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4170 A common device you use, almost without fail, is to introduce a minor charecter and then use them later in the story. I was wondering what became of Aral after losing to Bingle in the final duel in the magicians king. I realize she was a minor charecter, but I feel like her sword, will and fighting style kept me wondering how she would come back to fill in her veil of mystery.

In countless ways your stories have been my best friends, your stories have become the golden standard for what I look for in fantasy to date. Thank you for your elaborate detail to creating systematic worlds of fiction. I am still depressed though that Quentin had to go home, even though it is the right ending.

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