. I was entertained enough and this bo...more New Adult Contemporary Romance.
I picked up this book on the fly because it was a fast one to read one afternoon. I was entertained enough and this book was ok on my 5 star rating scale.
Ms. Brent went from setting up an elaborate dark plot to erotica in 5 seconds; she forgot about the plot while in the begging of the book she sets up her heroine's life with murdering everyone around her. Disappointing. In addition, I wanted a dual POV here, so I can read about the biker dude and what he is doing on his biker days since that sounded more interesting than a girl stuck in a clubhouse.
I was hoping book 1 is not a standalone since I did not find the ending believable. I really would have read book 2 about the same couple since I wanted their romance to make more sense.
The best part about this book were Daddy role issues and I don't mean her biological father either. That was very naughty. (less)
Our hero is suppressing his kinky needs while he maneuvers through his serious vanilla relationship. Lucky for him, just b...more Adult Contemporary Erotica.
Our hero is suppressing his kinky needs while he maneuvers through his serious vanilla relationship. Lucky for him, just before he ties the knot, his needs come rushing to the fore when he meets a girl into Age play.
Look But Don't Touch has to be one of the hottest Age play stories out there. Although this is my kink, I have not read many, so I don't have a lot to compare it against, but still no page was wasted, Daddy Dom was a dirty, kinky man and the little girl was fantastic. The erotic level of this short is staggering considering the few pages Author gives us.
I am ready for the next story in this mini series. Note, this is a complete story, although the Author does continue their journey in another book. I recommend this book to all Age play lovers.
"I want her to scream for me, call me Daddy, beg for more when I f**k her silly. I want her to be desperate. I want her to suck on my c**k like it's her pacifier."
Angels in Leather was a total bust for me. I waited a while before writing a review since I am behind on reviews, so I d...more New Adult Contemporary Romance
Angels in Leather was a total bust for me. I waited a while before writing a review since I am behind on reviews, so I do not have fresh details to share.
He is damaged, out of control and I just can not seem to pin him as a leader. "Seeing her kneel before me, gives me a feeling of dominance, like I'm not weak, like I'm not completely fucked up." - Therapy is in order but instead he is having Rape Fantasy RP sex. I rolled my eyes many times and barely made it to the end, although I do find Rape RP a lot of fun.
This is the second book I have read by this Author and I think that Ms. Jewel is rushing her books to get them out as fast as possible and in turn, the books are not comprehensive, the logical character and plot developments are suppressed by impulsive writing.
And another thing: "knickers" are panties/underwear in the good 'ol U.S. of A. Something to remember when writing in haste is to proofread and edit.
OH! this was a hot one! Derek, the sugar-kinkster, gets thrown into the masses with kinky folk who are into Auctions and pon...more Adult Contemporary Erotica
OH! this was a hot one! Derek, the sugar-kinkster, gets thrown into the masses with kinky folk who are into Auctions and ponies. OH my! wait what?
Did someone say ponies? o-O
Part 1 is, well obviously, part 1 of the serial, so there was just a teaser of whats to come. The best part of this short was reading about the activity in the stable next door. Batman himself masturbated on the roof. - I know, I was watching. =D
Derek takes the bait and off we go. I hope we go to some humiliating pony play with MfM and a whole lotta BDSM.
Would I read more from this new to me Author? UM...YEAH! Looking forward to reading this series.
"It clashed with her naive fantasies of submission. In her fantasies, she'd always get to explore her needs, always had a choice to submit, and most of all, always got to come. The life of a real sub, and especially that of a slave, was quite different...she found she liked it that way."
The BOSS is a steady kinky read with developed characters, very good writing and a side plot which kept me intere...moreAdult Contemporary Romance with kink.
The BOSS is a steady kinky read with developed characters, very good writing and a side plot which kept me interested throughout the book.
There are lots of reviews on Goodreads for this book, but I did not find one from my kinky friends which goes into the D/s dynamic of the couple. One can give me an exuberant plot with all kinds of twists and turns, but if presented in the read, regardless if it was the focus point or not, the D/s will always be a focus point for me.
So what of it? Neil is training his submissive to his liking. In the bedroom he is into sensual BDSM, light bondage, some control and he enjoys light SM. They are both into the bedroom but not the boardroom D/s, therefore, this D/s dynamic is called bedroom D/s regardless of the few attempts to take it out of the bed. Neil and Sophie have a lose or rather at ease D/s, where parties enjoy their dynamic, it works for them as such and I was very happy to voyeur on a healthy kinky relationship. I would consider this kinky to light BDSM since towards the end it gets more kinky sex than BDSM scene. In addition, he is rather apologetic and he also indulges in her kinks and her pleasure, meaning she is the focus of the kink. Now, this is wonderful if one is not in “need” of submission and control, but for me I would be needy of more if Neil was my dominant. He is considerate, loving and once apologized for showing his c**k far up her throat which made her gag. “Sorry” he said - OH HORROR! lol - For a submissive or heavens forbid a slave in need to please a dominant this can be a down moment, since it is often those in need are in need to SERVE and PLEASE their controlling party at their own expense. I am also particularly fond of humiliation which neither of these two are into. I think Sophie has strong masochistic tendencies and I would LOVE to read about the SM of these two. I do think she wants more and the best part about all this is that they are taking it step by step. I think this is realistic or at least it is realistic for me and would lead to a healthy bedroom BDSM later on. I can tell the author did her research since there are attempts to describe the feelings during a scene.
I have seen some commentary on Sophie’s submission with comments on her strength of character and thus her place as a submissive. I do not know where the idea of weakness and submission gets thrown in together but I assure you this is often not the case. For a new submissive, it comes natural to please but she still needs to be trained to obey and please the dominant who is training her. She is His. Thus, she is, to me a perfect fit for Neil and she wants to be a submissive.
