There are some good nuggets in this book - in fact, the book is all nuggets, one- to three-page snippets of advice. Most are helpful, but nothing is mThere are some good nuggets in this book - in fact, the book is all nuggets, one- to three-page snippets of advice. Most are helpful, but nothing is mind-blowing or novel. And with the last part focused on the publishing stage, this book is already becoming dated, as it focuses solely on traditional publishing strategies. Inspiring and motivating, yes, but if you're looking for concret writing advice, not so much. ...more
Just couldn't get into this book. While I'm not a fan of info dumps, and would rather be left with questions at the start of a story, this story neverJust couldn't get into this book. While I'm not a fan of info dumps, and would rather be left with questions at the start of a story, this story never seemed to give me enough to grasp what was going on or why I should care about these characters. I couldn't find a point to focus on. I think. I'm not even sure what the problem was, but that itself says enough. ...more
I had trouble putting this down! A real page turner, many nights I was up too late because I had to find out what happened, or the action and suspenseI had trouble putting this down! A real page turner, many nights I was up too late because I had to find out what happened, or the action and suspense kept me riveted. Interesting characters who weren't what they first appeared to be often surprised me with a new, previously unseen facet to their character that led to actions I didn't expect. I was always waiting for something else to go wrong.
The author developed the characters while continuing the action, rather than slowing it down. The result: three-dimensional characters and a fast-paced plot. No cookie cutter characters here! Even those you love to hate had their good moments that kept you off balance, unsure of what a character will do next.
The alien was fascinating and as complex as the other characters. His motivations developed with the story. Jane's new role was quite a twist. She has a really novel relationship with the alien. And with the ship. Terrific story with terrific characters. My only complaint - it ended too soon. I hope there's a sequel!...more
This was such a creepy story! From the people turned into mannequins, to the town with no way out, to the Preacher who apparently can't be killed andThis was such a creepy story! From the people turned into mannequins, to the town with no way out, to the Preacher who apparently can't be killed and whose main source of entertainment is the suffering of his prisoners, this story was chilling. I was constantly regretting that I'd read this right before bed! If you're looking for a horror story that will keep you turning the pages, this one is for you. ...more
This story grabs your attention from the start. The daily log format set up allowed a conversational tone that was engaging and kept the reader in theThis story grabs your attention from the start. The daily log format set up allowed a conversational tone that was engaging and kept the reader in the story. The narrator's voice felt like someone was actually talking to me. The audio book could be really good.
(view spoiler)[I did wonder about his immediate reaction. I would have expected a moment of panic, perhaps. He seemed to approach the situation logically and strategically from the start. Although, after reading the whole story, I can say it was really his personality. He's a very logical, scientific character. So, maybe not. But still, he was stranded on Mars. Ok, he did start out with a rather extreme, pessimistic view. Not many stories start out with a first line of "Well, I'm fucked." (hide spoiler)]
The story was quite a ride. As I got further into the story, I had more and more trouble stopping reading. By the end there was no stopping me. The suspense was only paused occasionally when an expected problem went smoothly - which wasn't often.
The protagonist was hilarious. I even laughed out loud on occasion. The story is like Castaway on Mars. But interweaving the story of those on earth was a good addition, intensified the drama.
The narration was such a stripped down style but I liked the straightforward delivery. Very little fluff. Only description when necessary. Many characters were never described. The author left that to your imagination.
The science was more detailed than usual but I enjoyed it. Some of the descriptions got very technical. So it's really like Geek Castaway. Very geeky. I enjoyed it, but probably because I'm a science lover.
