My thoughts: Upon reading the blurb, I was highly curious to see what this book was about. The fact that it was by Felicity Heaton, (review of Her Wick...moreMy thoughts: Upon reading the blurb, I was highly curious to see what this book was about. The fact that it was by Felicity Heaton, (review of Her Wicked Angel can be found here) was a bonus. At first, I had an uncanny feeling that the story line seemed familiar. It was then I realized it was sounding a bit like “Lost Girl”. For those of you who are sci fi fans, you will know the TV show I am talking about. A few pages in and I took all that back. There was no way it was even remotely close to my favorite TV show. Sorry Ms. Heaton for even thinking that. But then again it is also a compliment to compare Kissed by a Dark Prince to such a brilliant tv show too. Now I will get onto the serious business of reviewing. Ms. Heaton once again brought the characters and surroundings to life in such a way, it was a definite dream to read. I had no problem imagining myself either in the lab at Archangel or in Loren’s suite of rooms in the castle being ravaged by him. More importantly, the whole way Ms. Heaton brought Prince Loren to life was dazzling. The handling of his speech and being able to convey an innocence in a man who was already grown to me, shows a talent for not only her craft but of people’s behavior and mannerisms. I enjoyed the interaction of Olivia with Loren, it was sweet, tasteful and hot. The correlation she made between one species of fae and another, actually had made sense. Kudos Ms. Heaton on this. The path weaved between Loren and Olivia was very clever and I would hazard a guess, well thought out. The other characters were executed brilliantly, leaving enough suspense in this readers mind to wonder what will happen to them and hoping that Ms. Heaton will continue on with their stories. There is one character in the book, that I feel will play a major part in regards to the antagonist that I think Ms. Heaton slyly introduced. At least I am hoping so. If you are a lover of paranormal romance, chaos, hot sexy men that make your mouth water and strong minded women who are not afraid to show their softer sides…then this is definitely a book for you! I personally am eagerly looking forward to the next installment of this series and hope that it will be written with the same level of finesse, drive and desire as Kissed by a Dark Prince has been. (less)
When approached by Felicity Heaton’s assistant to review Her Wicked Angel, the blurb pleasantly surprised me. Her Wicked Angel is the sixth book in Fe...moreWhen approached by Felicity Heaton’s assistant to review Her Wicked Angel, the blurb pleasantly surprised me. Her Wicked Angel is the sixth book in Felicity Heaton’s “Her Angel” series. As this was part of a series, I was curious to see if it would stand on its own or if you needed to read the previous five books to know what was going on. I can honestly say that this book holds its own. The introduction of the characters was insightful. The detail Ms. Heaton puts into describing every detail had them jumping off the pages as if they were alive, the imagery behind the surroundings had you feeling as though you were with them, seeing everything through the characters eyes. The dialogue was witty, well structured, and believable. Every nuance wonderfully executed, right down to accents. I fell in love with the two main characters, Asmodeus and Liora. The transition from hunter and prey to friends and eventually lovers was not rushed but built up to be inevitable. The sex scenes were hot, powerful, and yummy. I will admit that at times the adjectives used for body parts boarded on the flowery, primness but this is also one time where I would say that it worked and suited the situation. As the book progressed so did the terminology. My most favourite characters though were Romulus and Remus, Asmodeus’ Hellhounds. I loved the comical description and the way they interacted with the other characters. I could clearly visualize them and the way they would react to certain comments. Personally, I found this book to be absorbing and satisfying. A wonderful read that I had trouble putting down. Ms. Heaton is definitely on my TBR list with the rest of her Angel Series and I am recommending Her Wicked Angel to all lovers of paranormal fiction. (less)
The premise for the book is a good one. A young woman being kidnapped and taken to a center where discovering sexuality in areas that she had never dr...moreThe premise for the book is a good one. A young woman being kidnapped and taken to a center where discovering sexuality in areas that she had never dreamed of, could open the reader to a variety of erotic and forbidden pleasures. Within the first few chapters I was dismayed at how Andrea capitulated so quickly into acceptance of what was going on. The further I read the more disheartened I became. Each page I kept telling myself, it has to get better but as I continued, it didn't. My main problems were with how clinical and repetitive Mr Kansas was on describing situations. For example the use of "labia", "penis", "anus" and "clitoris". This is supposed to be erotica, there are more erotic terms that can be used and should have been used that weren't. Repetition within sentences became maddening. I understand both as a reader and an author that you are creating a fantasy but seriously, sixty plus orgasms in one session, after previously having sex, saying she is exhausted only to go on and have more sexual encounters and orgasms, all in the spate of one day truly is laughable. Then the amount of different kinks and fetishes that Mr Kansas included, that for some odd reason, Andrea felt disgusted about until about two minutes after commencement was a bit over the top. To be honest, I didn't want to finish the book as I could only read a few pages at a time and then have to put it down and give my imagination a break as it was not being stimulated and allowing me to imagine myself in each situation. The ending of the book was leading up to a nice climatic finish but became boring and dull. Again way too much was being forced into it. Personally I would have preferred to have seen this book done in a short story format that would embrace each fetish, kink and sexual encounter more fully. Explaining what it was that Andrea liked about it or found humiliating about it. I am afraid I can not give this Andrea At The Center any more than a 2 out of 5.
