Seriously, I try not to be angry at a writer when I dislike a personage but in this case, I am.
(view spoiler)[4.5 stars for Dylen (Why not 5? Because...moreSeriously, I try not to be angry at a writer when I dislike a personage but in this case, I am.
(view spoiler)[4.5 stars for Dylen (Why not 5? Because he forgive Rio) 0 stars for Rio. 4 stars for the story itself.
I agree with the others reviewers, Rio's shallow, opportunist and a coward. He didn't even try to be forgiven by himself but had to have the help of the others!! Grrrrr! Angry woman here! How his friends diminished what Rio did, make me want to hurl. They act as is it nothing. The guy was ready to let Dy father die, for fuck's sake. And before seeing Dylan at the palace we don't have any indication that he was thinking of the wrong he did to Dylen (and specifically's Hirlen) and go ask for is forgiveness. He did say that he would have sought for him, but that's easy to say after...
They wanted Dylen to forgive Rio so that they can restart a relationship and be happy??? Why not help him find someone worthy of his love and trust?
When Dylen said "Indeed, I weary of our rift. I would put the past behind us. I would that we called each other friend again.”, I had the impression that it was really only because Dylen's tired of the situation, not because he really wanted to put the pass behind.
And what's with that odious excuse of the rape of Hirlen by Rohyr's father??? He was drunk! So what? That's an excuse for rape???? The guy don't even had remorse? He just go with being the King's consort after that like nothing happened! That's says a lot about him. (hide spoiler)]
One little thing: Zacarius dug his fingers into the arm around his waist. He took just a second to savor the k...moreA little better than the previous books.
One little thing: Zacarius dug his fingers into the arm around his waist. He took just a second to savor the knowledge that they both still lived before looking across the room to where Desmond now lay on the floor, a large kitchen knife sticking out of his bloody back.
Ho, what a surprise...a personage killed the same manner, in the same circumstance, than in the book 1. Wow, what an imaginative writer! (less)
It's was as if the writer wanted to proved she can wrote a story with plot. The problem's it's that it's going in too much direction without giving a...moreIt's was as if the writer wanted to proved she can wrote a story with plot. The problem's it's that it's going in too much direction without giving a real sense of continuity. It's not bad, a lot of thing are interesting, it's just too much for one book.
The good point? I'm sure that it's not the last book of the series. I want the next one to be with Siro or this Connor of book 5.
**spoiler alert** I have the impression that the write want to try to write a more serious book but don't know how to stop writing an erotic book. The...more**spoiler alert** I have the impression that the write want to try to write a more serious book but don't know how to stop writing an erotic book. The plot's good but each time something important or dramatic happened, she make them have sex.
Severals thing didn't work on this book:
Gage looked down at Noah, shocked the man had come from so little stimulation. Gage hadn't even touched Noah's cock. He guessed he shouldn't be too surprised. Noah was a virgin. Didn't mean he wasn't going to fuck him, though.
He, nop, virgin are normally not easy to make come, you know, with the whole 'I'm nervous and a little anxious since it's my first time' thing.
Gage is a trained assassin but he had sex without condom and let the victim collected DNA under his nails.
A car explode outside the building and the police don't block the quarter?
Cloths that magically disapeared when you shift? And you don't bother to explain it? Too easy.
And for the best one:
"When I smell your arousal, my body prepares itself for your possession, but only yours,"
First, his body prepare himself at the snif of Gage pheromone and now it's when semen (precum named like that in this scene) touch his hole.
"My body now answers only to you, Gage. A drop of your semen and my body will prepare itself for you, for your possession."
And we returned to the snif thing.
While his body naturally prepared itself for Gage's possession when he smelled the man's arousal,
So, uh, basically the kitten has now a pussy? Yaaaayyyy!!!
When Gage called Dean he was reticent because of something that he was bound to do after that and...nothing happened next with that!
It's one of the best of this writer sadly I can't vote more than 3 stars because of the too much sex scene and the problems mentioned.