But the best was that he was hilarious. Very fun, very quick read. ["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>...more
Excellent guide for building a story with well-developed characters and a page-turning plot. Good examples, and explicit explanation, taking you throuExcellent guide for building a story with well-developed characters and a page-turning plot. Good examples, and explicit explanation, taking you through all the parts of a story. Starts with the development of characters then moves on to plot, moving you through the big moments in a story. This works no matter how developed your story idea is - if you just have an inkling, you can start at the beginning. If you already have started your story, you can look through to see where you might be lacking - character development, giving your character a goal that will carry her through the whole story, or a character change arc that fuels the big events. Highly recommend this for anyone who wants to produce a fuller, more exciting story. ...more
The Mindspace series has evolved and deepened in a way that feels natural. Vacant picks up where the last left off, with the characters feeling with tThe Mindspace series has evolved and deepened in a way that feels natural. Vacant picks up where the last left off, with the characters feeling with the consequences of their recent decisions.
(view spoiler)[Adam is forced to handle things on his own this time, and he learns things about himself and his limitations. He also keeps getting thrown off by people believing him, accepting his word, and generally being treated as one of them. He's not used being treated respectfully. It's a whole new feeling. Which is kind of sad but nice to see. Perhaps it'll boost his confidence in the end.
Though Cherabino isn't there, he misses her, and his constant thinking of her managed to keep her as a real part of the story throughout instead of just at the beginning and end.
His motivation throughout the story is to save Tommy, but much of his motivation comes from his guilt, which he has in abundance. Adam needs to find a healthier motivation to really move on from where he is. Where he is now is so fragile, if too much goes wrong that he can blame himself for, his guilt will eat him alive. I'm sure Swartz can help him out with that. And I hope Swartz sticks around for a while!
Seeing him turn away from the vial of Satin - wow. Powerful moment. But heartwrenching. He's getting a better grip on his addiction, but it really will be with him for the rest of his life.
Adam's relationship with Cherabino is sometimes so frustrating, but I think it might be because it's so realistic. I was looking forward to their reunion at the end of the story, but instead I got all their emotional baggage -- Cherabino's turmoil from all she'd gone through and having gone through it alone, and Adam's roller coaster ride he'd just gotten off, and then recovering from his injuries. I just wanted him to point to his sling and his bandages and say, "Hey! I just got out of the hospital! Sorry it took me so long to get here!" But as much as I wanted Cherabino to understand Adam's intentions, her emotions and reactions really rang true -- even when she contradicted herself. She wanted Adam with her, even when she said it was okay for him to work. She knew the child had to take precedence, she just didn't have to like it. Well, neither did I! It sucked monkey balls. I just want them to have one happy moment. Instead, torture, heartbreak, and Adam on the couch.
Yeah... It was so awesome. The end was an emotional roller coaster and I enjoyed every minute of it. There. I said it. *sigh* I must have a drama queen hidden inside me somewhere. (hide spoiler)]
I really see a war coming between the normals and the Abled. That would be worse than the Tech Wars. But so awesome. Can't wait for the next one!["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>...more
Flying to the Fire is a YA thriller with a unique plot. I have never read a story of this kind before and it was refreshing to read something so diffeFlying to the Fire is a YA thriller with a unique plot. I have never read a story of this kind before and it was refreshing to read something so different. The concepts of a young boy who can see where people's spirits go after they die, and that birds are the spirits of the deceased going on to the next life, were fascinating and kept me turning the pages. Being hunted by a scientist who wants to use his abilities for his own goals brings in an edge of realism and a sort of science fiction twist to the story, rather than a spiritual approach. Another aspect of this story I appreciated is that the main character, Danny, is deaf, but the author treats this as just another trait of the character. The character is not disabled, and his deafness is not a focus of the story. It's just one thing about him, like the color of his hair. But at the same time, this added layers to the characters of Danny and his family, and adds to the novelty of the story.