***Please note, that this review reflects only my opinion and is not written to offend the author or their fans and should not be used to sway a person into reading or not reading this book.***(less)
A Shot At Love by Gina Kincade I found the story of Jay and Mark to be filled with longing, regret and desire. When I first started to read the story,...moreA Shot At Love by Gina Kincade I found the story of Jay and Mark to be filled with longing, regret and desire. When I first started to read the story, I was wondering why the two men had separated. It wasn’t until a bit later that the reason became known and not only was I pleasantly surprised but intrigues as well. Ms. Kincade shows us why she has chosen the profession of author and publisher of erotica. She manages to make you slip between the pages and visualize each and every detail described. I thoroughly enjoyed this short story and would love it if Ms. Kincade made Jay and Mark’s relationship into a series of short stories. Well done Ms. Kincade, I look forward to reading more of your work.
The Twilight Mew by Rian Monaire This had to be the most delightful short story I have read in a long time. It was quirky, cute and downright sexy. The blundering efforts of Rhylie made me laugh but no more so when her wish was granted. I loved the reference to a certain movie star and film. When she meets Giordian, the real fun begins. I have never read anything by Rian Monaire but again, I can see why she chose writing and publishing as a career. Ms. Monaire keeps the storyline light, comical but injects a sense of eroticism that heats the pages. Again with this story as it was with the last, I would love to read more on Rhylie and Giordian and how they cope being together.
Better With Mustard by Shelly Morgen A police officer named Joe, hot dogs, mustard and a mysterious woman named Kat. This story was intriguing from the first sentence. Ms. Morgen leads you on a tale of how Joe goes above and beyond his role as an officer of the law to make sure that this mysterious woman named Kat is kept safe. I think this was the perfect story to end a most enjoyable anthology.
My thoughts: All three women show their worth not only as authors of note in their own right but the precision of the execution of the stories indicates the high values they must have in place as publishers. It is a refreshing change to see those who are in charge putting their voice out there and proving they not only know what they are talking about but that they can actually perform. Not only do I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys Shapeshifter Erotica but I will definitely be keeping an eye out for more books by these three talented ladies and the authors who write for them.
I have no choice but to give Shifting Gears a huge 5 out of 5 stars. (less)
When the email came out for the book tour saying that Body and Bow was also available for review, I just knew I had to do it. The blurb was enticing a...moreWhen the email came out for the book tour saying that Body and Bow was also available for review, I just knew I had to do it. The blurb was enticing and I wanted to see how Ms. Brocker was going to combine these elements of erotica, BDSM and music into a story. I found Ms. Brocker’s usage of musical terms where beautifully stated and complimented what was happening in the book just perfectly. It was also describing how my own body was reacting to the scenes. The passion and power described in the book, though were quickly attained for a real life situation, it made me smile to see that someone else’s imagination could develop characters as quick as my own. Both Leonard and Marco were described in such a way that they were visually appealing through the power of words and this is where I will admit, that not only would I have wanted to have been Klarissa in this book, I completely fell in love with the character of Marco. He was such a complete contrast to Leonard yet oh so similar. This is the type of book that I would recommend to read in a huge bubble bath with an icy cold bottle of wine on hand and yes even classical music playing softy in the background to completely get you in the mood for some truly wonderful and memorable fantasies to occur. I would love to say more but if I do—well I would just be giving the entire story away and that would not be fair!
Body and Bow is getting a 4 out of 5 from me. Would have been a 5 out of 5 if it had not been for the fact that at the top of each page, there was either the author’s name appearing (great way not to forget who wrote this) or it would be the chapter name which I found broke up my momentum in reading at times.
