Sexy short story about eighteen-year-old, Lindsay, who catches her boyfriend and best friend having sex at a party. Understandably upset, she takes ofSexy short story about eighteen-year-old, Lindsay, who catches her boyfriend and best friend having sex at a party. Understandably upset, she takes off and starts walking home. A car pulls up next to her, and what do you know? Here's the best friend's dad, who Lindsay has always had the hots for. Lindsay is a virgin to penetration, but she's by no means completely innocent. She's been playing around with the high school boys for awhile. Instead of accepting a ride from the friend's dad to her home she asks if she can go back to his. This isn't an odd request because she spends a lot of time there anyway with his daughter. What happens next is Lindsay getting revenge on her best friend in an oh-so-satisfying way - by having sex with the other girl's dad.
While the story is really short I didn't really feel like I was missing much. I would've preferred one particular thing to happen but the author kind of left it to the imagination and that's okay. It's well edited and the sex scene is pretty hot. I'm a huge fan of books with characters who have a substantial age difference so that was a big plus for me. Probably my only issue with the story as a whole is the exclamation point overload. Otherwise, a good read. ...more
This is an interesting ghost story with a twist. I found it completely by accident while on Amazon and decided to take a chance.4.5 stars, rounded up.
This is an interesting ghost story with a twist. I found it completely by accident while on Amazon and decided to take a chance. I'm glad I did. It's not at all what I was expecting. While the main character (Anne) has a couple of TSTL moments, they didn't really take away from the story as a whole.
Highly recommended if you're looking for a quick horror short. A very entertaining read.
Sexy little ménage story. The writing was good. The sex was seriously hot. I liked all the characters and the story as a whole.
I've read other reviewSexy little ménage story. The writing was good. The sex was seriously hot. I liked all the characters and the story as a whole.
I've read other reviews where people had issues with the editing. While I saw a couple of small typos, there wasn't anything that really stood out too bad. The blurb states that a few typos were fixed so I'll assume I got the better edited version.
I'd like to see where these guys go from here. With it being first in a series, there's still quite a bit to cover. Don't take that to mean this isn't a good read as is. It definitely entertained me. ;)
I'm not sure what the hell I just read. Sure, the title should've been my first clue. Just so you know, there's an actual reason behind that title. II'm not sure what the hell I just read. Sure, the title should've been my first clue. Just so you know, there's an actual reason behind that title. I dare you to read it to find out what that reason is. *grin*
I'll just throw out a few quotes and leave it at that -
"Engelbert Humperdinck was the first man to walk on the moon, who was the second?"
He penetrated my anal cavity in one massive thrust. Most other guys do it tentatively at first, slowly easing their way into the tight crevice of my bum.
I nearly choked on the girth of the thing, his cock was massive. But I got the job done and for my effort, I was given squirts from his mighty member. Squirts I must say I swallowed like a pro. In my mind, I dubbed it his stick of truth. Almost like Wonder Woman's Lasso of Truth.
There are a couple of quotes that I'm purposely not adding because, well, they're gross and not sexy in any way. There are some things I really didn't need to know. Just sayin'.
I'm not rating this because I honestly don't know what to think about it. I didn't hate it. I didn't love it. I guess I'm neutral. :)...more
Christian is a bear shifter who somehow ends up drugged and passed out on the balcony of a large rental cabin.3.5 stars
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Christian is a bear shifter who somehow ends up drugged and passed out on the balcony of a large rental cabin. Vincent (after a huge push from his best friend Mandy) goes to the Smokey Mountains for a ten day vacation and just happens to spot a sleeping bear on the balcony of his cabin when he arrives there in the middle of the night. When Christian wakes up in his drugged state, it's to the sound of someone screaming and then the sound of the cabin door being slammed shut. When he shifts, he knows he's scenting his mate... who just happens to be Vincent.
This is a cute shifter story. Things happen rather quickly for these guys and there are a couple of things that might have you shaking your head, but it's still a nice story. My only issue - and I know I sound like a broken record here - is that it's in serious need of a good editor or proofreader. The punctuation was a bit scattered and I had to reread sentences sometimes more than once. Otherwise, a nice, quick read....more
The blurb tells the story so I'm not saying much in my review. Ryan and his best friend take off on what they think is going to be an excitin2.5 stars
The blurb tells the story so I'm not saying much in my review. Ryan and his best friend take off on what they think is going to be an exciting spring break adventure. It turns out to be anything but. During a hike, a tour guide tells the story of the legend of a monster in the woods. Ryan decides to abandon the others and spend the night in an abandoned village in the woods in hopes of seeing something he doesn't actually believe in. Not only does he see the legendary monster, but he has a bit of fun with it (view spoiler)[and loses his virginity to it (hide spoiler)] as well .
Entertaining story for what it is. It's in serious need of editing or at least a good proofreader, but otherwise a decent enough quick read....more
(view spoiler)[The first thing I have to say about this short story is that it's #1 in a series and ends on a cliffhanger. I'm saying that right off b(view spoiler)[The first thing I have to say about this short story is that it's #1 in a series and ends on a cliffhanger. I'm saying that right off because had I known it was part of a series, I wouldn't have read it. While looking for a quick erotica short on Amazon, I made a point in skipping over all stories that stated they were part of a series. I wanted something I could read quickly and then move on to another. Instead, I read this having no clue (because it's not mentioned in the title or the blurb) that it was the first story, again, in a series. That's one of my pet peeves - when it's not listed anywhere. It also stops at 86% and moves on to excerpts from the author's other books. While I'm not bothered by excerpts (though I don't read them), it was frustrating to think I still had 14% to read to get to a resolution with this couple for it to just... stop.