Authentic characters and a heavy dose of suspense create an exciting, fun story. If you're looking for something new and different than the usual YA fare, this is sure to entertain....more
I had to stop reading this one. I tried, but the writing was clearly subpar from the start. It didn't flow well and felt amateurish. Heavy on the adveI had to stop reading this one. I tried, but the writing was clearly subpar from the start. It didn't flow well and felt amateurish. Heavy on the adverbs ("Flaster smiled condescendingly," "'Uh,' he said concisely," "Flaster ...sipped delicately," as well as sitting heavily, saying nonchalantly, loudly, softly, and so, all within three or four pages!). And the point of view didn't seem firmly in the pov character. Not entirely head hopping so much as the first-person narrator describing himself, and referring to the thoughts and feelings of the person next to him. And lots of exclamation points (An average of five *per page*. Really?) Also, the main machine that let them travel to this other world, a portal of sorts - they called it a "zievatron," which, frankly, I had a hard time taking seriously. It sounded like a term out of the fifties. The narrative itself actually felt very dated - the tone and voice, to me, felt like something written perhaps in the sixties, though it was published in 1984.
I stopped reading by page 15 or so. Perhaps that seems too soon, but it's one thing when a story doesn't grab you at first because of a slow start. But when the writing is just bad, there's not much hope for it improving within the same book. Perhaps his later books are better. More important, my To Read list is too long to waste time reading something I'm not enjoying. So many books, so little time, you know? ...more
Blue Labyrinth is an interesting and exciting ride, but I found it a bit of a departure from what I've come to expect from the Pendergast series. A faBlue Labyrinth is an interesting and exciting ride, but I found it a bit of a departure from what I've come to expect from the Pendergast series. A familiar character returns for this one, which was nice. In general, normally secondary characters take centerstage for this story, so if you're looking for a story centered on the Agent, this would not be your first choice.
(view spoiler)[Pendergast starts out in true form -- picking up on obscure clues and disappearing on the hunt, but not explaining his actions to anyone. The book begins in a Sherlockian fashion, opening with the dead body of Alban, and Pendergast pursued the clues with more determination than ever. But in a novel twist, Pendergast is hit with the poison that killed Alban, becoming the next victim of his son's killer.
From here, we saw a different Pendergast. At one point, I thought we were glimpsing a sign of human frailty in him, which was unusual enough, when the day after a physical fight in which he was equally matched, he was stiff and sore. But we soon found that he'd been poisoned.
The symptoms continued to produce behavior out of the ordinary for Agent Pendergast, such as the sudden listlessness when he saw the picture of his attacker as the suspect in the Museum murder. He soon became more erratic and unhinged. During his whole trip to Brazil, he was weak, frail. The fact that he was looking for his son added another dimension of vulnerability. It was tough watching Pendergast in such a state.
Towards the end, he'd given up on surviving. On one hand, it was logical, as no one had survived before. On the other hand, he's never been one to give up. But the elixir was working on his mind, and he wasn't as sharp as he might have been.
What was more unusual -- and more disturbing -- was that he was in need of help in this story. In fact, he needed saving in the end. This is a different turn than any previous book.
His relationship to Constance was different as well. He was more open with her, more honest, revealing. And yes, there was the kiss, but Constance seemed to place more importance on the fact that he called her his oracle. Which he then threw back in her face in a way only Pendergast could pull off -- and live, apparently. Constance showed her claws in this one -- and they are sharp.
I'm disappointed the authors decided to get rid of Alban so quickly. I'm sure they had good reasons, but he seemed to have potential to be a formidable and worthy adversary for Pendergast. Now, we'll never know. (hide spoiler)]
Overall a fun ride, full a suspense, mystery, and tension. Just not what I was expecting. ["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>...more
The Retribution is a suspenseful, gripping thriller. The serial killer Jacko Vance was one scary villain. His ruthlessness, his methodical approach toThe Retribution is a suspenseful, gripping thriller. The serial killer Jacko Vance was one scary villain. His ruthlessness, his methodical approach to his vengeance, and how well he knew those he sought to take vengeance on came together to create a truly scary killer.
However, there were a lot of characters minor characters I found easily blended together. Or rather, they didn't distinguish themselves from each other much. They were generally one of the crime investigation team members. Occasionally, the author would try to hint who the killer was after by describing them or where he was, but I couldn't tell by the description who they were talking about. I'm not sure if this was because it took me a while to read (only because of time constraints and not because of the book) or because of a lack of connection with the characters.
