I think Abe had the potential to be really hot, but he was just angry all the time. I liked how it started. He was head of security toEh, it was OK.
I think Abe had the potential to be really hot, but he was just angry all the time. I liked how it started. He was head of security to a prestigious family. The moment he laid eyes on Bethany he knew she was his. He sees that she is not like all the other richie, uppity high class people she is surrounded by. And when an engagement is arranged between her and a man who works for her father, Abe decides to take what is his. So he takes her.
He kidnaps her and then is continuously angry with her when she resists him. It was sort of annoying. Its a short story that basically takes place over one weeks time. It just didn't meet my expectations. Also, Abe sort of lost points with me when he pushed her to her knees and forced himself on her. That just doesn't seem like the best way to break down her defenses. I think it should have been the other way around personally... him on his knees if you know what I mean, I think that would be more effective in getting her to accept him....more
I'm really torn about this book. I enjoyed the story, I liked most of what happened. But I hated how it was written. I read the whole thing because II'm really torn about this book. I enjoyed the story, I liked most of what happened. But I hated how it was written. I read the whole thing because I was interested enough to know what happens to the characters, but I felt as though I was reading a story written by a high schooler.
Everyone was so immature, the things they said were corny and the characters were not very well developed. All the females could have been the same character. They all talked and acted exactly the same. The men were supposed to be big mafia bad boys, but it fell short for me. The hero actually yells out in the middle of a parking lot that he is a Russian mafia boss... I picture mob bosses having a bit more control than that, if they were all yelling to the heavens who they were, it would make law enforcements job much easier. Not to mention his girlfriend, who didn't know he was in the mob, heard all this but didn't really get it. She actually forgets he says this until her friend later reminds her and she decides she needs to ask him about it as if his yelling he was in the mob needed more clarification. She was kind of dense.
There were a lot of forgetful characters in this book... like when her best friend comes to town to tell her that her psycho ex boyfriend is out of jail and looking for her. But when she gets there they immediately start partying and it isn't until a full 24 hours later when the ex boyfriend makes his presence known that her stupid friend smacks her head and is like "Oh yeah, the whole reason I drove from Texas to Tennessee was to warn you that your ex, who wants to kill you, is out of jail. Like, duh."
That sort of stuff irritated me. BUT for some reason I couldn't stop reading it. I'm actually interested in the next story because the storyline is interesting but I can't do it. I can't read another story written in annoying first person with annoying random, rambling inner thoughts. ...more
This book made me love this series even more! But I have a hard time giving books like this a full 5 stars because they are not complete stories. TheyThis book made me love this series even more! But I have a hard time giving books like this a full 5 stars because they are not complete stories. They are parts to a book, and in a way that drives me crazy. They usually leave off in cliff hangers and if the next book is not out I want to scream... if they are as good as this story is anyway. I hate waiting, I want to finish the story now, not wait. So that aspect really ticks me off and I can't give it a full 5 star rating now matter how much I like the book.
At the same time though, the story wouldn't be nearly as dramatic if and compelling if it didn't have these cliffhangers at the end. And this one got me just as much as the last one did.
In this book we have a whole new Lily. She is not exactly who we thought she was in the last book. In this book she struggles to do her job and fight the feelings that are growing for Jake. She has to continuously tell herself it's not real, she's not Lily Hart, and this will not last forever. But more and more she finds herself wishing for forever with Jake Eden.
There's not much else to say that won't give away the ending to this book so I'll just end this review with a rant.
I can't believe I have to wait a freaking month for the next installment!! This is why I usually stay away from books broken into parts! UGH!...more
So, this was a book that was recommended between my friends posts on Facebook... I wasn't expecting much because so far the books from those little adSo, this was a book that was recommended between my friends posts on Facebook... I wasn't expecting much because so far the books from those little advertisements that have managed to suck me in have been disappointing. And even this book at first, I wasn't sure how I felt. There were times it felt rushed and I was still on the fence until I got to the last page.
Then I was hooked. I immediately downloaded the next book.
Jake Eden is the head of his family, the head of his organization and he is not easy to get close to. Until he meets Lily. She's a stripper in his club and from the moment he sees her, he it consumed. He is drawn to her and not only does he want her, he wants to keep her, much to his surprise.
Lily is troubled. She has suffered a great loss and is broken inside. Despite her emptiness, she too feels drawn to Jake and although fights it at first she can't seem to say no to him.