Well done Ms. Brocker, I will definitely be looking out for more of your work! (less)
Title: Smut In The City – Tales of Urban Passion Genre: Erotic Anthology Editors: Victoria Blisse & Lucy Felthouse Pages: 206 Stories: 14
Her Secret G...moreTitle: Smut In The City – Tales of Urban Passion Genre: Erotic Anthology Editors: Victoria Blisse & Lucy Felthouse Pages: 206 Stories: 14
Her Secret Garden by Viva Jones What a deliciously hot, sexy, lustful short story. The imagery was exquisite, the pace just perfect and I found myself flushed--breathing heavily in time with Ashley and Fox. The perfect read on a warm spring day. Viva Jones is a writer to keep an eye on.
Verona by Geoff Chaucer I had never thought that combing a fetish like Golden Showers and the Opera would work well together in a storyline—boy was I wrong. Never before have I read a story about GS that was not crass or overdone. This was just perfect. Geoff Chaucer is certainly a deft hand at weaving a delightful erotic tale.
Lights Out by M.A. Stacie Lights Out left me wanting more. M.A. Stacie was able to build the heat level up so well and keep it at its peak at the end, that it had me wanting to know what else would happen. This would be a great novella if fleshed out more.
Saturday on a Tuesday by Giselle Renarde What can I say, this turned out to be an exciting, breathless read. I won’t give the story away except to say this reader wanted to feel everything that Liddy was feeling. The sex scene was very well written and evocative. The background story was insightful and paced well. I would love to read more of Giselle’s work. A name definitely to look for.
Glory Box by Cassandra Dean It was heartwarming to read a story with my hometown in it as the backdrop. Mind you that seemed to slip away when the simplistic beauty of the music was described. I honestly thought that it couldn’t get any better than that—I was dead wrong! Ms. Dean managed to make the sex scene one of where you were biting your lip, wondering what would happen next, feeling the intensity of the moment. Well done Cassandra Dean, you have written a brilliant and eloquent short story.
The Conjurer by Tabitha Rayne I found The Conjurer to not only be different in the fact that it is the first time I have read an erotic story that has a main character with a disability but the sensuality Tabitha Rayne gave to this character and her situation was mind blowing. Brilliant use of description had me wanting to know if Ms. Rayne had actually tried what she had written about to be able to describe in detail what was going on. Excellent piece!
Within The Crumbling Walls by Lucy Lawless I will admit that I am a fan of Lucy Lawless and that she has a remarkable way of not only making you feel like you are in a scene but also of making you feel like a voyeur as you read about the characters sexual exploits. Loved this story but would like to learn more about this couples adventures.
Taking Care of Business by Lexi Bay What a wonderful read this was. I felt like I was reading one of those old mobster stories. Lexi Bay managed to convey the lust and heated love that the main character felt with exquisite detail. Great job!
Mad Fer It In Manchester by Victoria Blisse What a wonderfully light read. I loved the sharp way she wrote the dialogue between Lauren and Stuart. If only my years at having to attend lectures and workshops were as interesting as it ended up being for this couple, I would never have had a problem attending. Job well done Ms. Blisse.
Love Of My Life by Wendi Zwaduk This story had me close to tears. It would have been nice to have more of their back story though and perhaps for this section to not have been so quick. All in all though I did enjoy this immensely and would hope that Ms. Zwaduk will eventually release a more comprehensive story of Love Of My Life. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant.
A Tale of Two Sisters by Toni Sands My favorite combinations, sinful food and sex. I was actually upset to find I had come to the end of the story. Definitely a story to take your time with, just like a very good meal.
Neighbors by Harper Bliss I wasn’t actually sure what to expect when I first started reading Neighbors but I was extremely surprised and extremely wet by the time I finished it. Warning though, you might need to have a towel with you.
Underground Encounter by Tamsin Flowers Ms. Flowers has a way of describing sexual tension that forces itself upon your own body. The story is sharp, flowing and very interactive. I found I was a bit disappointed when the story ended but I did have a huge grin on my face. Definitely want to try the “Circle Challenge” for myself one day.
A Long Hot Summer by Sommer Marsden Well what a wonderfully sweet and delicious way to finish this anthology. Ms. Marsden weaved her words in such a way that my mouse couldn’t scroll fast enough to get to the next page. In other words reader, this is a page turner. Life is Sweet and so is this story.