The other thing that bothered me was the tendency of the author to head-hop. Sometimes it would only happen at the very end of the scene. Other times, the narration would slip into another character's head midway through, then return to the original character's point of view. Head-hopping never fails to be annoying and confusing.
With those two problems, this potential four-star story dropped down to a three-star. And yet, it left me wanting to know more about the main characters. And if the author can create such a suspenseful story and gripping villain, I'd read others in this series....more
Just a quick review here. The Kraken Project was full of fun and interesting characters. But I felt there was not enough time spent on any one charactJust a quick review here. The Kraken Project was full of fun and interesting characters. But I felt there was not enough time spent on any one character to get really connected to them. I ended up feeling most connected to Jacob, whom we didn't meet til later. And at first it felt like another story. I knew it would connect eventually, or else why was it part of the story? But the supposed main character, Wyman Ford, didn't feel like a main character, even less central than Melissa Shepard.
Still, I enjoyed seeing how Dorothy behaved. I was curious how that would play out. It was interesting to see. All in all a fun story. And nice ending! Set up for the next one?...more
Even if you've read everything you can put your hands on regarding novel structure, this book will teach you more on the subject. Excellent, well-writEven if you've read everything you can put your hands on regarding novel structure, this book will teach you more on the subject. Excellent, well-written, and very easy to absorb the info. Breaks down the parts of the novel into pieces, with great examples.
The Scenes section is terrific. I have only found a detailed review of scene writing in Dwight Swain's book. This is a great addition to that. I recommend this even if you think you've read everything out there....more
I read this so fast, immediately after the first two, I never stopped to write my thoughts. So this review will be brief.
(view spoiler)[The genetic aI read this so fast, immediately after the first two, I never stopped to write my thoughts. So this review will be brief.
(view spoiler)[The genetic aspect was a surprise and felt far out there as first. It seemed to throw a curve into the story I did not see coming, one I wasn't sure fit with the story. But soon enough it became the story. And the story was as gripping and suspenseful and fast-paced as the first two in this series. And it was even tougher to take. So much loss in these people's lives, short lives too.
But the end was still a shock. I couldn't believe the author killed off the main character. As an author, that is Brave. (hide spoiler)]["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>...more
Picks up right where the last left off. Continues the relentless pace, gets a bit more brutal. Still, the characters intrigue me and engross me enoughPicks up right where the last left off. Continues the relentless pace, gets a bit more brutal. Still, the characters intrigue me and engross me enough that I can't put it down.
(view spoiler)[I got a few questions in this book answered I had been wanting in the first. The world they live in now makes more sense. What had been nagging me was that it didn't seem like a complete world, a self-sustainable world. It seemed there was an endless yet mysterious supply of "new" stuff, simple stuff, like new paper towels. They had functioning things like watches. Who made the watches? Where were the paper towels made? For that matter, where did all the weapons come from, the computers, etc. There were no factories, no plants. They did provide their own food, but the rest was a mystery. I'm still not sure the rest is supplied by the outside, but now I know there is an outside.
I started getting inklings that this was all an experiment early on, when they started talking more about the fence, and about secrets, what was out there. But that their memories were wiped, that they were the hope for the rest of them? That the Divergents especially were the ones to save them? Did not see that coming. Or that ending. No doubt people will be suspicious of Tris, knowing that her mother was the one in the video, even though everyone's memory has been wiped. There's a bit of irrationality and suspicion built into everyone's reactions, it seems.
Can't help comparing this series to Hunger Games. Which means comparing Tris to Katniss. The main difference I feel as I read is that Katniss was more mature, so it didn't really feel like I was reading a YA book. The characters here are a bit less mature, despite what they're going through. So it feels a bit young for me.
