Well, well, the things I end up reading when I randomly pick books.
This story doesn't have a thesis, a central plot, or anything cohesive to it at allWell, well, the things I end up reading when I randomly pick books.
This story doesn't have a thesis, a central plot, or anything cohesive to it at all. It is just a bunch of unconnected terrible things happening to the heroine. It's like the writer threw in a tragic event every time he got stuck in his writing but forgot that telling a story involves some kind of continuity. It's funny because in many writing courses they actually give out that advice, ie. when you get stuck, throw a major event at your character and see how they negotiate it.
I have seen many people praise the writer for getting into the head of a woman. I have to disagree. The main character had the most unconvincing supposed female voice I have ever read. The bit with her pregnancy and giving birth is treated as if it were a business transaction - she puked she broke water she pushed. Wham and bam and that was it.
She expresses numerous times in intimate detail the amount of money she spends on various items, exactly how much money she "drops" on cars and clothes and rent and how much she earns. She also gives us intimate details of her budgeting, her jobs, and how incredibly good she is at making money at all times. She gives a blow by blow account of her purchases and how much they cost, only a few months after her only child dies, which supposedly leaves her utterly adrift from the world. I find it hard to accept that any woman would be noting the exact cost of things and talking about how much she "dropped" at that time of her life.
And then there are the very long and detailed pages about the neighbourhoods in Calgary. I felt like I was sitting in an estate agent's car, being informed about the lack of historic buildings, the good and bad areas, the ones with lovely coffee shops and "loft scenes", and the ugly outskirts. All of this just after the death of her child. Ergh, no. Just no.
I reckon that the writer did a lot of research for this book, and probably went to Calgary and made notes about the neighbourhoods and put them in his book with little editing or thought to the tone of the chapter. I think he also made extensive notes about the cost of everything and decided to use every single note he made.
Other bits were just bad writing. At one point the character noted that she spent every day frequenting the "two or three" bookstores on a certain street. Seriously? She goes there every day and doesn't know if there are exactly two or three?
Don't get me started on the use of parentheses. Not a single one of the bracketed comments added anything to the narrative.
For example, we know from the start that the character's name is Jane Howard, and yet right near the end she pretends to be a journalist and tells people her name is "Nancy Lloyd (a name I simply made up)..." Well you would have to be the dumbest reader on this earth to not realise that she made the name up. I am insulted that the writer felt that I was so dumb that I could not figure it out without his help.
Another weird note - the protagonist's first lover had a wife who was bipolar and a son who was schizophrenic and in an institution. Right near the end of the book, her kind of lover friend is bipolar and a has a daughter who is schizophrenic and in an institution. A bizarre coincidence I feel, and yet she makes no comment about it at all. Almost as if her first lover never existed.
I almost wonder if the writer forgot about the first lover in this set of circumstances, and had the idea in his mind - must have male character haunted in some way by bipolar, with schizophrenic child, and added it in a second time by mistake. Or maybe I am wrong and he just really like that particular set of circumstances. Who knows.
Argh. I have no idea what the writer was trying to do with this book, where it was supposed to be going. I can only guess a deadline was looming.
The book is readable, I give it that. If it had been shorter I would have had fewer bad things to say, but it prolonged my displeasure a little too long....more
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