Completely lost with this story. It constantly alludes to way too much background, things that apparently happened in the past, and I am not referring...moreCompletely lost with this story. It constantly alludes to way too much background, things that apparently happened in the past, and I am not referring to the previous two Bull Rider titles. On that aspect, I wasn't lost. What had me lost was when she was in a biker gang while being an undercover cop and a porn star or something...and her past affair with John. I felt this book relied so much on whatever went on in the past that I actually began searching for a previous book about her undercover work with John.
I didn't find one.
And some things didn't make sense. If John was around in book one, that was AT LEAST 9 months prior to Cassidy showing up to claim her son, but Cassidy had left John. So what was she doing in the meantime? And who uses their real name while trying to infiltrate an undercover biker gang? There's no reason her family should have seen her sexy photos. The timeline was weird.
Also, the whole preacher hitting on a woman thing made me uncomfortable. I thought it was just an undercover persona, but apparently this guy just discovered the Bible, for real. Seemed kinda dirty, tbh.
I did, however, like the lady bull rider in a men's division bit.
The ratio of stuff I liked vs stuff I didn't like though was off too much. (less)
I loved book one of this series and liked book two, but this one somewhat annoyed me.
The third Blood Blade sister is chasing after their former butler...moreI loved book one of this series and liked book two, but this one somewhat annoyed me.
The third Blood Blade sister is chasing after their former butler, whom she's been pining for for seven years. It's like this chick can't take a hint. He left you and never came back. He persistently pushes you away. I think it's time to move on, girl.
Despite all her bravado and heroic acts in the past as a vigilante/bandit, I found her to be weak, whiney, and well, bratty. When the object of her affections pushes her away--and trust me, she throws herself at him constantly--she begins dallying with a dangerous politician to make him jealous. Seriously? What are you? Fifteen?
On top of that, there were lots of unexplained things that bugged me as I kept reading. 1. How is Finn covering the tribal tattoos on his face? They didn't have laser surgery back then. Is he wearing makeup? *It's later revealed he is, but considering the makeup options they had back then...* This takes place just after the Civil War. They didn't have the makeups we have now. 2. If he can cover them so easily, why did he not cover them back when he needed legal employment? Or when he worked on a ship and had to avoid certain people because of them? If he can cover them now, he could have covered them then, and thus, avoided a life of crime. It just doesn't make sense.
I also have to add that the romance between these two was underdeveloped, perhaps because it happened in the past. We just know they love each other. We don't know why, what connected them in the first place, etc.
Though I disliked the first 35% of this, I finally began to like Lucy as the book continued--but I still think she's a stalker. I mean, she does stay here and harasses poor Finn. That is stalking. Anyway, she connects with Lilah, a former slave (Lilah needs her own book!) and starts a school for those less fortunate. Naturally, the Southerners aren't pleased with this and Lucy has to take on the Klan.
Lucy pulled out a shotgun and then reached up again for the ammunition. "I'm not letting anyone terrorize me on my own property. Let alone a bunch of cowards running around in their night sheets."
As the tale continues, with Lucy running after Finn, defending her school, and getting in the mess of all messes, she grows tougher and it all gets a bit more fun (especially when she fights bad men off despite the fact she's tied to a chair) and less irritating, but I stand by my previous complaints. I also hate how willing Lucy is to throw Lilah under the bus, 'cause that's what it is...
What a cute and entertaining read. I really enjoyed this historical story: a mixture of romance and western with some funny moments that had me chortl...moreWhat a cute and entertaining read. I really enjoyed this historical story: a mixture of romance and western with some funny moments that had me chortling aloud.
The plot: She's a Pinkerton agent. He's a Wells Fargo detective. But neither of them knows the other is what they are...instead, they suspect each other of being in cahoots with the Phantom gang. You could say they distract each other from finding the real Phantom--train and robber extraordinaire.
She's at the ranch where the outlaw is said to be hiding under the guise of an heiress to the woman who owns the place. He's posing as a cattle hand when he's not robbing trains...you just have to read it to see what I mean.
I think the mystery could have been stronger. That has to be my only quibble. While I hate knowing whodunit by page 5, some hints along the way are nice. The clues are so sparse or vague, they never led me to point the finger at anyone, which took some of the fun out of it for me. I like to be "Oooh, I know whodunit..." and then "Shoot! I was way off."
The romance and humor is clean. I appreciate that. Though a Christian romance, the book is in no way preachy. I appreciated that too. I learned some things about running a ranch--I seriously had no idea that salt could poison cows. I loved the heroine and especially the old lady running the ranch. Her brusque attitude, humor, and sarcasm made me laugh while at the same time hid a warm heart.
I'd like to add that while this is the third in a series, I never once felt lost. I hate it when I pick a series book and have to go dig up all the titles that became before it to know what in the world is going on. No problems here, at all. Matter of fact, I'd like to add a pleading note here for the author...
Please consider writing another series based on the detective agency that comes to be in the end. I'd like more adventures of the people involved. Please.
Book Babe aka Tara
And I'm going to sign off here by sharing my two absolute favorite parts of the story. I received this from Netgalley, so passages may be different in the final book.