The good reviews for this book are baffling to me. If the world/plot is not original (vampire boy/human girl - angst-filled almost insta-love a la TwiThe good reviews for this book are baffling to me. If the world/plot is not original (vampire boy/human girl - angst-filled almost insta-love a la Twilight), a writer has be at least engaging. The plot is flat, the characters are flat. There was nothing here to grab my interest. It took a really long time to read. When I could normally get through a book for this length in a few days, this took me over a week because it didn't hold my interest.
If you're 16 or the love story angle is all you care about, this might be okay for you. It wasn't so awful I didn't finish it, but I will not pick up book 2. Too much insta-love and a cliffhanger ending are the least of the things wrong with this story. Luckily for me, this was Prime Library loan so I wasn't out any money, just time.
There were a lot of writer sinners here.. Mary Sue, insta-love, bad editing.
It's like the author couldn't decide what kind of Mary Sue she wanted. Ta There were a lot of writer sinners here.. Mary Sue, insta-love, bad editing.
It's like the author couldn't decide what kind of Mary Sue she wanted. Tall, leggy (!!) or small and tiny(!!). But, of course, she is a blindingly beautiful, street wise (oh poor girl!!) orphan with a special brain and special destiny. Every man wants her, they fight over her underwear (gross). The men are all much older than the teenage (underage) girl, which also kind of felt creepy.
I borrowed this via Prime Lending. I'm so glad I didn't waste any money. I did finish it so it wasn't so horrible it ended up in the DNF pile but a lot of that was to see how bad the trope-ish, Mary Sue insta-love was going to get. There wasn't a single thing here that would make me pick up book 2 or recommend this to anyone else....more
I liked this book a lot. Weirdly, a lot more than this type of book normally would appeal to me. I think it's because I've been reading a lot of self-I liked this book a lot. Weirdly, a lot more than this type of book normally would appeal to me. I think it's because I've been reading a lot of self-pub free Kindle books and just moving back into a professionally edited and strongly written story just infused me with giddy delight.
I will readily admit I picked this up for $3 in a book store sale. I wouldn't have paid full price for it and I've passed it by many times. But one of my friends recently starting singing Taylor's praises and, although the two of us don't exactly see eye to eye on what makes a good book, it did pique my curiosity enough to spend $3.
Taylor does really well in painting a picture. She draws you into Karou's world and makes spending time there worth the effort. There was a bit of drag in the middle but not enough to put me off. I'm off to find the next one....more
I'll say that I've avoided books billed as "romance" for a while now because it has gotten to the point where I can't handle, among other issues, theI'll say that I've avoided books billed as "romance" for a while now because it has gotten to the point where I can't handle, among other issues, the silly euphemism that they use. To me it's like softcore (we're acting like we're doing something but not really). Really? Fish or cut bait. Show me (or in the case of a book, tell me and please leave off with all the silliness. Rod, shaft..what? Are we talking about a man or a car? If you're grown enough to write about sex, you're grown enough to call it what it is. Otherwise, just infer they had a good time and they rocked each other socks off and move to the more important parts of the story.
So, knowing this about me, a friend told me I MUST read Hunter and this was a freebie. Well. Since I would be able to download it and if it's really bad, I could walk away without much investment, I was willing to try. Mostly I thought I was going to get a chance to tell my friend the book sucked and she should read Hearne. So, with nothing to lose, I was in. I didn't realize at first Hunter was a self-published writer. The formatting on the Kindle does have some issues and there were some clues in her writing but overall this was a nice read.
The things I liked: There wasn't really any insta-love. I don't have a problem with insta-love per se, but there aren't many writers who can do it well. No "steamy" sex scenes where I started eye-rolling at the descriptions. Beatrice was a nicely spunky heroine with her own ideas and she didn't scream Mary Sue. She had a her own plans for her life and I was glad they weren't abandoned because she found a man to take care of her. She came across as slightly flawed with some rough patches but not broken looking for a man to glue her together. The world building was interesting. The editing was much, much better than most self-pub. And I'd consider reading her other work.
The downside: Most of Hunter's secondary characters aren't really fleshed out well. She made the major error (imo) of having several characters using the same phrasing. I get that people tend to parrot each other, especially if they're friends. But in this case, they weren't friends and for a writer, this is an easy way to give your character his or her own unique voice and personality. Also she left the story completely opened-end, slightly cliff-hangerish. This is one of the biggest pet peeves I have in the reading world. The story doesn't have to be "finished" but there needs to be a tie-off, so to speak. A place to pause and feel satisfied with the book you just read while waiting on additional installments. A cliff hanger or open ending feels (to me) like a way to try and keep a reader interested. A writer's work should stand on its own merits and his or her talent alone should be what draws me back instead of a cheap hook of no resolution.
That being said, Hunter is several books into this series already so I'd consider the next few books in this series. On any new series, I'd let her get a few books in before I started reading, knowing what I was facing. ...more
because people (who will remain unnamed to protect the guilty) kept posting about it. It had some nice action and theI got sucked into reading this..
because people (who will remain unnamed to protect the guilty) kept posting about it. It had some nice action and the plot moved well. There was a lot of YA cliche going on but I am a sucker for a strong female protagonist. I'm debating number 2 and if I'm willing to pay for it....more
I thought this was a really solid effort and I enjoyed it enough that I'll read the next is what is obviously going to be a series.
The world buildingI thought this was a really solid effort and I enjoyed it enough that I'll read the next is what is obviously going to be a series.
The world building was done really well.I like the the author's take on juju, root magic and hoodoo (which is not voodoo as almost any Southern coastal resident will tell you). I like that the romance in this was not a driving force in the plot. It was a very secondary element. The dysfunction of the family, power struggles, back stabbing hooked me and kept me turning the pages.
After you read enough of genre, things get predictable to a degree and there were some very predictable things for this book but there were a few surprises at the end for me as well.
I hadn't seen any marketing for this book before I read it. I did see some links with Sookie Stackhouse after I read it and I hope the publisher doesn't go full on with that angle. There is nothing really Sookie like in this book and it deserves to stand on its own merits. ...more
I'll admit it. When I picked up this book, I didn't want to like it. It was for a group read and I got dragged into this selection kicking and screamiI'll admit it. When I picked up this book, I didn't want to like it. It was for a group read and I got dragged into this selection kicking and screaming. Kicking AND screaming. Like a baby. The strikes against it where numerous, in my very considered opinion. First time author, her subject touched on a complex time of social unrest, she is a white woman writing from a perspective of color. How could she overcome all of that? I knew it was going to be bad.
Although it has some minor issues, it was a thoroughly enjoyable story. Stockett sucked me in and kept my interest, from beginning to end. Not many writers can say they have done that. Skeeter's narrative moved the story along well although I wish there had been more of Aibilene and Minny. The contrast of their characters and how they handled the obvious and subtle forms of racism that surrounded them were believable and kept me up late to find out how their story would end.
So, this isn't the first time I had to eat humble pie and it won't be the last. Mea Culpa. ...more
I still love these books but the big battle scenes at the end just drag sometimes. For this book, it dragged big time. Oberon is my favorite and he isI still love these books but the big battle scenes at the end just drag sometimes. For this book, it dragged big time. Oberon is my favorite and he is usually missing for the big finale, I guess that why it does drag for me bit during these scenes. Hearne can still make me laugh and it was still a fun read....more