**spoiler alert** The blurb sounded nice enough and you don’t see too many incubi in books, even though you would think for erotica they would be the**spoiler alert** The blurb sounded nice enough and you don’t see too many incubi in books, even though you would think for erotica they would be the perfect protagonist.
However, the story did not live up to the blurb. No, that’s not true, the blurb doesn’t say anything that is not in the book, however, it leaves out a few things that made reading this book quite unsatisfying.
Let’s start at the beginning. Poor Tristan, half incubus, half human, is left in the care of a promising warden, assigned to him by Blanco. The warden turns out to be a sadistic jerk who uses and abuses Tristan continuously. Eventually Blanco comes to his aid (more about this later) and Tristan manages to get away from the “sheltered” life that he has known so far. He wants to live a normal life.
What bothered me? (By the way, for better understanding I am saying “incubus/incubi, when in the book the term for the half incubus/half human beings is “cambion”).
* Cory, a talented, yet unsuccessful photographer, catches Blanco red-handed while killing someone, but in order to be left alive himself he agrees to find Tristan for Blanco. What follows now is so strange and appalling that I really needed to wrap my head around it in order to talk about it in a way that makes sense. * Cory takes Tristan, who is homeless and totally screwed up, in and takes nude pictures of him. The nature of the pictures gets more explicit in the course of the book, mainly at the request of Blanco. Why Blanco requests nude pictures doesn’t interest Cory in the least. * Cory, I can only repeat it, an unsuccessful photographer, who explicitly says to Tristan that he does not have many models which is why he is so grateful for Tristan posing for him, has a large collection of nude or pornographic photos of various men. Where do all those men come from? Who are they? * Cory keeps a laptop Blanco has given him on at all times so that Blanco can watch what is going on in his apartment, this includes sex scenes. Naturally Tristan knows nothing about this. * Cory masturbates in front of his laptop for Blanco for a few hundred dollars. He reckons, since Blanco has already seen him sleep with Tristan, what the heck? * Blanco, who is supposed to protect the incubi, in fact he has sworn an oath to do so, let’s Tristan be abused for years and does not step in, because he was distracted by the suicide of his own protegé. He admits that he failed Tristan, but makes up for it later by killing the abusive warden. What about the oath that he broke? Shouldn’t there be repercussions? * The wardens, who are supposed to protect the incubi from society and their inner demon, don’t think anything of exploiting the incubi’s sex driven nature by pimping them, renting them out as escorts, dancers in clubs or porn stars. * Cory’s career is furthered by Blanco who organizes a show for him. As it turns out his work, mostly his pornographic work I might add, is being shown in the “ghetto” for the incubi. Almost all the guests at the show use his photographs for sexual stimulation there and then. Is this the sort of career an aspiring photographer who wants to get his name out is aiming to have? Shooting porn pictures for the sexually overactive? * Cory eventually decides to become a warden in order to help Tristan. He reaches that goal by being touched sexually by Blanco (who very much desires Cory) and in return by touching Blanco. How that would empower him to deal with an incubus and his demon is beyond me.
All in all, apart from Tristan, who was a character who was constantly pushed around by people who “wanted the best for him”, I thoroughly disliked the main characters. Cory sold himself out for his career. Blanco failed at his job, failed Tristan in a big way and has no valid excuse whatsoever. The way the wardens dealt with the incubi and their demons made no sense to me. The overall feel of the story was disturbing. I can’t recommend it in good conscience....more
The story starts medias in res with Rory following Scott around to make sure he was safe. Scott’s background is completely in the dark. We only know hThe story starts medias in res with Rory following Scott around to make sure he was safe. Scott’s background is completely in the dark. We only know he hides from the other minders out there and that Trey, another wolf, has sent out Rory on his mission. When I got this I wasn’t aware that this is obviously a book in a series. It seems there are more books about the minders out there and it would have been nice if I had known a little bit about the background. I could still follow the story easily, but the reasons why Scott hid and why the other minders wanted him to join them, what was the deal with Scott’s connection to Trey etc. were all left unexplained. I liked the storyline, the characters and the chemistry between Scott and Rory. Just, “Wolf Town” seemed to be starting in the middle of a bigger story and it also ended there. We have a HFN, but we don’t really know what the future will bring. It was entertaining, but nothing I would probably read again....more
**spoiler alert** When I picked up this book I had no idea what to expect. I have never read anything by Josh Lanyon before and didn’t know anything a**spoiler alert** When I picked up this book I had no idea what to expect. I have never read anything by Josh Lanyon before and didn’t know anything about his style. The blurb indicates that this is a fantasy adventure, a quest for an old relic with some romance thrown in. And for once the blurb does neither exaggerate nor gets your hopes up only to find that the story does not deliver.