This book has dual POV's which I love. I love seeing Lily through Jake's eyes. Lily is secretive and closed off, even to the reader at times, so I enjoyed seeing her through another characters eyes. I also liked being in Jake's head because Lily had a prejudice view of him. She saw him as a gangster, who was closed off and untouchable. But bing in Jake's head let us as readers see more of him than he showed the outside world and it was almost like two different people. Jake's thoughts vs. his actions and words. Lily brought out a vulnerable side to him and I loved reading it....more
This is a book about best friends. Logan is the typical cocky, handsome, man-whore fighter. He is Unbreakable. But unbeknownst to his fans, UnbreakablThis is a book about best friends. Logan is the typical cocky, handsome, man-whore fighter. He is Unbreakable. But unbeknownst to his fans, Unbreakable, is already broken. He is broken on the inside and that is why he can never give his best friend Maxx what she wants. Max is in love with Logan and he knows it and if he admits it to himself, he loves her too, but he cannot allow his feelings for her to overrule what he knows. He knows that he comes from a long line of abusers and he will never let Maxx be touched by the curse that seems to cling to his bloodline.
This was sort of a frustrating book. The writing irritated me. All the reviews I read seemed to enjoy it, but I thought that it was weird. Paragraphs in bold were comments directed at you, the reader, from the characters in the book. I think most people found it funny, but I found it annoying. I started skimming when I got to those parts, because I didn't find it funny like it was intended to be.
(view spoiler)[ The other thing that sort of bothered me was that Logan KNEW how Max felt about him, and he wanted to protect her from himself basically. But then he paraded woman after woman through their house (Yes, they were roommates, along with their other two best friends) knowing that would hurt her. That ticks me off.
Then the whole plan that Maxx and her friend comes up with to get Logan's attention makes NO sense! She decides to mess around with him, basically do anything but sleep with him because she's sure that will get his attention. (And even that doesn't work, because she ends up throwing herself at him and he turns her down) So basically she gives him exactly what he wants... her, with no strings attached. In real life that would be Logan's dream come true, he wouldn't stop sleeping with other woman just because he finally got what he wanted. No he would think he hit the jackpot by having his cake and eating it too. It's ridiculous. The kind of thing that would get his attention is if she finally got some self respect and decided to put some space between Logan and herself. No more letting him cuddle up and spend the day in her bed after sleeping with some bimbo, or two, the night before.
Ugh it just annoyed me to no end. Because it wasn't realistic at all! (hide spoiler)]
Then when I'm finally getting to the end of the book, I'm ready for it to be done and wrapped up I get to the last page to find out that is NOT the end of the story. It's one of those books that has 4 or 5 other books following it. So to finish the story I have to buy multiple books with about 150 pages each. I can't stand that. And I doubt I will be buying the next book.
It wasn't a terrible book, the story sucked me in and held my interest the whole time. Xavier Neal is a good story teller, there were just too many things that annoyed me for me to really enjoy it. What really baffles me though is that this series- if you can call 150 page books a series- has some serious love. From readers, I mean. The reviews for this series were overwhelmingly positive and nothing but praise. Although I guess if you are going to pay for all these individual books, the last few books are probably going to be read by the biggest fans of the series, the people who aren't feeling it, me, have dropped off after reading the first or second book. I find it a bit of a rip off and it has to be seriously engaging to get me to but 4 short stories at $3.00 a piece.
So to wrap up, I kind of want to know what happens with Maxx and Logan, but I'm at the point where if he falls into bed with one more bimbo, and then Maxx acts like it doesn't bother her, I'm going to throw my kindle. And I'm pretty sure there will be more of that in the future books, based on reviews I've already read. So, no thank you. I like reading about women with a little more self respect.["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>["br"]>...more
This was recommended to me because of my love for Perfect Chemistry. I was so excited about reading it, I had planned on saving it for a trip I am takThis was recommended to me because of my love for Perfect Chemistry. I was so excited about reading it, I had planned on saving it for a trip I am taking to Florida in two weeks, but I couldn't wait. I started reading it and finished it in one day. I'll have to read something else on the way to Florida.
I was intrigued with the violence/knight in shining armor aspect of this book. I couldn't wait to get to that part and when I did get to it, it didn't disappoint. The story line was good but I thought there should have been more. For an $8.00 e-book, there should have been a lot more to read. It was way shorter than I was expecting and because of that I felt as though the relationship between Maddie and Ortiz was rushed. They went from being attracted to each other, to being in love in a matter of days/weeks.
I really liked her coworker Manny. I would have liked to read more scenes with him in them. I thought his character was so well written I could picture him very clearly in my mind. He had an extremely likable personality.
In closing, I enjoyed this book but at the end felt a smidge disappointed because it was over so fast. ...more
Keela was abducted by aliens and taken to an auction on another planet. Along the way she met a 10 year old girl who was certain her father was goingKeela was abducted by aliens and taken to an auction on another planet. Along the way she met a 10 year old girl who was certain her father was going to rescue her. When her father did show up to rescue her she asked him to take Keela with them.
Marruk couldn't ignore the attraction to Keela the moment he saw her. He also wanted nothing to do with the feelings that were stirring him every time he thought of Keela.
This kept me interested through the whole story, but when I was done reading it just felt like an ok book. Nothing really special, but not bad either. It was the typical alien book. I'm noticing a lot of them are just so-so with the same sort of story. Nothing really sets this book apart from the many others like this one....more