My overall thoughts. Don’t deny yourself a chance at a wonderful collection of stories that will have you smiling, giggling, sighing and wanting to experience for yourself all these unique and pleasurable situations. I am giving Smut In The City 5 Bites. (less)
When offered the chance to review The Pagan Sorceress, I jumped at it for two reasons. The first being that I was aware of Slave Nano’s pre...moreMy Opinion:
When offered the chance to review The Pagan Sorceress, I jumped at it for two reasons. The first being that I was aware of Slave Nano’s previous book, Alice in Fetishland and the synopsis to The Pagan Sorceress completely drew me in. It sounded like it had all the potential to make a truly wonderful read.
Now I would like you to remember that the opinion about to be given is just that—my opinion. The book started in modern day England and quickly switched over to England of old. This I found was to be ongoing and to this reader’s mind, very confusing. It would have been great to have seen this book put into chapters and not just broken up by the placement of asterisks. I struggled to get through half of the book before having to contact the author himself and ask if the file I had received was a final edit or if it was a first stage edit due to grammatical and typo errors. The author was very kind in advising me that the parts I was having trouble with were how he thought someone from that era would tell the story. This gave me room for pause as to how I was going to review the book because up until then, I will admit I was looking at a nice way to say…don’t bother.
The story itself is intriguing and I admire Slave Nano for his attempts at writing old English. The setting’s and descriptive use of imagery were wonderful but again this jumping back and forth pulled away from the storyline, leaving it wanting and lacking. My suggestion to Slave Nano and it is only a suggestion, is that if he were to change the way he presented the story of The Pagan Sorceress to start with a prologue introducing Cynburh and Alhfrith, it would be easier on the reader. Add into that clear, defined chapter’s and it doesn’t have to be chapter one, chapter two and so on but even name the chapters, it will give the reader a better understanding of where the author is taking them.
Overall Slave Nano had the basis for a very intriguing and brilliant story line and had it worked out perfectly, I would have whole-heartedly been able to give it a 5 star review.
Due to the previously mentioned flaws I felt were present in the book, I have no choice but to give it a 2 star rating.
Again these views are mine and mine alone and should not stop anyone else from choosing to purchase the book themselves and see what they think of The Pagan Sorceress. (less)
Synopsis Carlos Munoz left New York and his financial analyst position for a simpler life in Pennsylvania. The slower pa...moreThe Girl Upstairs by Ray Sostre
Synopsis Carlos Munoz left New York and his financial analyst position for a simpler life in Pennsylvania. The slower pace and relaxed lifestyle took some getting used to, but came with certain…benefits, his upstairs neighbor. The voluptuous woman intrigued him, but what about her ex—and her policeman brother? Was part of Carlos’ new life going to include a new love? He had a lot to learn about…The Girl Upstairs.
My Thoughts After having read and reviewed Mr Sostre’s first book, Their First Night Together, I was looking forward to reading his latest book The Girl Upstairs to see how much his writing had improved and if going with an e-book publisher with editors would make any difference to his writing and appeal.
Again the story was fresh and appealing. The chemistry between Bella and Carlos sizzled. I personally felt that Mr Sostre’s portrayl of the older, protective brother, Sal to sound like something he may have had experience with in real life.
Mr Sostre’s writing has improved immensely, as is shown in the tightness of his paragraphs and the easy flow of dialogue he has going between his two main characters. Minor characters were introduced in a way that you didn’t ask yourself what their background story was or expect to see them any further in the story. Well done Mr Sostre, that is a very hard part of writing to have down pat and you sir, not only managed it but gave enough to the reader to make their introduction plausible.
Now for those of you who know my style of reviewing, you already know that I will say it like it is and I am saddened to have to point out the only downfall to what is truly a delightful read.
As I said in my first paragraph, I wanted to see if having editors working for a publisher would make a difference to his writing. Yes Mr Sostre has grown in his ability to weave a story that would appeal to both sexes and that is always a plus. What would have made this story truly shine, is if the editor had done their job. As a reader first, editor second and writer third, I am shocked that they allowed Mr Sostre’s book to be published without doing a final check. Missing words, incorrect spelling, formatting all over the place, does not a memorable book make. I understand this is out of Mr Sostre’s control but it is definitely something I would suggest Mr Sostre to bring up to his editor and have rectified.
I always like to end with this note when I have found errors that are not the fault of the author and that is--my thoughts and views are my own and should not reflect from other people’s enjoyment of The Girl Upstairs.
I am going to give The Girl Upstairs a 4 out of 5 because of Mr Sostre’s excellent progression as a writer.
