Not voting because I don't care, I'm up for anything!
The thing that irked me the most about the book was the repetitive "darling" and "kitten" language that Lucas used towards Sascha. Blech. I know it's a completely tiny issue, but he just kept saying it over and over and it was so not attractive.
The writing was OK, the story was pretty cool although I'm not a big fantasy reader and I struggled to follow / accept the mind barriers and traveling on the PsyNet.
Sex scenes definitely get a thumbs up, could have used another one or two towards the end.