And yet, Tris's reactions feel very genuine. The ambivalence, inability to make the "right" choice, lingering on what she shouldn't or can't afford to think about. Sounds like an adolescent to me. (hide spoiler)]
I've enjoyed this story, curious as it is, and will definitely read the final installment. Don't know if it'll live up to the promise of the cliffhanger, but it'll be worth finding out.["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>...more
This didn't grab me quite as quickly as I was told it would. At first, I was just curious. A few more pages in, and I was curious and intrigued. The mThis didn't grab me quite as quickly as I was told it would. At first, I was just curious. A few more pages in, and I was curious and intrigued. The main character, Tris Prior, is strong, the writing is solid. Only occasionally did the dialogue feel off. Overall, I enjoyed the book. Fast-paced, suspenseful, and largely unpredictable.
(view spoiler)[But I do have questions and some misgivings. Once Beatrice chose Dauntless and saw how it was in initiation - we do dangerous things and people die - I would have thought she'd question her decision more. I wasn't clear on why she wanted to be in the Dauntless faction. Because she wanted excitement? Because she thought she was brave? Because it looked fun? Dauntless is described as the faction for people who protect everybody else. That would mean soldiers and policemen and firemen. I didn't see any firemen or even policemen. They seemed more like adrenalin junkies. There was some similarity in the initiation process to some sort of boot camp, so it had some militaristic aspects. It was like they were being trained to be soldiers. I wonder how long their plan with Erudite had been in motion.
My main problem is with the story world. The whole dividing up society into five factions according to personalities felt a bit contrived. I waited to see something that showed how these factions evolved out of the society naturally - because that's how societies change, out of necessity, out of evolution. But I didn't get any answer to that.
I was intrigued as I saw hints of larger things going on, like that the fences are locked from the outside and the guards outside. Tris wasn't sure of their purpose and neither was I. But I also had questions that weren't being asked. Like where are the Dauntless people older than 25 or so? Do they just die? There aren't any children either. It's a rather unrealistic place. And why do they live underground? Did they always feel the need to stay hidden? And who does the laundry? Tris was surprised to find someone acting as a nurse, because the Dauntless have limited options for jobs. So who does all the other normal jobs that need to be done in the real world? These details weaken the coherency of the story world for me. (hide spoiler)]
Despite my misgivings with its world foundation, the story is exciting and intriguing. And a killer ending. I'm interested to see how things continue with Insurgent. ["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>...more
Rating: 3.5 stars I didn't know this author when I got this book. I might have gotten it as a free download, I'm not sure. I was pleasantly surprised -Rating: 3.5 stars I didn't know this author when I got this book. I might have gotten it as a free download, I'm not sure. I was pleasantly surprised -- I tend not to have high expectations for free books. But the characters, the story, and the writing are strong. And not your ordinary fantasy story. If you enjoy fantasy, but are looking for a change, a change of setting, characters, situations, and motivations, you'll enjoy this.
The story concept is interesting. I haven't read a story like this before. It made it unpredictable, which kept the suspense high.
(view spoiler)[The mystery was fascinating as it evolved and developed. The twist with Sarmin seeing through another's eyes was unexpected -- it seems he gave himself the pattern and changed things. Many unanswered questions kept me reading. Very well done.
As the story continued to complicate, I got a little confused about who was on whose side, but that's probably because I read in bits -- reading too many books at once will cause that -- and sometimes I lost the thread. I became uncertain of Tuvaini's allegiance, but I think I was supposed to be. At first it seemed he was on the prince's side, then expressed loyalty to the emperor. Then he was after the emperor's mother and the emperor's throne himself. I was always on Mesema's side myself. I love her character. Strong, even when she's afraid, she did the best she could.
And Eyul is a great character. Killing the two assassins while blind, with help from a voice, which he couldn't identify or place, impressive. He's an honorable assassin, and I love that gray area for the character.
Then people started dying! I thought Sarmin was dead for a moment, which was upsetting, as I had hopes for him coming out on top at the end. But Eyul killed Amalya because she had the pattern! Grr, I hate when the good characters die. Eyul's doing his assassin's job as always, killing her because it's the law. I thought he'd changed, though.
