Alyssa works for her father at his currently failing sports complex, Swing Away. Failing largel2.5 Stars
Oh man, I had a lot of issues with this one.
Alyssa works for her father at his currently failing sports complex, Swing Away. Failing largely in part to the brand new sparkling chain competitor who just took up residence in town. On top of worrying about her father having to shut down, she's also freaking out about an important dance camp audition coming up. A camp that costs money - money she would gladly give to her father to help with the business.
Tristan has lost his mojo. Once one of the star hitters on the Suttonville Sentinels, something is now causing him to swing at air. Not wanting to let his teammates see him fail, he heads away from the shiny new batting cages where someone from the team might see him and finds himself at Swing Away. Here he meets Alyssa as she critiques his batting style while offering up tips to help - which, to Tristan's pleasure, work.
This is a love story where two high school students meet and fall in love. Like immediately. Not even joking. This is a quote from their first non-date not long after his visit to Swing Away. But first, let me set the scene: Tristan asks to buy Alyssa Starbucks after work. She says yes then meets him at the baseball field where he's waiting with coffee and a blanket. They then proceed to sit under the stars while Tristan wows her with his knowledge of the stars. Alyssa asks him if he wants to wish on one. And here's the quote:
"You make a wish. Mine already came true."
You have literally had like two conversations together. Just no.
The insta-love was only one of the problems I had with this book. I've read Highley before but I don't remember them being this weighed down with unnecessary drama. It was literally one dramatic thing after another. On top of Tristan's batting fails, once him and Alyssa are all swoony for each other they hit a major roadblock. You see, Tristan's best friend has been crushing on Alyssa and Alyssa's best friend has been crushing on Tristan. Yeah, you read that right. But instead of being honest with their BEST FRIENDS, they lie. Well, obviously they get caught and cue drama! It was like a whole season of One Tree Hill in one 240 page book.
Sports, love triangles (or was it actually a square?), secrets, lies... I just could not get into this one. The ending itself was cutesy, if not a little far fetched, but it just wasn't enough to save it for me.
I received an e-copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. ...more
So Samantha Young is one of those authors for who I would read anything written by. So a short novella? I'm on it! And thWell...that was interesting.
So Samantha Young is one of those authors for who I would read anything written by. So a short novella? I'm on it! And this one was cute. I loved the beginning. The banter between Hazel and Liam was hilarious. And I agree with Hazel, Liam is a much better name than Brody. It seemed like this novella was heading in the right direction.
Then the overnight scene happened and everything was shot to hell. While the explanation that came later made sense, I feel like it was something that should have been brought up before any sort of hanky-panky happened. So for that whole thing, plus the instalove, I had to knock it down to three stars. ...more