Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice is probably one of the most frequently retold novels of the 19th century, with countless spin-offs, sequels, and retJane Austen's Pride and Prejudice is probably one of the most frequently retold novels of the 19th century, with countless spin-offs, sequels, and retellings on both page and screen. It is a timeless story, and one with a dual appeal. Yes, there is the romantic aspect of it, but there is also the story of manners behind it, which looks at how proper young women are made, not born.
It is from that idea that Kit Scarbrough's Pride and Prettiness - A "Reluctant Transgen" Tale from Arcadia Island - springs forth. Taking place in the year 2021, the story deals with the Gender Shift movement, which has propelled the island nation of Arcadia to a position of power as the world's first Female Led Nation . . . a world in which the feminization of young men is not just accepted and encouraged. Here, proper young women truly are made, in a physical sense as well as an intellectual one.
In Part 1 of the story, Scarbrough introduces us to the family of Cleo Sherwood - Mayor, Vice Presidential Candidate, and Househead of a Female Led household. She is happily married to her pregnant wifeboy Jennifer (thanks to a uterus implant), and a proud mother to her four sheboy children, Victory, Alex, Candy, and Erin (who are kept young and soft through a combination of puberty blockers and chastity tubes). Erin, the youngest, is a bookworm obsessed with fairy tales and princesses; Candy is little princess, enthusiastic about his transition and in love with everything frilly and feminine; while Victory and Alex are the most reluctant of the children, rebelling against their impending transitions.
For the two oldest sheboys, it is less a rebellion against anything physical and more sociological. Part of the appeal in Arcadia is that it is a gender-swapped version of 1950s America. Sheboys are expected to become polite, docile house wifeboys, completely dependent and legally owned by their Househead. If they want to have a career, it will be as a secretary, a grade school teacher, or a waitress - and only until their implanted uterus is artificially impregnated. With strong memories of their lives as boys back on the mainland, Victory dreams of being a scientist, while Alex longs to become a doctor, careers which are denied to them by their newfound gender.
Scarbrough does a remarkable job of building an entire society in which we can both believe and even envy. It is not a perfect society, but it is a progressive one with some very open-minded ideals. Professional women across the world have flocked to Arcadia, embracing the opportunity to escape glass ceilings and sexual harassment, while transgender individuals have done the same, accepting the restraints upon their future in exchange for being openly accepted and appreciated. While there are some rumors of forced feminizations, Arcadia is not a world of sinister science-fiction conspiracies. Sheboys are accepted, but are still in the minority, and less than 10% of all marriages are Female Led marriages.
In addition to introducing us to the world and the Sherwood family, this opening chapter also sets up the budding romance of Alex, who fills the role of Mary in the story (while Victory serves as the gender-swapped version of Elizabeth).
QUILTBAG Content: As the title suggests, we have two young transsexual women here, both at different stages of their transition, and with different goQUILTBAG Content: As the title suggests, we have two young transsexual women here, both at different stages of their transition, and with different goals in mind. Sarina is committed to becoming a "complete woman" someday, while Deidre likes "being a girl with a cock." Harry is the most interesting part of the triangle, being a straight man with plenty of doubts and reservations, but enough curiosity to play along.
Fetish Content: In different hands, the whole scenario could have been played as a fetish encounter, but Marlene Sexton doesn't fall into that trap. Hers is a story of two women and a man, and neither their gender nor the sexuality it fetishized.
Literary Quality: Actually, there's a nice bit of story here, and even some legitimate character development. I like the way Harry is established at the beginning, especially with all of his doubts about why two young women are so interested in him. I really didn't expect much from Sarina and Deidre at the start, but they have real personalities, and they're both women you could sit and have a conversation with. There's even a hint of actual romance to the story, with a nice tease at the end.
Spank Bank Rating: Yes, it's sexy and romantic, but there's also plenty of spank bank goodness here. First time exploration, a threesome, oral sex, anal sex, and lots of heavy petting. Everybody gets to give and take, so there's straight, lesbian, and bisexual appeal here.