Purchase The Girl Upstairs as these following places: Romance Divine The Girl Upstairs on Amazon The Girl Upstairs on Barnes & Noble The Girl Upstairs on All Romance Ebooks On Bookstrand The Girl Upstairs on Kobo
I just sat down to read this story with my grandson who was very impressed with Colonel Mustard. It was a nice lighthearted book that shows children t...moreI just sat down to read this story with my grandson who was very impressed with Colonel Mustard. It was a nice lighthearted book that shows children that even if someone does you wrong, you can forgive them for it and be friends. We had lots of giggles going on and I personally would love a hat like Alice's.
These are fantastic books for the little ones, the wording is easy and the colors bright. Keep writing them Rob, you're onto a good thing here. (less)
This was such a sweet basic little book. The pictures were bright and I loved Romy's smile and her 2 front teeth. I have a 4 year old grandson whom I th...moreThis was such a sweet basic little book. The pictures were bright and I loved Romy's smile and her 2 front teeth. I have a 4 year old grandson whom I think would enjoy this, due to its easy understanding of words and the bright colors and pictures used. The only thing that I couldn't work out was how the cloud, James, could be Donald's father... Well done Rob, you truly have a knack!(less)
My Thoughts: Reading the blurb, I thought the premise of Number 69, to be a very novel idea and jumped at the chance to be able to review. Not a long re...moreMy Thoughts: Reading the blurb, I thought the premise of Number 69, to be a very novel idea and jumped at the chance to be able to review. Not a long read but definitely a very steamy read. The character’s had depth and I found that Ms. Sheridan kept this going with the witty repartee between Melodie and Elliot. A very amusing read, with your heroine, your hero and of course your dastardly villain. My only problem with the story was the ending. It just petered out after leading you on an intense erotic journey. But other than that, it is a book I would recommend for your TBR when you have an hour to spare.(less)
As a lover of supernatural books, it was the synopsis that made me want to read Lure of Forever. Getting stuck into the book, I found the writing of Ms...moreAs a lover of supernatural books, it was the synopsis that made me want to read Lure of Forever. Getting stuck into the book, I found the writing of Ms. O’Connor to be very refreshing. Seriousness mixed with a quirkiness that is easy to read and not be bored with. Her characters were well conceived and depicted. The interaction between them ebbed and flowed in the same manner as she had written the sex scenes, utterly delightful. Overall the story itself may not be a truly original concept but the way Ms. O’Connor executes her words, makes it a truly memorable read. I would recommend Lure of Forever, to anyone who has a love of Vampire, Shifter, Paranormal books. Doris O’Connor is definitely a writer to keep an eye on with future releases.(less)
I’ve always been a fan of Ms. Felthouse’s work. She has a unique style of being able to bring even the smallest detail to life for the reader and THE...moreI’ve always been a fan of Ms. Felthouse’s work. She has a unique style of being able to bring even the smallest detail to life for the reader and THE COTTAGE IN THE WOODS is no exception. The way Heidi and Ava were described, their lustful innocence, the urgency with which they meet made for a good paced story. I liked the way that the vulnerability of both women were touched on and quickly assuaged by the other with gestures that spoke volumes. What else can I say about THE COTTAGE IN THE WOODS that won’t be giving away those subtle nuances that will make you smile! Definitely a must buy book and one you will be able to pick up in six months, twelve months even two years and greet like an old faithful friend. I would have given THE COTTAGE IN THE WOODS 5 bites n kisses out of 5 had there been some detail as to why Heidi was so reclusive but that may be just me. (less)
When I was given the opportunity to read Pain and Revenge by John Simpson, I jumped at it. I had no idea that John was an established Author with an a...moreWhen I was given the opportunity to read Pain and Revenge by John Simpson, I jumped at it. I had no idea that John was an established Author with an array of books to his credit. So I pretty much went into this book with no pre-conceived notions.
Pain and Revenge comes with a warning about it having a rape scene in the book. This scene was integral to the story line and I for one did not find any problems with it at all. If anything my heart bled for our hero, James Elliot.
I found the story to be extremely well written, with wonderfully descriptive situations. The tone of the book was set very quickly. James works for the CIA and has been transferred from the United States to England. The Company gives him his assignment; seduce Gregor Malakoff, a GRU agent for the Russians.
This is when we find out that James is actually gay as is Gregor, who loves his leather and hard BDSM.
Okay so as not to give much more away, I found the book as I said to be well written, with incredible detail towards the “undercover agent” portion.