It took me quite a while to find my way into the story. I am not an enthusiastic fantasy reader and usually I need a lot of explaining about what’s the world like, who is in it, what is the history etc. Here I got thrown into the story without much information at all. I read names of cities, gods, peoples and had no clue. I was constantly asking myself what or who is that? Some place names sounded vaguely Indian, others, mostly the characters’ names, were more or less English, so I was confused. However, after a while I decided to not worry about the previous history and goings on anymore and just read and enjoy what I got. Once I got over the point of constantly wondering I very much enjoyed the adventure. I liked the two protagonists and wanted to know what would happen next so badly that I could hardly put my e-reader down. I found the description of places, be it an old monastery or some dark cave, very vivid and could picture everything perfectly.
After a while I started to wonder again. Being unfamiliar with the author I was asking myself where the m/m romance factor would come into play. Admittedly, there was an attraction between the gay Aleister and the supposedly straight Valentine, but nothing ever came off it, at first. And even when it did, the romance was limited to being rather tame, with love scenes mostly behind closed doors. Possibly this is Josh Lanyon’s style and I am not saying it didn’t fit the story – it did. Just be prepared, there are not a lot of juicy details like in so many other books.
So, again, after I was reconciled with the fact that this was not as graphic a read as I am used to, I was totally fine with it. It is a great adventure story, the quest for the artifact is pretty exciting and varied. Valentine Strange is quite hard-boiled and down to Earth, which leads to a few fun thoughts. An example… At one point Valentine starts to suspect that the interest of some effeminate writer at a party in military strategy and on how to take the city might have been more than just theoretical.
"Strange had laid out several schemes. And the writer had taken careful notes. He hoped the young man wasn’t a mutineer. He’d been rather looking forward to reading that book."
Also I liked the no-nonsense attitude of Strange and his military partner Akanhe. During the second expedition they are in the company of a temple witch called Master Scrivener, who is pretty useless, to replace Aleister. They are attacked by some mutineers and engage in a gunfight. Strange orders Scrivener to somehow get rid of the sorceress who accompanies the mutineers.
"This however seemed to be beyond Master Scrivener’s ken. In fact, his efforts over the next hour fell so short that the young sorceress was emboldened – or exasperated – into showing herself and challenging Scrivener to a duel of magic – whereupon Akanhe shot her dead."
I liked that. No mumbo-jumbo where bullets will do.
The adventure came to a good and reasonable conclusion and the romance took a satisfying ending. So, if you like fantasy, good story-telling, well developed characters and don’t insist on tons of graphic sex scenes, this is perfect for you....more
I’m all for the tortured hero and all and, God, nobody can be disappointed in that respect. Poor Kaden has suffered a lot during his childhood and itI’m all for the tortured hero and all and, God, nobody can be disappointed in that respect. Poor Kaden has suffered a lot during his childhood and it didn’t even stop once he got to Logan’s ranch. This was a bit much, really. Can’t you give the poor man a break? I found the fact that there was another one of those perverts right there on the ranch somewhat disturbing. Talk about out of the frying pan into the fire.
There were a few more things that bothered me about the characters or the plot.
Gay for you I’m not particularly keen on “gay for you” stories. That point didn’t come across very believable for me at all. Logan never felt anything for a man before and then along comes Kaden. From then on, Logan acted as if it was the most natural thing in the world to fall in love with a “boy” (more to that in bit). He was surprised about himself, admittedly, but took it in stride. How come there was no concern whatsoever about what other people might think when he is all of a sudden in a gay relationship. We’re talking about a ranch owner in a small town in Montana here. And what about the woman he has been going out with? As much as it is desirable that she understands the sudden switch to men and the resulting dumping of hers (that happened tacitly), is it realistic?
Contradictive behaviour & jealousy In the hospital first Kaden finds Becca’s father reacting cold towards her. Given the situation that father must be a right ass. Later on however, he acted like you would expect him to react, so what was the cold, detached father thing about?
Logan’s jealousy didn’t sit well with me at all. Somehow that went against his character the rest of the time. When he gets into the hospital room and finds another man touching “his” Kaden he is angry about this. Why? It’s a physical therapist, for crying out loud. The same later again when they are in the recording studio. He wants to lock Kaden away from the world so nobody can steal him away from him? If I was Kaden I’d run as fast as I could.
Christine Feehan for the m/m crowd One thing that sort of spoiled the story for me completely was the way Logan addressed or thought of Kaden as his “little one” or “the kid”. If you read hetero romance and love Christine Feehan and you feel like trying out m/m, go and read this book! I wish they wouldn’t have called him a “teen” constantly. OK, he IS a teen technically, but did that have to be mentioned all the time? He is 19 at the start of the book (Logan is 9 years older), and even almost 2 years later he still is “the little one”. Sorry, but he is not.
I love books with a large age gap and I have read books with minors and the young age of characters never bothers me, but this constant focus on Kaden being a boy and Logan being the oh so big, strong adult really rubbed me up the wrong way.
All those things are depending on the individual reader (as almost everything is), so if you like a very tortured and sensitive hero, characters very devoted to each other and a slowly building relationship this might be for you....more