Overall: I like it when a cover blurb pays off, and Harry and the Transsexuals really is "a hot, sexy and romantic tale of sex on the wild side." It's also sincere and respectful, which I think many readers will appreciate. A good story, well developed characters, and a bit of romance mixed in with the sex? You can't ask for much more from a short story.
The Office Sissy is an interesting change of pace, in that there is no 'before' portion to the humiliation. We never get to see Barbie as a boy, neverThe Office Sissy is an interesting change of pace, in that there is no 'before' portion to the humiliation. We never get to see Barbie as a boy, never get to relive her breaking, and never get to witness her descent into bimbo servitude. Instead, Esther Harshom walks us though a day in Barbie's new life, letting us get a feel for what the realization of a forced feminization fantasy is like. There are some hints and revelations along the way that allow the reader to at least imagine what came before, but for Barbie there is no before. It is just too hard for a bimbo slut to think about.
Actually, since Barbie is already The Office Sissy when the story starts, there is no forced feminization to be enjoyed. We do, however, get to experience first-hand what it is like to be a cosmetically augmented sissy slave, brain washed into bimbo servitude, who craves the humiliation of her boss. This is a story that is heavy on the humiliation, including one scene that was just a bit too much for me. Human ashtrays aside, however, I liked the power dynamic here and the mental conditioning of Barbie.
The story comes full circle in the final chapter, when we finally understand who Barbie is - or was - and how she really feels about her life. There are more than a few surprises, a little sex, and a lot of cum along the way, making for a perfect story arc across the three chapters.
One of the most effective narrative techniques in erotic fiction is to open up with the good stuff, to show us the end-result of a slave’s training, aOne of the most effective narrative techniques in erotic fiction is to open up with the good stuff, to show us the end-result of a slave’s training, and then to take the reader back to the beginning of the journey. Rather than ruin the surprise, it provides a sort of promise that all of our wildest fantasies will be realized.
With Slave Life: Part I, Alyssa Von Synn puts that technique to good use. She moves the story backwards and forwards in time, contrasting the fall of an ordinary man who robs banks for a living, with the rise of a transsexual slave who services men for a living. Part of what makes it most effective is the way she uses a first-person narrator to drive home that contrast, with Nico referring to himself as one of the girls. In fact, for at least the first few chapters, we are left wondering just how much of a girl he has really become.
The opening chapter on blowjob training is a fantastic opening, and the story has some definite highlights in the first half, but it is the eighth chapter where the story gets really interesting. It is there that the District Attorney brings up The Project – an attempt to “re-educate non-violent felons and cut down on illegal sex trafficking.” We already know that Nico is a part of it, of course, but it is always exciting to learn how (and why) such a man becomes trapped in such a life. Once we fully understand the situation, the last few chapters take on a whole different feel.
With her first story, Alyssa Von Synn already proves herself to be an accomplished storyteller. She has a perfect sort of narrative flair, knows how to establish a character, and can really make a sex scene work. The final seven words are, perhaps, the most intriguing in the whole story, and I cannot wait to see what Part 2 brings.
Despite it's suggestive title and lurid sort of cover, The Future is Black is far more than just another generic tale of interracial cuckolding and foDespite it's suggestive title and lurid sort of cover, The Future is Black is far more than just another generic tale of interracial cuckolding and forced feminization. It's actually a rather imaginative bit of science fiction erotica that jumps back and forth between the present, the near future, and the more distant future to create some real dramatic tension.
The story opens in the more distant future, a time when all the women have died off from a catastrophic plague. We're introduced to two sissies, cute little breeders who are being trained for the day that they're assigned to a Master. As for how we got to that point, and what a sissy can do to help save humanity . . . well, that's the mystery at the heart of the story.
From there, we jump back to the present, where we meet Dillon, his gorgeous trophy wife, and their newly hired black Bull. All Chelsea wants is to become pregnant, and she doesn't care by whom. Reluctant to be so easily cuckolded, Dillon begins taking his company's experimental male enhancement drug so he can be the one to get her pregnant . . . only to discover (far too late) that he's been actually taking mislabeled doses of another experimental drug, Naturally Femme.