I found the book to be refreshing, knowledgeable; extremely on the “Woah… the ice is melting” side but above all ranking up high on my best reads list.
The combination of suspense, BDSM and political motivation and not to mention the extremely flammable sex scenes was to me a page turner.
Highly recommend it to any adult that likes their erotic gay male fiction to be that bit more volatile and steamy.
I am giving Pain and Revenge by John Simpson a 6*bites n kisses* out of 5. (less)
FORCED FANTASIES by CASSANDRE DAYNE ISBN: 9780987853950 PAGES: 102 GENRE: Gay Male Fantasy, Heavy BDSM, Menage PUBLISHER: Naughty Nights Press COVER ARTIS...moreFORCED FANTASIES by CASSANDRE DAYNE ISBN: 9780987853950 PAGES: 102 GENRE: Gay Male Fantasy, Heavy BDSM, Menage PUBLISHER: Naughty Nights Press COVER ARTIST: Shane Willis – RadAct Photography BUY LINKS: Amazon – Smashwords – All Romance Erotica (aRE) SYNPOSIS Devlin Carter yearned to find a new life including a career that allowed him more freedom to be the man he’d buried inside. Longing for a partner to share his dark cravings of being owned and collared, he fought his personal demons wearing a conservative mask but something had to give. Stumbling onto Dark Obsession, an Internet Fetish Community that catered to every kinky need, he was intrigued. Invited to a very posh and private party hosted by the owner of the site, Devlin was concerned co-workers would find out about his exotic hungers and he’d lose his job.
Granger Williams, Staff Master to all that knew him, savored owning the extensive Internet site with his partner and lover, Tanner Simpson. Enjoying all flavors of BDSM, they shared a life together but they both held a horrible secret and one Granger refused to talk about. For some reason Granger couldn’t keep his mind off of the very sexy Devlin and against his better judgment invited the newbie to the highly sought after event. After all, Tanner wanted him to find a new partner before it was too late. Unfortunately fate had other ideas. Torn apart, could the two souls forgive and learn to deal with the unfolding tragedy? MY THOUGHTS Where to begin with Forced Fantasies? Do I start with the language that is used that can pull a reader into the emotional turmoil that our lead character, Devlin is feeling? Or do I start with the love and friendship that is so profoundly felt between Granger and Tanner? Then again I can begin with how there are still so many small minded people out there who refuse to allow people to not only live their lives the way they want but in the way that they want. I can talk about how Ms. Dayne managed to portray the effects of how politics can not only determine the way we respond and act in our public lives but how at times we have to hide behind that mask of normalcy, too scared to let the real “us” out. So let me talk instead about how wonderfully executed I found this book to be. FORCED FANTASIES was in a way an eye opener for me but not a shocker. I seriously loved the way Ms. Dayne was able to explore the other side of BDSM within this book. It shows that she does do her research into what is and is not always the norm for those in the lifestyle. Her depiction of the characters unfolds before your eyes and before you know it, you have slipped into their characters, feeling their pain and elation and most importantly their pleasure! There is so much I want to say about FORCED FANTASIES but I feel if I do then I will be giving the storyline away and that would be a shame as I do believe it is a story that needs to be read to really do it justice. So to use my favorite quote from FORCED FANTASIES “Will you dare to walk on the darker side of steamy sex?” If you say yes, then this is the book for you! RATING I give Cassandre Dayne’s FORCED FANTASIES 7 *bites n kisses* out of 5 (Yes I really do think it is THAT good) EXCERPT Gliding into the room, he swallowed hard as he gazed around the perimeter. The hallowed space was lit with sconce lights flanking the rich crimson walls. Granger clenched his hands open and closed as he stared first at the chains swaying back and forth from the ceiling and second at the thick rope meant for binding. His legs quaked as he walked toward the wooden stool they had purchased together several months before. The polished cherry was affectionately titled ‘the throne’ and was meant as a place of reverence for both men when they were in charge. The mat in front was nothing more than a placeholder for the sub to know his place. Kneeling slowly, Granger held the submissive stance, his legs apart, head down, waiting in peaceful solitude for Tanner’s arrival. As they often told their other subjects, this moment of quiet was meant for honest reflection of desires and the understanding of what discipline was needed. As the lull of gothic guitar strings drew him into an inner sanctum, he heard Tanner’s approach. Tanner brushed his hand through Granger’s