Self-Editing for Fiction Writers got recommended on the Facebook group for the Northwest Independent Writer's Association, of which I am a member. SoSelf-Editing for Fiction Writers got recommended on the Facebook group for the Northwest Independent Writer's Association, of which I am a member. So I decided to check it out. By and large, I'm glad I did. I've now written and released five novels, and I've worked with a couple of different editors. And a lot of what I see in this book lines up pretty well with what my best editorial experiences have taught me about my own writing.
Because yes--whether you're planning on querying to traditional publishers or going indie, your work will require an edit pass. Probably multiple edit passes. And if you can't afford to hire your own editor, and/or you don't have handy immediate friends with editing skills in your social circle, you will have to do that editing yourself. This text could do you well as a how-to guide for tackling the job.
Here are some of the things the book discusses that I've learned about in my own editorial experiences: minimizing dialogue tags, and when you actually do need one, it's okay to use 'said', really; minimizing use of dialect for effect, and techniques to capture the cadence of a character's accent without making him or her unreadable; using action beats instead of dialogue tags to convey who's speaking, and how; and all the various ways to think about handling point of view.
There are a lot of exercises in the various chapters as well, on which you can practice. I skipped those, just because I've actually gotten in a fair amount of editing practice at this point, working with my own stuff. But if you haven't edited yourself or someone else's work before, you might try those and see how valuable they are for you. Me, I'll be buying myself a copy of this for reference, now that I've read the library checkout copy. Four stars....more
Ancillary Sword, book 2 of the Imperial Radch series, is not quite as awesome as Ancillary Justice--but that's not actually a bad thing, since "not quAncillary Sword, book 2 of the Imperial Radch series, is not quite as awesome as Ancillary Justice--but that's not actually a bad thing, since "not quite as awesome as its Hugo-winning predecessor" is still pretty freggin' awesome.
In book 2, we're picking up pretty much right where book 1 left off. Our protagonist Breq has been handed a Mercy and its crew, and has been tasked to protect the Athoek system. While doing that, she has to juggle dealing with a new lieutenant who's not the baby-faced young officer she appears to be, the potentially hostile officers and crew of the larger ship Sword of Atagaris, making peace with the sister of one of her slain officers from when she'd been Justice of Toren, class conflict on the space station and planetside--and the risk of angering the alien Presger when one of their diplomats is killed. And all of this is happening under the shadow of the threat of civil war across the Radch--by which we mean, war between the factions of the Lord of the Radch herself.
There's certainly no shortage of action, to be sure. At no point in this story was I ever bored. However, by comparison to book 1, I found Breq's jumping around from event to event in this plot less focused. There's no one particular big problem she has to solve in this story, and this gives everything a definite "middle book of a trilogy" feel. Given how book 1 ended, I came out of this one with an overall impression of the Lord of the Radch having just shunted Breq off out of the way, and a hope that the real action would pick up again in book 3.
So is this one Hugo-worthy? Unfortunately, I'm not convinced. It's really good, but that's not quite the same thing. It doesn't really break any new ground that Ancillary Justice hadn't already covered, and the lack of specific focus to the overall plot detracts from this book's ability to stand shoulder to shoulder with its predecessor. Still, though, I enjoyed this immensely and will be eager to snap up Ancillary Mercy once it comes out later this year. Four stars....more