Almost immediately, he feels himself being drawn to Jamal, becoming submissive and docile in his presence. As his body begins transforming, taking on more and more feminine characteristics, the sissy finds himself becoming jealous - not that his wife has taken another lover, but Dillon has to compete with her for Jamal's affections. Despite what you might expect of such a tale, there's actually a sweet sort of romance that develops, especially when it becomes clear that Jamal prefers the company of his sissy.
Chanel Ashby brings many of her most popular themes - cuckolds, first time gay, sissies, and gender benders - together here, telling a story that's as erotic as it is imaginative, and as sensual as it is intelligent. Whether the future she explores counts as a fantasy or a nightmare depends solely on the reader.
I really have to hand it to Alyssa Paige - with its heavy emphasis on humiliation, I wasn't so sure I would enjoy Memoirs of a Feminized Slave, but shI really have to hand it to Alyssa Paige - with its heavy emphasis on humiliation, I wasn't so sure I would enjoy Memoirs of a Feminized Slave, but she not only won me over, she seduced me into enjoying it. This is not a story of cruel Mistress forcing humiliation on an unwilling submissive, but one of a caring Mistress providing her very willing submissive with precisely the humiliation he craves.
Martin is a would-be-sissy who sacrifices everything - his job, his home, his car, his freedom - to be owned by Victoria Foss, and to serve at her mansion. He confesses his deepest, darkest fantasies to her, and she delights in making them come true. I loved how Martin fought against the fulfillment of his own fantasies, doubting whether he could go so far, and ultimately finding a shameful joy in his tears. Similarly, I thoroughly enjoyed the complete and total emasculation of Martin, a process that contains elements of forced feminization, but which is something deeper, and more emotional.
Sadly, I cannot gush at length about my favorite scenes, as that would be to give too much away, and to spoil the fun for new readers. All I will say is that the final breaking of Martin, and the ultimate discovery of just how far he can be pushed beyond what he thought were his limits, is some of the hottest work I have read in a very long time.
I’ve had the great pleasure of reviewing a number of Paul Zante’s stories over the past year, but this is the first time I’ve been able to binge on thI’ve had the great pleasure of reviewing a number of Paul Zante’s stories over the past year, but this is the first time I’ve been able to binge on them. His fourth Sissy Erotica Collection contains 6 stories, offering up a diverse batch of forced feminization, sissification, crossdressing, female domination, and forced bisexuality.
Sissy Dreams: A Prissy Sissy Dream was a delightful opening, introducing us to the sissies of F.I.S.T. (the Female Institute for Societal Transformation). The boys here are contented little sissies who take great pride in their femininity, and I loved the twist that had them longing for a man to rescue them from the “tough life” of pleasing their female superiors.
Mistress Dyke’s Fembot Factory is a story I’ve enjoyed before, but it’s just as clever the second time around. The forced feminization of selfish, arrogant men is always a pleasure, but the transformation into a sophisticated sex robot is a very nice twist.
Office Sissy: The Form & Office Sissy: Personal Assistant are two halves of the same story, although it feels like there’s something missing in between. The first story is cute and sexy, but Steven is far too innocent and gullible for a grown man. His forced feminization to satisfy HR is incredibly erotic, but he behaves more like a teenage virgin than a grown man with a wife at home. I had a really hard time buying into his mindless obedience. The second story is much more what you’d expect from the scenario, exploring his new role as Mandy’s personal assistant, but it does nothing to explain the abrupt shift in tone and behavior.
Sissy Dreams: The New Maid is another fantastic tale, one that explores an opportunity I’m sure we’ve all fantasized about at one point. When a sissy loses his job, he’s offered the chance to interview with a rich Mistress for the positon of her new sissy French maid. It’s a fun story, taking us through three different fantasies/fetishes, as Maid Alisha is tested and teased.
