Among the debut authors I've read so far in 2013, I'd say Lindsay Ribar is pretty high on the list, despite my three star rating. The writing was stro...moreAmong the debut authors I've read so far in 2013, I'd say Lindsay Ribar is pretty high on the list, despite my three star rating. The writing was strong and the plot was new and interesting, but about two thirds of the way through the book got pretty boring, which is the reason for the three stars. If it stayed strong it would definitely have gotten four, but I felt like it trailed off into random nothingness.
The characters were pretty well thought out. They weren't overly unique, but I felt some connection with them and I didn't see any crazy cliches. The relationship between Oliver and Margo was also very good - the fights they had actually made sense, verses most of the fights we see today that are obviously just the authors wanting their characters to fight but having no idea what it will be about. I felt like they took a good amount of time to start liking each other, but after they started dating they "fell in love" way too fast.
The plot started out really strong. There wasn't too much mystery about what Oliver was, and that was refreshing because it you know anything at all about the book it's that he's a genie. That's something that drives me crazy about most YA books - the heroine takes forever to find out what her man is.
Overall, it was a pretty good book, but faded out in the end. I would certainly recommend it, though. (less)
Bewitching is one of those books that maybe turn out alright in the end, but drive you crazy all throughout the middle, and...moreLight spoilers throughout.
Bewitching is one of those books that maybe turn out alright in the end, but drive you crazy all throughout the middle, and not in a good way. The biggest issue I had with this book is the (semi)main character, Emma. She's the most perfect goody-two shoes a person can be, and while innocent is sometimes a good thing, with her it was just annoying. It was very obvious from the beginning that her step-sister was just trying to get what she has, but little Emma can only see the good in people so even after Lisette steals her earrings Emma still thinks Lisette is trying to be her friend.
I rather enjoyed the short stories, which seemed very out of place but fit anyway. In most other books they wouldn't have worked, but Flinn made it so that you got all caught up in them and almost forget about Emma, but then when the focus turned back to Emma again you were right at home. The ending to the mermaid one was unexpected and so completely awesome!
Maybe one of my biggest issues was Warner. [spoiler]He seemed like a good guy, but then all of a sudden he was a complete douchebag. I liked that for once it wasn't the typical "I found my true love on the first try," but it was so sudden that it just didn't feel right. I can have no respect for a boy who says he loves a girl and then instantly believes the lies someone tells him about said girl and cheats on her because of it. How can someone be so stupid? He should have confronted her about it, asked her if it was true. Even if she lied, if he "loves" her he should be able to tell when she lies and therefore have an answer. And never should he cheat on her just because he thinks she's a jerk! That just makes him a jerk instead.[/spoiler]
But even though the middle area made me want to pull my hair out, I feel like the ending made up for it. It's not a stupid, cliche ending, and that took me off guard because I completely expected it to be. Because of that I liked it a lot. [spoiler]Even though it's stupid how fast Travis(or whatever his name is) starts to like Emma. Just because a girl has the same taste in books as you doesn't mean you have an instant attraction, and I thought Emma was a little fickle just getting over Warner that fast.[/spoiler]
If you picked this book up expecting to read another Beastly, drop it now. If you picked it up wanting it to be centered around Kendra like the description says, drop it. But I think it's still a good read and I recommend it to anyone who loves fairy tales and doesn't mind a lot of chick drama.
Also, I just want to put it out there that you don't need to read Beastly to understand this at all. It references it at some points but not in a big way, and only saying things that you could read from the description of the book or figure out from the classic story.(less)
This isn't going to be a very in-depth review, I just want to point out some things that nagged me about this book.
First off, Mary SueAnn. I hate this...moreThis isn't going to be a very in-depth review, I just want to point out some things that nagged me about this book.
First off, Mary SueAnn. I hate this character. This is the most Mary Sue-ish character I've ever read about. Everything about her is perfect, everyone loves her, she can do no wrong, she only looks out for others... ugh. Everyone has flaws. Give her some.
I almost choked myself every time her and Riley were together. Most of it is admiring his body, or his face, or something physical about him. She almost never describes the inside of him, just the outside.
This was such an awkward book. Either it was sloooooooooow, or it was so action packed that even the action seemed boring because there was nothing exciting about it anymore. It had been going on for so long that it was just normal. But then it got slow again, then more action, slow, action. There was never any in-between.
Victoria may be the best character in this book. I loved watching Aden try to get her to show emotions. At first I was pissed, because it was like he loved her but he was just trying to change her. But then I realized that he was only doing it for her own good, and that was a pretty awesome thing to do.
Intertwined, I loved. Unraveled, not so much. I was debating whether to give it 2 star or 3, but I chose three because overall I sorta liked it. Let's hope Twisted is way better!(less)