cropped hair as he inhaled deeply before jerking it back and gazing into his eyes. “Very good. I think you’re going to enjoy tonight.” Lifting Granger’s head he slid a finger down the side of Granger’s shimmering cheek as he chuckled darkly. “I can tell you hunger. First you sate my needs and then we’ll see.” Slapping Granger’s face just once, he smiled. Granger swallowed hard and licked his lips in appreciation. Tanner’s thick, black cock stood at full attention, the bulbous tip twitching. Tanner pressed the tip of his finger across the seam of Granger’s mouth and smiled before yanking Granger fully onto his knees by his hair. Hissing, he lowered his gaze to Granger’s cock. “Not quite hard enough for me.” Granger shivered and sucked in his breath as Tanner grabbed the rope and stretched it out. “You forget your place sometimes. You also forget my needs.” Nodding, Granger couldn’t deny that he’d been unwilling to move away from his beloved Internet site. He also knew the true reason and resisted allowing the ugly thoughts to overwhelm him. Tonight was about rekindling their passion. Tanner shook his head as he lowered onto his knees. Placing the rope by his side he pressed the tips of his fingers across Granger’s mouth before shoving them inside. “Suck.” Obeying the command instantly, he suckled Tanner’s fingers, licking them furiously as Tanner drove them into his mouth with enough force that Granger could barely remain on his knees. “Yes. Very good little boy you are.” Tanner cocked his head as he slid his hand down to Granger’s chest. Taking Granger’s nipple in between his thumb and forefinger, he pinched and twisted as he growled, the timbre husky . The slice of sheer anguish rushed through his system and for a moment Granger stopped his single commanded action. Twack! Tanner slapped Granger’s cock hard with his hand. “You obey or the punishment will be worse.” “Mmmm…” His body shuddering, Granger whimpered and sucked Tanner’s fingers as the man pushed them into the back of his throat. Fighting not to choke, he concentrated on his required task and controlled his breathing. “Better.” Yanking his fingers out, Tanner picked up the rope and raised his eyebrow. “I want you hard and ready for me.” As he slowly placed the rope behind Granger’s thighs, looping them around and through his legs, he smiled. “I wonder if your pretty boy would like this.” Granger grunted but remained quiet. Now was not the time to speak. Tanner would flog him for hours. Tanner wound the rope around the base of Granger’s cock, pulling it tight until the thick muscle stood at full attention. “Lovely.” Between the friction of the rope as it dug into his tender flesh and the tension, Granger blinked furiously as beads of perspiration trickled down his back. Tanner tied off the rope and purred as he wet a single finger and pressed it across Granger’s sensitive slit. “I have this craving to suck you but you don’t deserve to cum yet. Perhaps later.” He stroked Granger’s shaft, pumping up and down roughly. “Good little boy.” Smacking the tip, he pursed his lips before rising onto his feet. Granger watched his lover move toward the bench, settling onto the smooth wood. Uncomfortable from the angle and the tightness of the rope, he shivered. Tanner sighed. Opening his legs wide, Tanner beckoned to him. “Yes. I’m ready for you now.” Granger inched forward on his knees as he drank in the sweet essence of the man’s sex. “That’s it. Come and taste.” Tanner’s cock jutted straight forward, his needs obvious by the veins on either side of his shaft sticking out. As Granger eased between the man’s massive legs, he slid his hands up Tanner’s thighs. His object of perfection was muscular and sexy as hell and Granger enjoyed tasting his cock like no other man. Leaning over, he darted his tongue out, licking just the tip. “You know what happens if you tease me. I suggest you follow orders tonight.” Granger knew all too well having been forced to fuck Tanner in very forbidden locations, none of which were secure but the simple truth was, he loved tempting the man into carnal actions and tonight would be no different yet he was too hungry not to indulge. Pushing Tanner’s legs further open, Granger brushed his fingertips up to the crack of Tanner’s ass, teasingly brushing the tips up and down in a lazy fashion. Gripping the base of Tanner’s cock, he pumped the thick muscle as he drew his mouth over the tip, suckling as he dragged his tongue across the sensitive slit. “Mmm…been far too long my boy toy. You’re going to pay for your indiscretions,” Tanner growled as he gripped Granger’s head, keeping him in position. “Take more.” Granger didn’t need any direction. As he went down on Tanner’s throbbing shaft an inch at a time, he relaxed his throat and used a combination of his hands stroking with almost savage moves, friction forcing Tanner up from the bench and his jaw muscles clamping