Sarmin's control over the pattern was exciting but also frustrating. I wanted him to do more, and I couldn't see what he intended to do. (hide spoiler)] In the end, things began to make sense as people's loyalties became clear, and things came together quickly. I will definitely be reading the sequel.["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>...more
A third of the way through and I knew how the whole story would go. It opens with what's now a familiar scenario: someone loves someone who loves anotA third of the way through and I knew how the whole story would go. It opens with what's now a familiar scenario: someone loves someone who loves another, who loves another. Then with a bit of magic they're all mixed up. Of course, they'll all end up with different people in the end and live happily ever after. Too much effort for something so predictable. Yeah, it's Shakespeare, so it was new then. T'ain't new now. Can't go on. Two stars, cuz, yeah, it's Shakespeare. ...more
Read years ago, only recently realized it wasn't in any of my shelves. A must-read, perhaps I'll be rereading soon, now that's it's come to my attentiRead years ago, only recently realized it wasn't in any of my shelves. A must-read, perhaps I'll be rereading soon, now that's it's come to my attention again....more
I have read other Fairstein books, and one or two with the Alexandra Cooper character. But this one was so focused on the relationship between AlexandI have read other Fairstein books, and one or two with the Alexandra Cooper character. But this one was so focused on the relationship between Alexandra and her French lover, Luc, who came off as an ass, to be honest, I felt like I was reading a romance rather than a mystery or thriller. Cooper was constantly contemplating her relationship, while at the same time putting up with Luc brushing aside her opinion and concerns, belittling her career, and giving her the cold shoulder when she dared to obey her boss's call to return to New York. Some romance. It's too bad, because the story this lame romance was obscuring was actually interesting. I kept pushing myself to listen for a few more chapters because I wanted to know what happened. But the characters irritated me too much. And so did the reader. Yes, I listened to the audiobook. The narrator is one I've heard before and I do not like her style of reading. I hadn't checked the narrator before getting this book, though. She reads so slow, with a couple of seconds between sentences sometimes, it actually kills any momentum a scene might build for suspense or tension. It doesn't sound like much, but when you hear a pause that long you think at least there will be a switch in speaker, and possibly the end of a scene, or some time passing. But no, the same person's talking, with the same thought, in fact. The narrator was just taking another long (and loud) breath (yes, you can hear her breathe, and it's annoying. Sure, you need to breathe, but other narrators clearly manage to do it silently.). It may seem that the bad narration turned me off the book, but I found enough reasons to stop reading aside from that. The bad narrator was simply the last straw. ...more
The Hunt for Xanadu is a gripping, fast-paced story, right from the opening scene. The characters are refreshing and don't act predictable. The main cThe Hunt for Xanadu is a gripping, fast-paced story, right from the opening scene. The characters are refreshing and don't act predictable. The main character, Kelsey Porter, is a fascinating mix of skilled hero and vulnerable young woman. Events throw her together with Detective Desmond Gisborne, but because they share a common goal does not mean these two are happy to work together. The elements of Buddhism woven with fantasy created a unique story set in modern day that stayed with me after I put it down for the night. Multiple story threads came together in a wonderful web that took the characters around the globe and by the end had me breathless. Just don't plan on stopping in the middle of the last chapter! It's a doozy!
Can't wait for the sequel to see what Kelsey's up to next!...more
Fast paced, never let you go from the first scene. Liked the relationship between Julie and Will. Baldacci's style of crisp, stripped down language leFast paced, never let you go from the first scene. Liked the relationship between Julie and Will. Baldacci's style of crisp, stripped down language lends itself to an action-packed story. ...more
This was a fun, quick read. Interesting voice right from the start. Strong. Interesting backstory, a little heavy on introspection for the beginning,This was a fun, quick read. Interesting voice right from the start. Strong. Interesting backstory, a little heavy on introspection for the beginning, but it held my interest.
I like how things aren't explained or just minimally, just enough for the story to continue, no unnecessary explanations. Explanations and backstory are woven into the narrative, rather than dumped. His suit, the golden armor - it's never really explained how it works. He just accepts it, and so you do.