Hazed by the Cheerleader Brat was a more traditional forced feminization tale, this time involving a young man, his sister, and her cheerleader friends. There’s a lot of humiliation to this one, including a truly perverse new cheer, and a rather unique form of penetration.
If you’ve never experienced Paul Zante before, then Sissy Erotica Collection is a great place to begin.
My goodness, does Kylie Gable know how to spin a tale of female domination, forced feminization, and absolute humiliation. There's no doubt that FrencMy goodness, does Kylie Gable know how to spin a tale of female domination, forced feminization, and absolute humiliation. There's no doubt that French Exchange is a rather cruel story, but it's also a very erotic one, despite the fact that there's nothing sexual about it until the last few chapters.
Poor Luke is not a bad guy, but his family's new french exchange student begins working her devious ways on him from day one. By the time school even begins, he's been locked out of his own account, had all his school correspondence diverted, and is trapped in a semester of advanced French, dance, sewing, women's studies, and more. Not only that, but his once chance at fixing things is derailed by Helene giving him a rather radiant gel manicure/pedicure, accidentally washing all his socks pink, convincing him that boy cut panties are what all the boys wear back in France, and sticking him with a too-tight t-shirt with 'coquette' emblazoned across the front.
If it wasn't for the rather sharp cruelty of Helene, this would be a rather funny book. It's like one of those screwball comedies where everything that can go wrong does. Over time, Luke actually begins to get quite the reputation around school, assisted (of course) by subtle hints and deceptions shared by Helene. You feel bad for the poor guy, especially since he's so innocent, so naive, and helpless to make it stop. By the time Helene reveals her scheme and steps things up, making him her sissy slave, it's far too late to turn back.
Lovers of forced feminization and humiliation will wish they had a French Exchange student of their own, and even those who prefer to shy away from such cruelties will warm up to Luke's ultimate fate. Sexy, clever, and lovingly detailed, this is a fantastic read.
Lyka Bloom is always a great read, and Camp Futa is no exception. Technically, it should be called Camp Shemale or Camp Sissy, since these lucky prisoLyka Bloom is always a great read, and Camp Futa is no exception. Technically, it should be called Camp Shemale or Camp Sissy, since these lucky prisoners are feminized beauties who are left with a dangling reminder of their manhood, not the traditional dual-gendered hermaphrodite of Japanese hentai, but that's a minor quibble.
We begin with a sympathetic introduction to Carl, one that makes us understand that he's more a victim of circumstance than a real criminal. Sure, he's made some bad choices, but he never set out to harm anyone, and that's important. Presumably, it's that low-risk sort of mentality that results in Tonya Crane selecting him as one of her "very special candidates." With no idea what's in store, Carl and 5 other inmates are put on a bus and driven deep into the woods, to a remote, run down camp where their lives are to be transformed.
To say that these men are slowly, seductively transformed into big busted shemales and sexually submissive sissies is no spoiler, especially to fans of Lyka's work, but (as always) it's the how and the why that make the story so compelling. The transformations here are slow and subtle, operating on a physical, intellectual, and emotional level. Even knowing what to expect, there's still a delicious sense of mystery to the story, and the final climactic reveals are so much fun. As it turns out, the inmates are just trading one sentence for another, but there's no doubt their new lives will be much more enjoyable that what awaited them behind bars.
My goodness, so many fantasies all wrapped up in one delicious scenario! College Girl Discipline is a bit of a dream come true as Paul Zante introduceMy goodness, so many fantasies all wrapped up in one delicious scenario! College Girl Discipline is a bit of a dream come true as Paul Zante introduces us to a happily married couple who have decided to experiment a little to keep their relationship fresh.
I love how Zante opens with a tease, introducing us to Shannon and Greg, suggesting there's something sexy and exciting on the horizon, but delaying the gratification until we're at their Mistress' front door, ready to play. Greg's feminization is very well done, with just enough detail to satisfy the most ardent fetishist, but not so much that it loses its realism.