I am perfectly fine with books where an author comes back later down the road and decides to do a follow-up or add more to the story of the characters. My issue (again, a pet peeve) lies when an author writes a story and publishes it with the knowledge right then that more will come later and chooses to label it as a standalone. (hide spoiler)]
Paradise Found is about two people who are married to others but take off for a weekend affair. The blurb states it's about cheating, so no big deal. I knew it going in. While I thought the story was okay for the most part, I was a bit confused in regards to a couple of things. The blurb mentions the clothing optional party on the beach. At first, that part made a bit of sense, but it didn't take long before I was lost. One was totally into what was going on with the other folks and the other wasn't... yet that's the one who initiated everything to begin with.
The sex is hot and written extremely well. I love good erotica and the author delivered with Bruno and Karen. I wasn't a fan of Karen, however. She came across as a bit wishy washy, while Bruno was straight-forward. There were no questions with him. Would I be interested in seeing how this relationship plays out? Possibly. I'm curious to see what happens when they go back home to their families. ...more
Sexy little story about a woman who gets more than she bargained from her two new college boy neighbors. Nice erotic short, if more than a ta3.5 stars
Sexy little story about a woman who gets more than she bargained from her two new college boy neighbors. Nice erotic short, if more than a tad unrealistic (view spoiler)[anal sex without any type of prep (hide spoiler)]....more
It had the makings of a decent story until the sex started. Names are all over the place, with the author switching them up more than once. I couldn'tIt had the makings of a decent story until the sex started. Names are all over the place, with the author switching them up more than once. I couldn't tell who was on his knees because one minute it was Chris and the next it was Brian (at the same time, I might add). The dialogue was just as confusing. There's also zero prep and bleeding ((view spoiler)[and double penetration - again, no prep (hide spoiler)]) but the 'assistant' had the time of his life? Yeah, I'm thinking not.
"I can taste Brian's veins, the sweat, the stink from my asshole - I can taste it all as Brian's breaths become short, and fast." <-I had to correct the spelling of two of those words.
I'm not rating this on the fact that the MC is a total douche bag. This is stated quite clearly in the blurb so I knew what I was going into before II'm not rating this on the fact that the MC is a total douche bag. This is stated quite clearly in the blurb so I knew what I was going into before I downloaded it on my Kindle. The blurb almost tells the entire story, other than detailing the instances where Pervy Peeping Vic actually watches the tenants in his apartment building having sex via cameras he had installed for that purpose, and watches some outside of it later. I am not even rating in based on the fact that (view spoiler)[young, naked boys are mentioned a few times and there was a part when Vic, at around twelve, watched a priest masturbating to two young boys having sex on a video.... a part of the story that was totally unnecessary, other than to show that Vic - and the priest - are sickos (hide spoiler)]. I'm totally rating this on the fact that even though it was a quick freebie, the editing was so bad that I couldn't make heads or tails of what I was reading. When I have to read the same line again and again and again just to try to figure out what the author is saying, I have a problem. Thankfully it was a quickie or it would have been a DNF.
The story is what it is. Disturbing, but like I said, I expected that going in. I don't mind taboo and there's very little I won't read. However, had the author done a quick read-through before hitting publish (and removed what was in the spoiler), it might have been an okay read....more
Christian has lusted after Logan for months and when his fraternity brothers bring Logan in as a new pledge, Christian is the one who has to "initiateChristian has lusted after Logan for months and when his fraternity brothers bring Logan in as a new pledge, Christian is the one who has to "initiate" the new guy. The only problem? Christian and some of his brothers are werewolves and Logan is completely unaware of this fact. Logan is left tied and blindfolded and it's during the full moon. Christian identifies himself as Lucas to the blindfolded man and gives in to the fantasies he has had for months. Unfortunately, Christian's control isn't as good as he thinks and he shifts in the middle of the act.
This is a really nice short. I love the way it ends and I am eager to see how the series plays out....more
A coach wants his quarterback, Max. Max is alone in the showers and there's no one else around. The coach makes his move and surprisingly Max is williA coach wants his quarterback, Max. Max is alone in the showers and there's no one else around. The coach makes his move and surprisingly Max is willing.
This story could have been a hot, little story had the word stud not been used repeatedly (no, it's not sexy) and had the story not just ended at 33% on my Kindle. It then went on to excerpts from the author's other work. I'm not one to normally read excerpts so I stopped at 33%. It was a freebie so I have no right to say anything but it was still extremely annoying....more
First, there's at the age of thirty-five and then farther down is This is a short story of a young man learning to mThe blurb threw me with this one.
First, there's at the age of thirty-five and then farther down is This is a short story of a young man learning to make decisions for himself, learn who he is and find love.
I'm not saying that thirty-five isn't young but normally when I see "young" I think early twenties. But the thing is, the thirty-five year old character actually acts like he's twelve most of the time. I've read a lot of books and I can honestly say that I've never seen a character who was so naive and unprepared for the world at thirty-five as this guy.
The story was relatively good, but I had a lot of Oh my God! No one is that naive! moments....more
A decent enough story that would have probably been more enjoyable had there not been major editing issues throughout. The characters are over the topA decent enough story that would have probably been more enjoyable had there not been major editing issues throughout. The characters are over the top and not one thing in this story is realistic.