There were some sections that were a bit predictable. He went through his list of contacts, looking for help, and it was pretty clear to me that each visit was going to end up in destruction and with him leaving. That didn't last long though. I didn't expect the turn it took when he learned the truth about his family.
Overall a fun book, quick read. I would read more of his work. ...more
Harper is in a tough place to start this story, separated from Quinton as she is. When they do meet, you can feel the gulf of the eight months they'veHarper is in a tough place to start this story, separated from Quinton as she is. When they do meet, you can feel the gulf of the eight months they've been apart, as well as their efforts to bridge it. As the story progresses, their relationship takes as much of center stage as the main events, which is nice for a change. There is as much emotional turmoil for Harper as there is trouble and danger.
(view spoiler)[The mystery unfolds gradually, piece meal, which is frustrating for Harper, but adds to the suspense for the reader. But soon enough, things take a dark turn. And things get *dark*. The bone mage aspect of the story has added a truly horrific element. Even Harpers' torture was rather gruesome. And while the story and mystery is complex, it doesn't feel convoluted. Things always feel logical and sensible.
The trouble piles on, and Harper and Quinton have to do double duty, rescue the girl and stop dad's plans. Harper's had trouble practically since the first page, actually. Revenant has had more twists and turns than a mountain road.
Didn't think the author would kill off Carlos, though! Kept waiting for him to return -- he's too good a character to knock off permanently (mind you, I was thinking this before I realized they were all singing their finales). The evolution of his character has been so interesting, and he was getting even more interesting when he admitted his opinion of Harper. I should have known a necromancer would know how to cheat death. (hide spoiler)]
This was one of the best of the Greywalker series, and I will say, without a spoiler warning because I wish I had known, that it's also the last. I'm very sad there won't be more in the Greywalker series, and I have my fingers crossed that the author changes her mind in the future! How can you not miss Harper!["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>...more
I really enjoyed this third book in the Mindspace series. I've become quite fond of Adam. He seems harder in this book, tougher, but not colder. And aI really enjoyed this third book in the Mindspace series. I've become quite fond of Adam. He seems harder in this book, tougher, but not colder. And also more determined to stay on the wagon. Adam has come a long way -- he was held by his addiction when we first met him. Now he takes charge more. He refuses to lay down and die.
(view spoiler)[His life really sucked for much of this book (except for the few moments he got to spend alone with Cherabino). The Guild are a bunch of assholes. Just thought I'd make that clear. They just throw him into a cell at the drop of a hat. And Kara is so caught in her political web she doesn't help him! So add betrayal to the list of injustices.
But Adam finally had a date! He and Cherabino went on a date! Okay, so it ended prematurely, but it was so overdue. Loved how Cherabino told him they were going to the deli and then he'd kiss her goodnight. Of course someone had to die first and nixed that plan. Their relationship is nicely complicated. I never know which way they're going to go next. In fact, a pleasant surprise in this series is that I rarely can predict how someone's going to behave. The characters are developed enough to behave in unexpected ways that always feel genuine.
The final climactic scene was gripping, and Adam put himself at risk for people who will never appreciate it! How about a 'thank you'? Never going to happen.
The tensions did not totally dissipate, though. It looks to me like there's a war coming for these people. And I'm very worried about what will happen to Adam when Swartz goes - I'm predicting that's the next trauma for Adam. It'll devastate him and leave him without his lifeline. (hide spoiler)]
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A nice interlude b/w Clean and Sharp. Getting more of a sense of the main character, a little more of his past. The interaction between him and CherabA nice interlude b/w Clean and Sharp. Getting more of a sense of the main character, a little more of his past. The interaction between him and Cherabino are as tense as ever and continue where they left off in Clean. I'm liking this character more and more. It's his struggle to do what's right, no matter what it costs him. And it often costs him a lot. Makes you hope he'll catch a break someday. Maybe on Sharp. We'll see. Going straight on to Sharp!...more