The school fantasy that follows is hotter and far more involved than I could have imagined, and I absolutely love that Shannon gets dominated right alongside Greg. It's odd to find a book that appeals as much to lezdom as femdom enthusiasts, but this is quite delightful. In fact, the climax is entirely suitable to the story, and reveals just what I suspected (and hoped for) in Sierra, the Mistress' french maid.
Now this, bois and gurls, is how you write an erotic over-the-top futanari fantasy!
James Oenemal has clearly read (and enjoyed) the original source mNow this, bois and gurls, is how you write an erotic over-the-top futanari fantasy!
James Oenemal has clearly read (and enjoyed) the original source material, by which I mean those hentai classics featuring exaggerated dual genitalia, orgasms of impossible volume, and adorable innocence in the face of perversion. My Futanari Stepsister is just as naughty, kinky, and taboo as you could possibly hope, with a narrative style that works perfectly for the material.
Daniel is an adorably naive young virgin who spends his summer dreaming of college, a career, and the women that career will bring him. To shy and nervous to actually approach a woman on his own, he figures they’ll come flocking to his door once he’s well-established and on his way to building his fortune. In the meantime, he still has one last summer of dealing with the cruel bullying of his older sister and her friends – including Ella, whose small gestures of kindness have kindled a romantic infatuation in young Daniel.
Naturally, he’s suspicious when Chloe and her friends break down his bedroom door, but he wants to believe that their offer to ‘educate’ him and ‘turn him into a great guy’ is genuine. Before he knows it, the girls are all stripping down to teach him about the different sizes and shapes of breasts, before directing his attention down below. That’s where it gets interesting.
Alice and Kylie each have a giant penis strapped to their thigh by a garter. Sarah and Chloe both have “mystery meat” that’s bent backwards and hidden inside their vaginas. Ella, on the other hand, has a “dog in a bun” that’s bent backwards and tucked up between her butt cheeks. Having never seen a naked woman in the flesh, Daniel completely buys into the idea that this is all completely natural. When Kylie informs him that “a REAL woman has the best of ALL worlds, and she must be pleased in every way,” he’s nervous and hesitant, but has no problem following their lead in learning the ropes.
To say any more would be to spoil the fun, but James Oenemal builds on Daniel’s naïve innocence to guide him through a series of erotic encounters, each more depraved and impossible that the last. He gets to watch, to please, and to be pleased along the way. There’s a fine line between explicit perversity and pure vulgarity, but My Futanari Stepsister successfully manages to make the most of the former without ever descending to the level of the latter.
QUILTBAG Content: Where shall I begin? There are only 2 characters here, and they most definitely fit the QUILTBAG bill - a bisexual male (who is neveQUILTBAG Content: Where shall I begin? There are only 2 characters here, and they most definitely fit the QUILTBAG bill - a bisexual male (who is never named) and his transgender partner (despite the title, Karen appears far more shemale than futa).
Fetish Content: Well, you've got a submissive bisexual male in bondage, and a transgender mistress who loves the whole power exchange, from restraints, to pain, to penetration. Yup, I think that qualifies as fetish.
Literary Quality: There's no larger story or plot development here, just a single scene of birthday bondage between Karen and her submissive. What's there is well-written, detailed, and sexy without being over-the-top smutty, but I would prefer a bit more plot.
Spank Bank Rating: This is all spank-bank material, from beginning to end. There's bondage and pain, buttplugs, oral sex, anal sex, and even a little erotic after-sex cleaning.
Overall: The cover blurb does promise "No fluff, all action" - and that's precisely what we get. It's hardly epic literature, and it bothers me that Karen wasn't truly futa, but transgender erotica with a male bottom/submissive is rare enough that I'm not about to complain. Fun stuff.
As you might guess from the title, The Crime and Punishment Collection brings together three of Kylie Gable’s sexiest tales dealing with sissies who hAs you might guess from the title, The Crime and Punishment Collection brings together three of Kylie Gable’s sexiest tales dealing with sissies who have sinned and who deserve to be punished. These are some of her darker, edgier tales, but they’re also some of her most robust.