I do LOVE my BDSM harder, edgier and with more humiliation scenes which was not the case here, but I really liked how they both enjoyed their kinky side and I would whole heartily encourage more. Oh and the age difference doesn’t bother me at all, in fact, I would have up the stars for Daddy Dom but it was not to be. lol
Overall, the focus of the book is the couple’s budding relationship, how they balance with turbulence at work and their kinky private life. I liked both characters, the plot and the overall sense of upcoming doom. I am going to give this book 3 + stars. There is a lot going on outside of the bedroom, so I am cautions since I do not know if they will drop the scenes or not. When I read the rest of the series, I will return here if the rating needs upgrading; it just depends if I would rec this series to a BDSM book readers. For now, I would recommend this series for those who enjoy a developed romance, a steady plot with feather light bedroom BDSM and do not mind a large age gap between the characters. This book was good.
”The sense of doing something dangerous, but not actually being in danger, because I knew Neil would never hurt me. I could enjoy a hard spanking and a punishing f**k because I knew that while he could make me feel so many things - lust, pleasure, anticipation, pain – he would never actually make me feel afraid. I didn’t fear him, and I didn’t have to fear making him disapprove of me. Everything we did together was for our mutual pleasure. ”
***SELECT AUDIENCE for non-consent*** Adult PA/D Romance
The Race was unputdownable for me!
I have now read all of Vora's books *sobs* and this was my...more ***SELECT AUDIENCE for non-consent*** Adult PA/D Romance
The Race was unputdownable for me!
I have now read all of Vora's books *sobs* and this was my very favorite. Our heroine is on an island where they hold Races for men of the island to hunt and rape the women. She wants off the island and she will kill to swim away for she is a survivor and a predator, although, she gets caught and raped several times throughout the book.
The plot is engaging with many fighting scenes and a lot of rape, so this worked very well for me. =D There is a scene in the book where two people attempt to have consensual sex but need to sort of explain to each other what to do even though they have fked and been fked many times. I was touched by this part since it was very sad to read about their circumstances and their romance.
The world building was ok but still lacking in depth (like how the hell did people get there? were they born there?) and also the male MC was introduced later in the novel. I think, of her three novels I have read, this one is significantly better in the romantic connection between the main leads, so that is why I liked it the most. In the future works, I suggest introducing a male lead earlier in the book and developing the world more.
Overall, I really love Vora's work and I am fan of this Authors. Dark Erotica readers looking for quickies to sate their deprived reading tendencies should check out her work. Highly recommended!
"Inside, people were f**king. Hundreds of people were f**king. Moans and grunts filled the air, punctuated by the staccato beat of flesh slapping against flesh."
Do I have your attention?
Ruby is in the said tent getting ready to slut herself to earn beads and maybe a royal f**king. This is one of the HOTTEST, PORNIEST, SLUTIEST adventures I have ever embarked upon through a character in a book. It is also bizarre and lacks a romance.
Do I give a crap? nope.
I had a ball reading this book! Her "c*nt* is "golden and magical and
" I love c**k."
"If it's shaped like a c**k, I'll f**k it," said Ruby,...
GOT TO LOVE AN HONEST GIRL. JUST LIKE THAT.
Highly recommended to sluts and everyone who likes to read about them.
Domestic Affairs is a Sci-fi Erotica about legalized prostitution aka. companionship and the t...moreAdult Sci-Fi Erotica. Friend Recommendation – thank you!
Domestic Affairs is a Sci-fi Erotica about legalized prostitution aka. companionship and the troubles, as well as perks, which come with being placed with various clients.
Kit is very likable girl, and although she is self destructive, she is also very pliant and responsive when it comes to sating the needs of her clientele. Once Kit was placed in a care of a spoiled man in his late twenties who enjoys humiliation of the non-sexy sort, I was starting to cringe since I did not like the “hero”. Luckily, the author wrote him as such because he is not the hero in this book, so the first 30% is world building set up which in a novella length work is quite a lot to take away from the male MC. Hence, the depth of his character suffered and I had a difficult time understanding their relationship dynamic. My “loss” at their dynamic was further confirmed with the end scene and I did understand it all. (view spoiler)[ The scene where she ties him up completely confused me as to its purpose. It was vague at best. “If the chains aren’t on the outside, they’re on the inside…” I get that part but I thought the scene made no sense. IMO, restraints are enjoyed only if the one being bound is able to let go since it is a serious loss of control, regardless of the popular belief that bondage is a light form of kink. It is indeed, a powerful tool for dominance. I did not think either party enjoyed that scene, nor did I think it served its purpose in the book. (hide spoiler)] However, the big scene at the end served one purpose to me: it showed very clearly why we use safewords when shit hits the fan during a scene and one or both partners start to either get angry, violent or scared. It is an excellent example of what not to do when being kinky IMO. Reading that scene was horrific for me, I was not comfortable since I felt neither of the two enjoyed it and the male lead’s reactions appeared like he snapped. Now, this was possibly the point, but while reading it and re-reading it 3 times, I still was not able to “get it”. In fact, because of the last scene and the rushed HFN, I almost lowered the rating to 2 stars but the bedroom scenery was hot!
VERY HOT! The erotic parts of this book were excellent and served the purpose in getting the reader hot and bothered. I particularly enjoyed the party and the MFF scene. Really good stuff. Thomas please. Overall, if the last scene played out so I can understand it, regardless of my comfort level, I would go for 4 stars, but it lost me there because I just didn’t see the point. The sex in this book was hot and I liked it. I would read more from this Author most definitely.
”We are going to bathe, get into bed, and go to sleep. In the morning, we’re going to f**k, and you’re going to want it as much as I do. Everything else can wait.”