tightly. Using the other hand, he squeezed Tanner’s balls until the man tipped his head back and roared. “Yyyyyeeeessss! Goddamn this feels good.” He clawed the edge of the bench with one hand and used the power of his upper body to lift up, meeting Granger’s mouth with long, hard drives. Granger sucked with manic motions as he took him all the way down, allowing his lips to rest on the base. Holding this position, he sucked and licked in lazy zigzags before taking his dick all the way out of his mouth and hungrily nipping down to Tanner’s balls. “Mmmm…” “You’re on fire tonight,” Tanner breathed as he lolled his head back. “The rope is a very good reminder of what I need.” Entwining his fingers in Granger’s hair, he pushed Granger’s head savagely. Granger knew the man wasn’t going to allow him to tease much longer. Taking first one tender ball into his mouth and then the other, he squeezed them as Tanner’s legs trembled. There was nothing he enjoyed more than taking a man in his hot wet mouth. Grunting, he grazed his teeth back up his shaft before licking the first drops of pre-cum from the tip. Savoring the flavor, he engulfed him, taking his cock all the way down and began pumping the base in savage motions. “Fuck!” Tanner tightened his hold and began fucking Granger’s mouth in even, deep drives, each pass slicing against the back of Granger’s throat. Granger kept up the frenetic pace knowing that his chocolate-laced lover couldn’t hold back his raging orgasm much longer. Panting, he sucked harder as Tanner tossed his head back and forth. “Yyyyeeesss…ohoh…whew…” Encouraged, Granger slid his hand down the crack of Tanner’s ass, easily finding his dark hole as he eased back up to suckle his cock head. Plunging two fingers inside Tanner’s tight cavern, the effect was instantaneous. “Aaaahhhhh!” Tanner jerked his body up from the wooden platform, impaling the entire length of his shaft deep inside Granger’s mouth. As his body shook involuntarily, he repeated the move twice before exploding into Granger’s mouth. (less)
CLIFFORD ARBOR: THE SEDUCTION OF RAVEN PETERS by SAM CRESCENT ASIN: B005VRWG90 PUBLISHER: Rebel Ink Press PAGES: 106
Synopsis: Harley Banks and Jackson Cole...moreCLIFFORD ARBOR: THE SEDUCTION OF RAVEN PETERS by SAM CRESCENT ASIN: B005VRWG90 PUBLISHER: Rebel Ink Press PAGES: 106
Synopsis: Harley Banks and Jackson Cole live in Clifford Arbor, a quaint seaside town where couples with three partners are the norm. The problem is, they're missing their third. Hoping to find the woman meant only for them, Harley and Jackson embark on a ride of seduction as they try to convince their delectable new resident, Raven Peters, just how good life can be with two men.
Falling in love has never been so tasty and rarely does it happen so quickly. Can anyone say one week-romance? In Clifford Arbor, anything is possible and anything can happen. One-week in Clifford Arbor holds a lifetime of promise. My Thoughts: I found myself quite intrigued with the synopsis of CLIFFORD ARBOR: THE SEDUCTION OF RAVEN PETERS. The idea of being in a relationship with two men certainly peaked my interest, especially wondering if hubby would be interested. This book looked like it was going to be the perfect story about the Polyamorous lifestyle. Ms. Crescent had me hooked from the first page. Her description of our two males, had me catching my breath at how well I could envision them within in my mind. The hard but gentle qualities and dark looks of Jake, had my body beginning to react but then throw in the qualities of Harley, blond hair, blue eyes, passionate and I was a goner. The pace of the book was well kept. Ms. Crescent has a knack of being able to keep that anticipatory feeling increasing in not only her characters but this reader as well. I could gush over her writing style, the real life drama that people go through and how natural the feelings between her characters felt. But…if I do then I would be taking away the absolute joy at seeing Ms. Crescent put words together that have you wishing you were involved in the story somehow and experiencing all the sultry seduction that all three of our characters are going through. Admittedly it has taken me a while to read but that is only because I haven’t been able to find the time to read between when I started and finished it tonight and it scared me a little as normally you have to go back and recap over what you have already read. With CLIFFORD ARBOR: THE SEDUCTION OF RAVEN PETERS I found I didn’t have to as the story so far was already emblazoned into my memory. If I had read the story from start to finish in one session, I think I would have blown my a/c with the amount of heat that was building up. I would recommend this book to anyone, male or female that enjoys not only a good story but one that is intensely erotic to boot. CLIFFORD ARBOR: THE SEDUCTION OF RAVEN PETERS - I gave 5 *bites n kisses* out of 5.