With Trial of a Feminizer, Kylie has done something really unique, slipping themes of female domination and forced feminization into a largely traditional courtroom drama. All forced feminization fantasies walk a fine line between criminal and kinky, but here we really get to explore whether the end really does justify the means. There’s some real conflict between Ava and her lawyer, and it’s delightful to watch as Michelle ultimately betrays him kinky urges before the jury. It’s a unique twist on the genre that really works, and which might even get a few new fans curious about the feel of lace panties and a leather leash.
Sissy In-Law is a bit more of a traditional tale, involving a cheating husband, his furious sister-in-law, and an embarrassing past that comes back to haunt him. Like so many of Kylie’s stories, the focus here is primarily on intense embarrassment and public humiliation. Most of the story centers around a shopping trip that sees Ryan measured, fitted, dressed, and manicured, all while his sister-in-law happily explains precisely why he’s going along with it. The attention to detail is lovely, the emotional element is so very well done, and the climax is satisfying on multiple levels.
Finally, in It's Nothing Personal we find a darker, crueler tale that begins with a violent (but erotic) kidnapping that sees Lyle subdued by a vodka-soaked tampon plugging one hole, and silenced by a rubber penis gag plugging the other. The feminization here is quick and intense, including a depilatory shower, silicone C-cup breasts, a silicone vagina, cosmetics, fingernails, and (of course) lingerie. The punishment aspect of the story is often dark and violent, but we slowly come to understand that he deserves every moment of it. Of all the characters Kylie has ever written, however, I think Lyle plays (and, more importantly, talks) the sissy better than any other.
All-in-all, a fantastic collection that’s perfect for new readers who are curious about Kylie’s work. It incorporates most of her key themes, and does so with tight, carefully plotted stories that are well-written, engaging, and (of course) sexy.
The world of high finance can be a brutal, cut-throat, dangerous place to play. Even the best players can find themselves burnt out before their time,The world of high finance can be a brutal, cut-throat, dangerous place to play. Even the best players can find themselves burnt out before their time, and professional rivalries can get very personal, very quickly. High-Heeled Coup is the story of one such rivalry where both sides have played dirty, and where mistakes have been made, but where there can be only one winner.
As usual, the strength of Kylie Gable’s story is in her characters. She has a knack for quickly establishing believable, instantly recognizable characters that few within the genre can match. Steve’s personality comes out in his words, revealing him to be a sore loser and dirty fighter, even before we hear a single word about his tactics. Kendra is a bit of a different case, as we only get to see her through his eyes, but it’s clear she’s not only far more clever, but also far more vengeful.
Where most authors would be content to let the story end with a little public humiliation, watching as the alpha male is brought down, that’s where Gable begins. She actually takes things much further, going so far as to give Steve a chance to earn his way back into a position of at least some respect, but with the understanding that he’s on the bottom of a new power exchange – literally. The scene where Kendra turns the tables, bending Steve over her desk, is absolutely exquisite, especially with the lust-fueled choice he makes at the end!
I’ll be honest, I didn’t see the final twist coming, but I loved it. Seriously, it’s absolutely perfect the way Gable resolves the coup. By far, one of the happiest, most satisfying endings she’s offered up to date.
In Voodoo Doll, Arnica Butler asks the rather curious question, "When is a vengeful curse not at curse at all?" The answer, of course, is when that cuIn Voodoo Doll, Arnica Butler asks the rather curious question, "When is a vengeful curse not at curse at all?" The answer, of course, is when that curse is really A Gender Transformation Fantasy Comes True.
Although he never comes out and says it, it's pretty clear from the start that Steve is hiding a very big secret. You could be forgiven for wondering if he's gay, but there are a few comments that definite point towards being a closet transsexual. He's the kind of guy it'd be easy to identify with, if he didn't use his fear of being exposed as an excuse for allowing a woman to 'force' him to cheat on his wife. That new secret adds even more tension to a tropical vacation, which all comes to a head when his wife has a curse placed on him.
Once again, Butler does a stupendous job of describing the physical act of transformation. Never mind passing out and waking up a new woman, Steve feels his body reshaping itself from the inside out, a process that's entirely creepy and unsettling . . . yet strangely attractive. It's a long process, with tons of little details that really make it seem real. Even once it's complete, he struggles with his new body, finding his new hips and breasts throwing off his center of gravity. As horrified and guilty as his wife feels, of course, he loves it - and determines to make the most of what little time he has, while she races off to find a cure.
If you're a fan of detailed transformations and gleeful sexual exploration, then Voodoo Doll is well worth a read. As much fun as it is to read of men being 'forced' to explore their feminine side, having that curse be a dream come true makes for a refreshing take on the genre.
As great works of erotica literature are concerned, there is no doubt that Eight Inches Under Her Skirt comes up a little short (pun intended). It isAs great works of erotica literature are concerned, there is no doubt that Eight Inches Under Her Skirt comes up a little short (pun intended). It is a bit too contrived and convenient, with no real character development, and far too many unanswered questions. With the set-up of buying condoms for his girlfriend, I really expected that relationship to weigh a bit more heavily on the tale, but it is largely inconsequential. We move from lust-at-first-sight, to passionate public flirting, to driving home together in less time than it would have taken him pay for the condom. In fact, the condoms are forgotten as quickly and completely as his girlfriend - and they, at least, might have come in handy when getting intimate with a total stranger.
However, as quick-and-dirty spank bank erotica is concerned, this was a lot of fun. Just as narrative story arcs clearly are not what Phoenix Blair is interested in exploring, sexual excitement certainly is. I thought the whole lust-at-first-sight bit was done very well, complete with a frantic, comic chase through the mall, ending in an erotic collision. The flirting may have been quick, but it was fun, and the drive back to her house certainly reinforced their physical passion. As for the sex that dominates the core of the story, I could have done with some more sensory details – smell, taste, feel, etc. – but that is a minor complaint. It was realistic, with some nice details, and I loved the bold lack of inhibition (even if I still had lingering questions about his motivation).
As one-handed reads go, Eight Inches Under Her Skirt is certainly worth the read, regardless of whether you are the one with the Inches, the Skirt, or both.
Virtual Reality Mistress is, for all intents and purposes, a collection of short stories or erotic scenes, loosely connected by the concept of a highlVirtual Reality Mistress is, for all intents and purposes, a collection of short stories or erotic scenes, loosely connected by the concept of a highly advanced virtual reality simulation. For the bargain basement price of $129.99, Jody orders his kit from Amazon, complete with earbuds, wraparound goggles, sensor pads, and even body cavity probes. As for the software, it's rather sophisticated, putting him through a series of personality tests and psychological evaluations to best tailor the experience to his fetishes.
The virtual reality concept is convenient, in that it allows us to leap through a diverse variety of scenes without resting or healing up from the last one, but there were a few continuity errors that distracted me. For instance, he talks about one Mistress "rhythmically deflowering my virgin hole" after he's already experienced his "first anally induced orgasm" at the end of a "long, thick, ebony-colored dildo." It's not important, and doesn't interfere with the erotic enjoyment, but it gave me the sense that these scenes began as short stories before having a connection forced upon them.
Where the concept does work is in allowing Jody to enjoy progressively kinkier experiences by dialing up the fetish level each time. It all begins with a rather innocent sort of fantasy, involving a poolside experience with his college French tutor. There's just a touch of female domination involved, but nothing that would seem kinky to most readers. It ends with an extreme sort of fantasy involving gender reassignment surgery and life as a highly sexualized sissy slave, offered to all comers for penetration or punishment at a party. In between, Jody becomes a human pony slave, is introduced to some extreme CBT, has his first shemale encounter, and is exposed to the concept of erotic castration.
Each scene is well-written, with plenty of sumptuous detail, and some nice insights into the submissive mindset. I liked the evolution of Jody throughout the novel, watching as his fears and inhibitions were stripped away, but I did feel the climax missed an opportunity to take him beyond the virtual environment. Having said that, whether you're talking about the book or the software, Virtual Reality Mistress is a bargain at either price.